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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Of the First 3 movies, Which was your Fav?
  Jae Onasi
09-16-2006, 11:00 PM
#162
RotJ, hands down, because the good guys finally win. Luke finally gets to be a Jedi, Han's not a carbonite cube, the Emperor's turned into a bunch of floating electrons. Wicket beats Jar-Jar any day, and using a stormtrooper helmet as a musical inst...  [Read More]
Posted in: [AU]Darth Yoda:The Power of The Dark Side
  Jae Onasi
09-25-2006, 9:45 AM
#17
The grammar and spelling in this last chapter is greatly improved. Having a beta-reader is A Good Thing. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darth Revan - Return of the Dark Lord
  Jae Onasi
09-23-2006, 9:40 PM
#22
Ooh, the treachery, training Grivis to kill Bastila....So very Sith. :) Please decrease the length of the 'dashed lines' in future chapters/fics. It stretches the pages out too much for those of us using lower resolutions. It drives readers crazy to...  [Read More]
Posted in: King Of The CEC?
  Jae Onasi
09-22-2006, 10:37 AM
#6
Also, to the Mods, I'm sorry if this Thread is breaking the Rules (It isn't a popularity contest btw). It's not breaking any Forum Rules (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=169078). However, even if you may not perceive it as a popularity...  [Read More]
Posted in: Which Should I Use?
  Jae Onasi
09-22-2006, 10:44 AM
#4
If you're going for something new, experiment with 1st person. Just know that you'll have to be very careful about how things get done, because the only way for the reader to know something is if your main character sees, hears, or experiences someth...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Duel: A Legacy of the Force Story
  Jae Onasi
09-26-2006, 9:45 AM
#33
Edit: Jae, you just love to prove me wrong in any possible way, don't you? :p I honestly didn't see your post before I put mine up--I was writing mine while you posted and I didn't refresh the thread before posting it. Must have been the Force at wo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Duel: A Legacy of the Force Story
  Jae Onasi
09-26-2006, 1:34 AM
#31
"Long" is the understatement of the century. My outline is 2 pages long. I wrote about 8 pages today, and got about 1/3 of the way through the outline. I'm hoping work's a little light tomorrow so I can get a lot done. I need to send it out...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Duel: A Legacy of the Force Story
  Jae Onasi
09-24-2006, 11:57 AM
#16
Fictional character--yes, unless Tysy says otherwise. @Emperor Devon--Feats like Acrobatic, Ambidexterity, Fame, Spring Attack, Infamy, Mimic, Frightful Presence, Surgery, Starship operation, Zero-G training. They have Force feats--the standard on...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Duel: A Legacy of the Force Story
  Jae Onasi
09-24-2006, 1:04 AM
#14
Also helps if you've done fencing and martial arts yourself. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Duel: A Legacy of the Force Story
  Jae Onasi
09-23-2006, 11:08 PM
#11
Jolee and Talin are joining in with Jae. I'm working on my story. Emperor Devon--do you want to generate the character stats via the TSL character generator and adjust up to level 18 by KSE, or use the rules in the SW core rulebook--I can post the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Brazilian Psychic sent letter to Bush Sr. in 1989 foretelling the WTC attacks
  Jae Onasi
09-22-2006, 11:34 AM
#20
And why is it psychics never win the lottery?...  [Read More]
Posted in: How do you write your chapters?
  Jae Onasi
09-21-2006, 4:31 PM
#5
I use Word. The spell checker does a good job of finding my spelling errors and typos, but I usually ignore the grammar check. I let it run in case there's some major weird grammar goof, but otherwise I click the 'ignore rule' button more often than...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars: CSI Na Shadda
  Jae Onasi
09-20-2006, 10:25 AM
#9
Mixing CSI and SW is rather fun. A technical point--disruptors don't fire bullets, so there'd be no bullets to search for. I had a little trouble getting caught by some of the grammar. Consider reading it out loud when you finish writing it. I rea...  [Read More]
Posted in: Jedi Knight: Jedi Master
  Jae Onasi
09-21-2006, 9:16 PM
#18
No problem john. I don't think I can be bothered to continue with this. Sorry all. I need to come up with a good Fic and continue with it. It might take a while. Once again I apologise. Jae Onasi, could you please close this. Thanks. Closed per auth...  [Read More]
Posted in: The hunt for the greys.
  Jae Onasi
09-17-2006, 10:43 AM
#10
Hello! Welcome to CEC and LF! Hope you enjoy. Feel free to check out the stickies--if you have a tip to share in one of those threads, please do! If you have any questions, you can PM any of us moderators. I like your intriguing story idea--there...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The True Teachings IV: Fate of the Future
  Jae Onasi
09-25-2006, 9:50 AM
#82
I've been following this story and enjoying it--the entire series in fact. I'll have more time to comment more in a few days when I have a big report done. Keep it up--the plot is great....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Threads of an Old Order
  Jae Onasi
09-16-2006, 1:04 PM
#10
Interesting take on the Revan revelation. Yeah, I didn't like Carth getting killed either, but it's his fic, he gets to write it the way he likes it. :) Watch the language, Revanscool. It's a PG-13 forum. If I see a lot of swear words/expletives I'l...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
09-25-2006, 9:38 AM
#192
I spend all that time sending you pages worth of cut content, and I don't get an ounce of acknowledgement at the end!? :p Fantaboulistic job on Return From Exile, mach! This has easily been my favorite fic in all the CEC and KFM. :thumbsup: The end...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
09-23-2006, 9:25 PM
#175
Thank God Goto's dead, finally. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC:] KotOR III: Attack of the Obsidian
  Jae Onasi
09-19-2006, 4:14 PM
#8
You have a nice story going. A word on italics--it's used to indicate something a character is thinking, not what the character is saying. For dialogue, just use normal text with quote marks. Double check your grammar. Some of the sentences get a l...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Other]StarWars: Diddies
  Jae Onasi
09-23-2006, 9:50 PM
#49
Standing there Right in my door Wondering why I never asked about the free food before The Wookiee smells like dirt The Twi’lek, a mouthy little thing And Revan and Carth have their little fling :rofl: "Free food" :lol: And since I actu...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  Jae Onasi
09-25-2006, 7:15 PM
#25
Sure!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
09-25-2006, 8:10 PM
#402
A bit about statistical analysis: Every now and then I feel a bit depressed. With all of the fiction I have written here (Six) I have always felt a little, I don't know, depressed. Bear with me, I have been drinking (Not a lot.) and I was wondering...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
09-23-2006, 1:32 AM
#398
The worst is that the bank started out completely unsympathetic. Their comment was that 'if' we could prove fraud, we 'might' get our money back. In addition to all the steps on preventing fraud, I'd also find a new bank in that case. When someone s...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
09-22-2006, 2:21 PM
#390
I looked at the dates/categories of the 3 kfm submissions--looks like they all could have been for the Sept. '05 Duelling circle challenge on 'Crossovers' (crossing Kotor characters with some other story/movie, like putting Kotor characters in the Pi...  [Read More]
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