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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Jae Onasi
08-23-2006, 6:12 PM
#517
Hi! Welcome. Yep, Coruscant Entertainment Center always welcomes new stories and art. @Emperor D--Hotel Asylum always has room for more. :D And I like cats, too. And dogs. Just not those little ankle-biters. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Regarding My Fic
  Jae Onasi
08-30-2006, 2:20 PM
#4
I hate to do this to you, Yaggles, but I have to close the thread. You ask a great question, but it needs to be asked in your fic thread. PM me if you have any questions. Thanks! Edit: I agree with Ambrose--write for yourself, because you enjoy maki...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  Jae Onasi
08-31-2006, 1:27 AM
#8
:D Love the kids dressing up HK. Giving Revan sanctuary in the Avalon system is an interesting solution. I had never thought about the possibility of Revan being wanted by systems, though when I think of it now, it's pretty obvious. So Lilah's going...  [Read More]
Posted in: Fanfics
  Jae Onasi
08-28-2006, 12:24 PM
#3
^^ It depends on the mood I'm in, I guess. If I want to read just the story, the Archives are definitely better because it's a clean read and much less jumping around to get to the next chapter. My story went from something like 400 posts in CEC dow...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Trooper
  Jae Onasi
08-27-2006, 10:49 AM
#4
Hello Ambrose! Welcome to LF and the CEC fanfic section. Feel free to check out the resource stickies and ask questions or leave your tips for others. I like the start of this story, as well. I like how you used little details to make the scene c...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie Fic] Memories Do Help
  Jae Onasi
08-25-2006, 10:40 AM
#4
JM12 worked hard on this--this was the 3rd version that I saw, and each one got better. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The True Teachings III: Slumbering Army
  Jae Onasi
08-29-2006, 12:14 PM
#17
Cool story. I have so much going on in Real Life right now I'm not able to give as much attention to people's fics as I'd like to, but I caught up on yours today. None of these issues are big deals, btw--it just looks that way because it takes time...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The True Teachings III: Slumbering Army
  Jae Onasi
08-23-2006, 2:19 PM
#3
The Light side does not stand a chance against this new duo. The Lenari race is fascinating. I hadn't thought about how the Rakata came to be, and this is an interesting answer....  [Read More]
Posted in: star wars the return of the mandalorians
  Jae Onasi
08-22-2006, 11:25 PM
#3
Hello big daddy! Welcome to the forums and the fanfic section. Hope you have fun writing here. There are some good resources in the stickies like Tips to a Good Fanfic, the Expert Forum if you need help with something or if you have a tip to share...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Survival of Darth maul
  Jae Onasi
08-22-2006, 12:07 AM
#3
Hi darthzam! Welcome to the forums and the fanfic section! Hope you enjoy writing here. There are some good resources in the stickies like Tips to a Good Fanfic, the Expert Forum if you need help with something or if you have a tip to share with eve...  [Read More]
Posted in: [K1] Carth's Cloths I, II, III
  Jae Onasi
08-23-2006, 9:35 PM
#14
Oh, cool. Another excuse to start a new game. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Lone Free Mercenary
  Jae Onasi
08-20-2006, 9:44 PM
#14
I'll be interested in seeing where you go with him. No worries if it's short or long. As long as you're enjoying writing it, we'll be here reading it. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Achaicus
  Jae Onasi
08-20-2006, 9:39 PM
#10
Cool start. Don't wait _too_ long to let us know what fate has fallen Stephanas. I don't know if I can stand the suspense. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
08-24-2006, 3:04 PM
#83
good work, mach. i know that i don't comment much in this area, but i felt it might be necessary after all the 'collaborations', hehe. :D Quoted for emphasis.... I know you put a lot of work into that, and it looked good....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
08-24-2006, 1:39 PM
#78
Oh, no--430 characters? Ugh. Your break-off point worked perfectly, however. I love the cop's dialog at the end. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
08-22-2006, 2:35 AM
#67
I think he's mentioned in another thread going through an agent to sell it through legal channels appropriately so I thought I'd pass that on in this thread....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
08-21-2006, 2:18 PM
#60
This is from the Guide to User Made Stories (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=151033) 2. just remember to watch/edit the language and don't post anything sexual related beyond kissing. and to avoid conflicts, no homosexual-related stories...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
  Jae Onasi
08-29-2006, 10:27 PM
#90
Very interesting to see how Anakin manipulates Tysy and makes something evil sound like he's doing something good....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
  Jae Onasi
08-28-2006, 11:46 PM
#86
We'll just have to see, eh? :) Nice job--I could see Tysy's anguish at Anakin's fall....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Elliot's Story
  Jae Onasi
08-29-2006, 12:27 PM
#43
You know, it never occured to me that there'd be vampires in the SW universe, but have fun with it. I caught some grammar things, no big deal. It'll be interesting to see where you take this story next. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] My first attempt (Be Gentle)
  Jae Onasi
08-25-2006, 3:15 AM
#38
My goodness, I go away from this thread for a little while and I come back to tons of chapters. Cool! Story is coming along quite nicely. For the latest--I have some of the same issues with my action sequences. My beta-reader told me it was because...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  Jae Onasi
08-28-2006, 4:45 PM
#51
Nice job. I liked seeing the character development of Ashira and Obi-wan both, and I liked that it _didn't_ end in an expected kiss. The touch on the hands was just enough. The bad thing--it's done.... :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  Jae Onasi
08-23-2006, 9:57 PM
#45
Cool chapters, JM12. I like the fight scenes here. Sorry I haven't been able to comment a lot--I had a crazy situation come up with my volunteers, and it took tons of my time. Did you decide on a slightly different writing style from your HotG seri...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Dark Apprentice: Holowan Consortium - Released
  Jae Onasi
08-23-2006, 10:47 PM
#154
hmmmm, that's strange. I don't remember seeing her there. I'll start a new game a use the tips here. Thanks She's standing in the grass right next to the info console (the one where you get the map of the area) right near the entrance to the Ithor...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Dark Apprentice: Holowan Consortium - Released
  Jae Onasi
08-22-2006, 3:10 AM
#148
I just installed the DAHC 1.00.23 Everything looks cool and I like all the additions. I just have a couple of questions. Of course I'm Dark side, went to Telos and then to Nar Shadda(and completed it). I ran up on Nomi Sunrider there and walk up to...  [Read More]
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