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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation Resources
  Jae Onasi
09-16-2006, 10:40 AM
#4
Heh, I changed the dictionary section accordingly. :D If you all find any good sites, I'll add the urls to the list above (with credit to whoever finds them) so that everything's in one place and people don't have to search through the thread to fin...  [Read More]
Posted in: Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation Resources
  Jae Onasi
09-15-2006, 11:03 AM
#1
machievelli and I talk a lot about spelling, punctuation, and grammar. That's not because we're trying to be mean or snobby. It's because problems with spelling and punctuation make it much harder for people to read and understand your fics. If we ha...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Lost of the Jedi [short humorous fic]
  Jae Onasi
09-15-2006, 9:43 AM
#4
Love the punch line. :) Welcome to CEC! Feel free to check out the stickies for more info and to leave tips of your own. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me or another moderator. Whenever you want to put something in the Jedi Archives, the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Imperial Commando Tie-In Story
  Jae Onasi
09-14-2006, 4:45 PM
#9
Hey Jacki, welcome to the forums, and welcome to CEC. If you have any questions, feel free to ask, or you can PM me or the other moderators. There's some good resource stickies at the top of the page in this forum--you're welcome to contribute your t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Evidence
  Jae Onasi
09-07-2006, 12:43 AM
#2
"Improper disposal of remains--79 counts"--loved the over-the-top number. :) Consider shortening down the first 3 paragraphs of 'data streams'--I found it a little challenging to track visually (the long strings of numbers in particular),...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Lord Special Edition
  Jae Onasi
09-12-2006, 11:21 PM
#21
Give it a little time, Pottsie. Think of it as challenging yourself to see how you can make each chapter even better....  [Read More]
Posted in: My Next Project
  Jae Onasi
09-05-2006, 2:05 AM
#2
Do both. Just not at the same time. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Holowan No Porting Rule Questions?
  Jae Onasi
09-05-2006, 2:37 AM
#9
With respect, it doesn't matter what other companies and games allow. It's what LucasArts allows for Kotor and TSL. If LA says no porting, then that's the rules we all have to follow here....  [Read More]
Posted in: Holowan No Porting Rule Questions?
  Jae Onasi
09-04-2006, 4:38 PM
#5
I imagine that Obsidian got LA/Bioware's express permission to use/leave some of that in the game. That may have showed up in some contract with Bioware and/or LA. And they're giving their source credit, obviously. Let's turn this around--say you c...  [Read More]
Posted in: my poem...
  Jae Onasi
09-04-2006, 12:52 AM
#5
I like some of the imagery. No worries about the double thread....  [Read More]
Posted in: Which Malus?
  Jae Onasi
08-31-2006, 4:20 PM
#3
As long as there's positive discussion on why you've picked a choice and it doesn't turn into some kind of popularity contest, I'm fine with it--other mods may disagree, however, because there's a range of opinions on this kind of thread. And, I thi...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The True Teachings III: Slumbering Army
  Jae Onasi
08-31-2006, 3:15 PM
#24
"scrapheap" :lol: (I feel Jae's presence. She won't like to see Luke get angry and burst out. :() Naw, never said I didn't like it. Surprised, maybe. But it's your vision of Luke, not mine. :) So, do we get to hear why Han's there in th...  [Read More]
Posted in: Garfield
  Jae Onasi
09-01-2006, 7:39 PM
#11
Love Peanuts (esp. the WWI Flying Ace Snoopy ones), The Far Side, Garfield, and Calvin and Hobbes....  [Read More]
Posted in: Lone Free Mercenary
  Jae Onasi
09-10-2006, 5:54 PM
#25
It's hard to write about bad guys and make them the protagonist. It involves building in some redeeming qualities and generally a lot of humor. It's really hard to do that (which is why I won't do a bad guy fic personally--it'd be too much work for m...  [Read More]
Posted in: How many people really use LF?
  Jae Onasi
09-01-2006, 7:59 PM
#33
No, I'm not here.... Hey LFers, "it's me Mr. Bunny, not a plastic explosive or anything...." :max: (with apologies to Caddyshack :) ) Yes, I visit here with some regularity....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
09-11-2006, 1:44 PM
#157
My wife jokes about it all the time. If telephone Psychic are so good, why don't they call you to tell you you need help? :rofl: Um, because we, uh, want them to fully understand they have a problem, and the only way to do that is if they call us,...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
09-11-2006, 11:13 AM
#155
t isn't like they had a Jedi hotline, :lol: "Thank you for calling the Jedi hotline. This is Jedi Jane. I sense through the Force that you are Joe Raniskran. How may I help you?" I thought the battle scenes in the last ch were a bit rus...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
09-09-2006, 5:32 PM
#148
I'm afraid HK will do the 'bot equivalent of spitting on their graves. :) Glad jury duty's over for you. I've been swamped with this crazy crisis in my history group that has created some of the ugliest politics I've ever seen--I've put in about 20...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  Jae Onasi
08-31-2006, 2:17 AM
#110
Oddly enough yes. Was I that obvious? And here you thought people weren't reading your stories. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: STAR WARS The War of the Dead
  Jae Onasi
09-15-2006, 10:05 AM
#58
Hey connor, I read through this, and you're making some progress in your writing, which is great. I think you've got some good ideas with your story. However, I'm having a tough time understanding what you're trying to say, and while the readability...  [Read More]
Posted in: Poster Above You
  Jae Onasi
09-01-2006, 11:20 PM
#31
^ That's my hubby. :) I don't hold his love for the Cardinals against him, however. :xp:...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Lord
  Jae Onasi
09-02-2006, 10:32 PM
#193
There are ways to critique, and there are ways not to critique. I disagree with the style of critique that is offered on that particular forum. You catch more flies with honey than vinegar. However, that's their choice. It's also a Pokemon site and n...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Other]StarWars: Diddies
  Jae Onasi
09-10-2006, 2:20 PM
#33
:rofl: "Crammed in a seat on the Ebon Hawk" and "Nine in a room on the Ebon Hawk" had me just howling. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Homosexuality & Same-Sex Marriage
  Jae Onasi
09-13-2006, 11:23 PM
#149
Homosexuals are born, or developed at a young age the feeling of being sexually attracted of their own sex. If god does exist, and he indeed made all of us then it would be very hypocritical and morally wrong for him to create a Man or Woman that was...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
09-15-2006, 5:25 PM
#385
I was speaking of the exact same thing. I was reminded reading the section of the Princess Bride duel between the man in black and Inigo Montoya name dropping 16th century styles as they battled. I was thinking more along the lines of scenery, sound...  [Read More]
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