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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Jae Onasi
07-21-2006, 10:29 AM
#431
Enough of the "Name Game" peepz... sorry, but if users want their real names displayed.. they'll do it on their own ;) ChAiNz.2da = partypooper :xp: I'll join that partypooper rank right along with you. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Jae Onasi
07-19-2006, 10:52 PM
#426
Happy Birthday, mimic. Small world--I used to live in Topeka. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Jae Onasi
07-19-2006, 4:33 PM
#423
but first, i'm on a quest to locate FFWM12, Jae, Pottsie and Niner's real names. i wanna see who all are threatening me at the CEC :D help wuld be appreciated, though i'll search on my own, too. With Jimbo off in the military now and then, I don't l...  [Read More]
Posted in: Never Trust a Hutt: Travels of Kavar Part One
  Jae Onasi
07-27-2006, 9:02 PM
#12
I'm a big fan of Kavar, so I'm happy to see a fic about him. I write my fics in Word (any word processor will do) and run a spell check on mine before I post it here. Also, put line breaks between each new speaker and when you start a new paragraph...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] In His Service, or "Ya--Yevo'"
  Jae Onasi
07-23-2006, 11:22 PM
#7
I like the description of your character--I felt out of breath right along with her. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars: Assassination Protocols
  Jae Onasi
07-25-2006, 10:43 PM
#36
“Oh no!” HK said, distressed. “I’ve been meatbagized!” That was too funny. I had a little bit of a tough time believing that the mercs 'forgot' about Xan when he was right in front of him, but that was the only thing that jumped out at m...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Archives
  Jae Onasi
07-27-2006, 8:34 PM
#16
Putting a "The End" tag at the end of the fic has been extremely helpful. I almost moved a fic, saw it didn't have a "The end" at the end, and held off on moving it. Sure enough, the author wasn't done with the thread yet. I check...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Archives
  Jae Onasi
07-24-2006, 11:45 AM
#14
It could be worse. You could look like Odan-Urr, Jedi Librarian. :) Now _there's_ a look my hairdresser wouldn't want to repeat, though the cape is kind of cool. :) Thanks, everyone. @RC--I'm OK if my name's not bolded, italicized, colored, or an...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Archives
  Jae Onasi
07-23-2006, 5:33 PM
#9
BTW: is Jae a mod? or just a normal forumite with Force powers?[/jolee] ;) Jae as a 'normal forumite'. There's a novel concept--I don't think anyone's ever called me normal before. :D Thanks....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Archives
  Jae Onasi
07-23-2006, 12:47 AM
#5
P.S. Congrats to Jae Onasi, The Chronicler of Coruscant! ;) Hehe. Thanks. Chronicler works for me. With Kreia and Atris as examples of TSL's vision of Archivists, I'm not sure I'd want to be one of those. :) It will be nice to view a 'clean' versio...  [Read More]
Posted in: Fanfics by Author
  Jae Onasi
07-22-2006, 3:03 AM
#1
This is a list of fanfics in the Archives by author. I'll list them alphabetically by first letter of the first word in the 'name'. For example, the name 'Jae Onasi' will be listed under 'J' instead of 'O'. AkumaSF Eternal Darkness (link) (http://...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darkness Rising
  Jae Onasi
07-25-2006, 10:01 PM
#59
Nice story going. Every fic you write seems to improve in terms of descriptions, dialogue, and grammar....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
07-25-2006, 10:51 PM
#97
Yeah, I know. I just try to put the action before the description, it's important to me that my chapters aren't boring to the readers. They don't have to be mutually exclusive. In fact, being descriptive can make the action even more exciting, becau...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2006!
  Jae Onasi
07-26-2006, 2:07 PM
#52
Please, please, let's get back on topic.... Pottsie, it's OK to set the categories and leave them that way. I wouldn't change them too much more or add a lot more, or it'll get very confusing....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2006!
  Jae Onasi
07-21-2006, 10:24 AM
#33
and i believe stinger has also written one? i'm not really sure. its been a while. @ Jae: got your votes ready yet? :D Got a lot of reading to do still. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2006!
  Jae Onasi
07-21-2006, 12:35 AM
#31
I believe Jedi Knight 707 has a sequel. machievelli has a a fic and a sequel, both of which are excellent....  [Read More]
Posted in: Galactic Conquest II: Rebel Rebound
  Jae Onasi
07-23-2006, 11:44 PM
#84
Heh, most of the time I comment that people aren't being descriptive enough. Yours does not have that problem at all. I feel like I'm in the middle of everything right along with Jake. You could try to make the fighter sequences a little longer--it c...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  Jae Onasi
07-19-2006, 5:59 PM
#88
Anyone know the name of Admiral Dodonna's ship, if there is a name for it?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Betrayal and Retribution: Percieved Reality
  Jae Onasi
07-25-2006, 10:09 PM
#35
Aw, man, you gotta do a sequel and bring her back. :) I enjoyed the imagery and the internal struggles both Jeez and Miranda faced....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
07-27-2006, 3:59 PM
#190
I liked the little Force conversation. Always nice to know the ones you love are supporting you. I liked the weaverbird thing--made me feel like I was in a jungle, and then when it stopped singing because of the darkness there, I thought that was a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
07-26-2006, 11:06 PM
#181
Ah, you know I'm just dying to know if Carth makes it back in time to see his baby get born, almost as much as wanting to see what happens during the battle between Kirabaros and the Blood King. :D Wrath of Khan line--Khan says to Kirk "Revenge...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
07-26-2006, 3:31 PM
#178
The battles with Eomeros and Serena were exciting--loved the 'just put your feet down' line while she was in the water. It's very Star Wars to have a bunch of little guys cooperate to take out the Empire's soldiers, even if Ewoks were a little too cu...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
07-23-2006, 3:08 PM
#166
Cool. I like both chapters. I had a little bit of trouble with his nausea thing--I wasn't sure if that was a force bond thing sharing Revan's 'morning sickness' or if it was something he was experiencing as an angsty response to his new role and his...  [Read More]
Posted in: MacLeodCorp (W.I.P.) New!
  Jae Onasi
07-19-2006, 7:32 PM
#56
Hang in there, Mac....  [Read More]
Posted in: What should KotOR3 be called?
  Jae Onasi
07-27-2006, 10:48 PM
#121
KOTOR 3: Revan is Dead And The Exile Too! :xp: KOTOR 3: Revan, Exile, and Everyone Else is Dead, but Don't Worry, We'll Just Resurrect Them!...  [Read More]
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