Good chapter. This opens up the plot a bit more.

Sorry if nobody likes this really short Chapter, but it will create a new Story for Mira later. I wasn't going to do this, but I had bad Writer's Block, trying to bring Mandalore back. I'll do that next. Anyway, here it is.

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Chapter V
Hanharr’s Survival
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Anger flowed through the Wookiee, Hanharr’s mind. Anger at the Exile. Anger at the Jedi. And anger at the one who accompanied the Exile. Mira. Why did she spare him? Why? She could have easily killed him on Malachor V, when the moment was right. Because of her decision, Hanharr had a new goal. To kill Mira once and for all. His question was how to kill one such as her. He thought he was free, from the old woman, but now he had a new leader. His new leader was an ex Jedi Knight from the Mandalorian Wars. His name was Zor Krel. Hanharr remembered his confrontation with him, prior to the destruction of Malachor V.

*****
Hanharr watched as Mira walked off into the vast darkness of Malachor V, leaving him alone. As soon as Mira vanished from his sight, Hanharr could hear the sound of hands clapping from behind him. Hanharr immediately turned around to see a Human. He walked towards Hanharr.

“Excellent Wookiee, excellent,” He said, “Well played.”

Hanharr growled angrily at the man.

“What do I want?” The man asked, “I’m Zor Krel, an Immortalis, not a Human, though I do look like one. I think I’ve found my new employee.”

Hanharr growled and asked the man what he was talking about.

“You hate that woman don’t you?” Zor asked, “I can feel your anger rising within you and I can feel your anger begging to kill. I have a proposition for you my friend.”

*****
Now Hanharr was on the way to a forbidden mining facility, near the Unknown Regions. There he would wait for Mira and the Exile to arrive at the mining facility.

*****
As Hanharr’s “lent” ship approached the mining facility, he noticed that the mining facility was known as Station 5. According to Zor, Station 5 was a mining facility for the lava Planets, Mustafar and Sarapin. How could that be though? Both Planets were near the Republic, not near the Unknown Regions. Hanharr forgot the question and his ship stopped. Station 5 wasn’t a pretty sight. It looked like an asteroid, that had just been under attack. There were bodies everywhere, broken mining Droids and even faulty power. How Hanharr would have loved to have wrecked the place. He knew that he would soon be killing though. Hanharr went to the detention centre and prepared himself for the task at hand.

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Aye it's good, and I'll give a better comment when I'm not so nervous (I have a job interview today:whacked: ).

Edit: As JM12 pointed out, Jaden is behaving a little oddly. And does everyone use the shall in the Star Wars universe? Keep up the good-tacular work. :)

P.S. I didn't get the job.

Uh oh. Just remain calm Hall. They are not that bad, at least not as bad as presenting in front of several hundred people.

Pottsie: This is and interesting story so far and a nice turn of events after the destruction of Malachor. That bit about the no volunteers was interesting. Those comments he said to Brianna makes Jaden seem a bit perverted. What's up with that?

Good luck with your Job Interview Hall. Anyway, Jaden loves Brianna, so that maybe why Jaden loves her so much. He can be a bad man when he wants can't he? Anyway thanks for the comments all and I'll try to get the next Chapter out as soon as possible.

Nice chapter! But I have a question. How could Hanharr stand up to Mira and Jaden since they are both Jedis? Oh and Jaden can be bad, because girls like bad boys!!!!!! Lol! Jk!

Nice chapter! But I have a question. How could Hanharr stand up to Mira and Jaden since they are both Jedis? Oh and Jaden can be bad, because girls like bad boys!!!!!! Lol! Jk!

Hanharr will only see Mira. Jaden has never met Hanharr and he never will. Also for those who haven't played TSL, Hanharr is one tough Wookiee and he is the toughest Non-Jedi Party Member in the game.

Good one, altough short. A new side story, how fun.

Nice story going. Every fic you write seems to improve in terms of descriptions, dialogue, and grammar.

Haven't read this one in a while, but I see things are progressing quite well. Keep up the good work.

This chapter was very good. It is aiding the development of the story.

Thanks for answering my question. But I bet Mira could sill beat the beans out of him! Lol! Don't stop updating!

Thanks for answering my question. But I bet Mira could sill beat the beans out of him! Lol! Don't stop updating!

I won't stop updating, don't worry. At the moment, I'm concentrating on the Entertainment Center Awards 2006. As the host, it is important to add new catergories for the Awards and I'd like to thank Jason Skywalker for his suggested two catergories.

Go Jason :king1: :clap2: :D :roll1: (Have no idea who that is.)

I like :). Can't tell much about the story yet but it seems like an interesting story so far, I'll definately be reading this one.

Oh, and the story with Visas and Briana was kind of weird but I guess the Exile can be bad sometimes cant he?

yeah, somewhat like the Star Wars version of archie :D. now all we need is Visas to be a blonde XD.
any news on the updates, Pottsie?

yeah, somewhat like the Star Wars version of archie :D. now all we need is Visas to be a blonde XD.
any news on the updates, Pottsie?

I'm hopefully near the end of the next Chapter. I'll get it posted as soon as I can. RC, I don't think we'll see Visas blonde. I don't even know if she has any hair. Also I thought you didn't have TSL.

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Chapter V
Mandalore’s Return
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Clan Ordo leader, Mandalore waited for Jaden and his friends to approach him. Mandalore felt pleased with his accomplishments over the past fortnight. Clan Ordo had increased its number of Recruits and the base was being rebuilt into a much stronger fortress for the Mandalorians. Mandalore felt that Clan Ordo was stronger than it was during the Mandalorian Wars.

“It’s a pleasure to see you again Mandalore.” Jaden told him, bowing towards him.

“Likewise,” Mandalore told him, bowing back to him, “Kelborn told me that the Ebon Hawk was landing, so I knew who would be coming.”

“It wouldn’t be anybody else eh?” Atton asked.

Mandalore ignored Atton and returned to speak to Jaden.

“Come with me,” He told Jaden, “I need to talk to you in the privacy of my chambers. Your friends can wait out here.”

Mandalore led Jaden through the base and soon they ended up in Mandalore’s private chambers. It was a big room. It was as big as the Ebon Hawk’s main hold.

*****
Outside, Atton and Zor walked around the base, looking at all the Mandalorians practising their fighting techniques.

“Wow,” Atton said, “It reminds me of my Echani days.”

“Right.” Zor muttered.

Zor felt anger towards the Mandalorians. Because of them, his master died and because of them that he had become a twisted tool of evil. Soon Atton had led them both to the Mandalorian Battle Circle coach.

“You must be friends of the Exile,” He said, “Feel free to watch or participate in the Battle Circle.”

“We’ll watch thanks.” Atton told him.

Atton and Zor watched the many battles taking place in the Battle Circle.

*****
“So why are you here?” Mandalore asked.

“I… No the Republic needs your help.” Jaden told him.

“My help?” Mandalore asked, “Why?”

“Well actually, the Republic needs all the Mandalorian support we can get,” Jaden told him, “The True Sith have returned and they will soon have the fate of the Galaxy in their hands.”

“So what does that have to do with me and Clan Ordo?” Mandalore asked.

“Right now, the Republic hardly has an army to help them,” Jaden told him, “I thought that the almighty Clan Ordo might be able to assist.”

“Well I’d have to talk to the Republic Admiral and sort things out, but I’ll be glad to assist.” Mandalore told Jaden.

“Thank you Mandalore,” Jaden told him, “I’ll call Bao-Dur and tell him to get the ship started.”

*****
Zor felt his hand grab his Lightsaber. He felt like igniting it and killing the Mandalorians. Now he had to wait for the right moment. He noticed Atton talking to the Mandalorian Battle Circle coach and Zor knew what his first target was. Kill the Mandalorian Battle Circle coach. Zor immediately felt himself leap up, high into the air, preparing to crash down onto the Mandalorian Battle Circle coach. However before he could strike at him, Atton blocked Zor with his yellow Lightsaber.

“What are you doing?” Atton asked angrily.

“Don’t you see?” Zor asked angrily, “The Mandalorians are scum! We must kill them all and place their heads on sticks to show to the Galaxy!”

“You’ve got a sick mind!” Atton shouted at Zor and immediately pushed him backwards with his Lightsaber and then he let his Lightsaber crash onto Zor’s left leg.

It left a burn in Zor’s left leg. Zor yelled out in pain. Atton laughed slightly.

“Surely it can’t hurt that bad?” Atton asked.

“What’s going on out here?” Mandalore asked angrily.

“Mandalore, the Exile’s friend tried to kill me, but this guy saved me.” The Mandalorian Battle Circle coach told Mandalore.

“Who Atton?” Jaden asked.

“Don’t sound so surprised.” Atton told Jaden.

Jaden started to feel angry. He couldn’t afford the Mandalorians to despise him now. Not while the Galaxy was under threat.

“Atton take Zor back to the Ebon Hawk,” Jaden told him, “Mandalore and I shall catch you up.”

Atton decided to do what Jaden said. He knew when Jaden was angry. Atton put away his Lightsaber and grabbed Zor by his arm tightly. Atton left with Zor and Jaden returned to speak with Mandalore.

“We better be off.” Jaden told Mandalore.

“I agree,” Mandalore said, “Everything shall be fine here and Kelborn has already had his share of leading experience. Let’s go.”

Jaden and Mandalore left the Mandalorian base, hoping to catch up with Atton and Zor.

*****
On the Ebon Hawk, Visas was meditating alone in her dormitory. Little did she know that Brianna was standing in the doorway. Visas immediately stood up, because she could sense Brianna’s presence behind her. To be honest, it made her feel a little uncomfortable.

“Do you want something?” Visas asked.

“You know why I’m here,” Brianna told her, “It’s about Jaden.”

“The Exile?” Visas asked, “What about him?”

“He isn’t an exile anymore,” Brianna told her, “I found out that you love him also.”

“I don’t know what you’re talking about.” Visas told her.

“You and him were about to kiss each other.” Brianna told her.

Visas thought for a moment. Then she remembered the day that Jaden had protected her from Zor.

“Listen to me Brianna, I have no feelings for him, I never have,” Visas told her, “We’re just friends, nothing more. I’ve never loved him.”

Brianna started to get angry. This was the first time anyone had ever loved her in her life and now she felt like she was in a competition with Visas over Jaden. She didn’t even know if Jaden loved her.

“Okay Visas, I believe you for now,” Brianna told her, “I don’t want to lose him, because of my love for him and I don’t want anything to threaten our relationship. If I catch you two together again, it may break my heart.”

Brianna left the room and Visas decided to return to her meditating. Perhaps it was best if she didn’t speak to either Jaden or Brianna.

*****
Atton and Zor returned to the Ebon Hawk. Zor was really angry with Atton. He didn’t know why though. Maybe it was from that burn or maybe it was when he tried to kill the Mandalorian Battle Circle coach. Atton took Zor to the cockpit of the Ebon Hawk.

“Why did you bring me here for?” Zor asked angrily, but he felt his voice grow softer.

“To talk to you,” Atton told him, “What were you doing and what’s the matter with your voice.”

Zor looked at him.

“What are you talking about?” Zor asked.

Atton sighed.

“Don’t give me that,” Atton told him, “I worked for the Sith Lord Revan once and I became a Sith Assassin under his command, I think I know how to interrogate people.”

“I…” Zor shouted, as he started to stagger backwards, “I also worked… for Revan. I… never met any… Atton Rand there though.”

“I was known under a different identity then,” Atton told him, his voice growing angrier “And I won’t give you the pleasure of knowing it.”

Suddenly Zor slipped backwards onto the floor and a yellow beam of light shot out of his mouth. It lit up the whole of the cockpit of the Ebon Hawk. Atton was wondering what he was seeing in front of him.

“Are you okay Zor?” Atton asked.

He didn’t reply. Bao-Dur ran to the cockpit, looking at what was happening.

“I haven’t seen anything like this, since the Mandalorian Wars.” Bao-Dur told Atton.

“What’s happening?” Atton asked.

“He is being reborn,” Bao-Dur told Atton, “He will have a new voice, a new face and a slightly different personality. It is cheating death, as I call it. That is why his species is called the Immortalis.”

The beam of light suddenly stopped and Zor returned. However, his face was different. His hair was also different. Instead of the old long, untidy black hair, he now had short dark brown hair. He tried to speak, but his voice had become much more gruff, showing a sign of old age.

“My rebirth,” He told Atton and Bao-Dur, “I think I’m okay.”

Atton didn’t say anything. He just backed out of the cockpit, leaving Bao-Dur alone. Zor suddenly felt ill and started coughing. Bao-Dur picked him up.

“I’ll take you to the medical bay,” Bao-Dur told him, “I’ll treat you as soon as I can.”

*****
Jaden and Mandalore finally arrived. They entered the Ebon Hawk and Jaden ran to the cockpit. He set the course for Telos. Mandalore entered the cockpit.

“The old ship doesn’t change much.” Mandalore commented.

“Well, I’ve been too busy for spring cleaning,” Jaden told him, “Goodbye Dxun and hello Telos. I hope we don’t leave anyone behind.”

The Ebon Hawk took off from Dxun and sped off to the next destination. Telos.

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Hello all, this is a new Fic I plan to write soon. It will be set after TSL and will star the Exile, Jaden Lennon (Named after my idol John Lennon from The Beatles). He is a Jedi Consular and will also be a Jedi Master (When I get to that stage of the game). I've currently started a new game with him and plan to start writing this Fic as soon as possible. One question though. Should he had a blue Lightsaber or a green Lightsaber?


blue. definietly.

blue. definietly.

Bit late to post about that now. Talking of Lightsabers, here is what the Ebon Hawk Crew have in terms of Lightsabers.

Jaden Lennon (The Exile): Green Lightsaber
Atton Rand: Yellow Lightsaber
Bao-Dur: Double-Bladed Blue Lightsaber
Brianna the Handmaiden: Double-Bladed Silver Lightsaber
Visas Marr: Red Lightsaber
Mira: Two Purple Lightsabers
Zor Krel: Red Lightsaber

Good one. Nice to know the saber colors. Also, thanks LordRevan. :D

Nice chapter. I especially like how you show Zor get out of control. I was surprised that Bao-dur popped out of nowhere to explain about the Imortalis. That rebirth thing, did you base that off the legend of the phoenix?

Nice chapter. I especially like how you show Zor get out of control. I was surprised that Bao-dur popped out of nowhere to explain about the Imortalis. That rebirth thing, did you base that off the legend of the phoenix?

Thanks and I'll explain somethings.

1. Bao-Dur was working around the Ebon Hawk and let's just say he was in the main hold, he could hear Atton worrying over Zor.

2. The rebirth thing was slightly based on the legend of the phoenix and the other half was based on the regeneration on Doctor Who.

I hope I've explained everything to you.

I agree with JediMaster12. It got pretty exciting when Zor did his rebirth thing! I honestly was expecting him to blow up! lol!

Thanks for the comments. I may end this Fic soon, as it is near the end now, but it is only something to be set in between TSL and KOTOR III (Whenever that comes out or if it ever does).

I've got two ideas for new Fics, so don't worry. Ideas are listed below:

1. A descendant of Revan (Who is Female, because I want to try something new) has a mission, which if she succeeds she will become a Jedi Knight and little does she know the threat that she has to find. It is set eight years before TPM.

2. This second idea is a lot like RC's HK Fic, but instead it stars T3. It could become a Trilogy, of T3's new adventures. This first one would be set ten years after ROTS.

Suggest which idea I should pick and why. After a small tally I shall write it.

I am so sad that it is almost done. :ball: :cry8:

Sad to know that fic is almost over. I choose the first but i have and idea. A fic about yourself, like Jan is writing and i will. Your choice though.

if youre doing a T3 fic, i suggest you research all you can about what happens to him so that you can set your story in the correct storyline.

if youre doing a T3 fic, i suggest you research all you can about what happens to him so that you can set your story in the correct storyline.

I just looked on Wikipedia on T3 and it said that T3's fate was unknown, other than taking the Exile into the Unknown Regions to find Revan. I'll come up with a good excuse though. I think I'll do the T3 story. The working title at the moment is Tales of T3.

i'm suddenly getting the odd feeling that i've heard that particular name somewhere. did you think it up?

i'm suddenly getting the odd feeling that i've heard that particular name somewhere. did you think it up?

No, I saw it as a suggested name for KOTOR III in an Unknown Regions Thread.

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Chapter VII
Alone Again
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Carth noticed the Ebon Hawk landing in Dock Module 2. Finally the Ebon Hawk and her crew were finally here.

“Lieutenant Grenn, please escort the Exile and his friends to my office.” Carth told Lieutenant Grenn.

“Right away Admiral.” Grenn told Carth.

Grenn left Carth’s Office and ran to Dock Module 2 to greet the Exile and his friends.

*****
Jaden got out of the Ebon Hawk. Atton, Bao-Dur, Brianna and everyone else, except Mira had decided to come. Mira had wanted to go to Nar Shaddaa. She said there was one left Bounty to do, before she could forget about her past. Even Zor decided to come, even though he was still in pain from his rebirth. Grenn arrived in Dock Module 2 to greet them.

“It’s a pleasure to see you all again,” He told them, “Admiral Onasi is expecting you all in his office.”

*****
Bastila went to speak to Carth.

“Is he here?” Bastila asked.

“Yes,” Carth told her, “The Exile has finally arrived. He has brought his whole crew with him too.”

Bastila sighed.

“What’s the matter?” Carth asked.

“I remember when Revan did similar things,” Bastila told him, “I miss him a lot.”

Carth put his hand on Bastila’s shoulder.

“We all do.” He told her.

“Carth, I’d appreciate it if you didn’t call the Exile the Exile anymore,” Bastila told him, “He is no longer an exile. He is Jaden Lennon, one of the greatest Jedi Knights in the history of the Jedi.”

“That is his name?” Carth asked, “Was he friends with Revan?”

“At one time yes,” Bastila told him, “Before he was exiled. I doubt he would care about him anymore.”

“I’m sure he still does Bastila,” Carth told her, “Trust me, I’ve seen a lot worse.”

“I suppose,” Bastila said, “I must speak with Jaden after your discussion.”

“Okay then.” Carth said.

The door opened and Jaden and the others were here.

“Grenn you know the drill.” Carth told him.

“Right away Admiral.” He said, leaving the office.

“I best leave too.” Bastila told Carth.

As soon as Bastila left, Carth spoke.

“It is great to see you all again. Especially you Jaden.”

“How did you know my name Admiral?” Jaden asked.

“A friend told me,” Carth told him, “At this point, the Republic is well on it’s way to becoming great again.”

“I don’t think so Admiral,” Jaden told him, “I had the same vision as Revan had five years ago. About the True Sith.”

“Was it as bad as Revan’s dream?” Carth asked.

“Worse,” Jaden told him, “The True Sith are becoming stronger, feeding on the Force itself, plaguing those who feel the Force.”

“What does that mean?” Carth asked.

“I must find Revan and help him confront them.” Jaden told Carth.

“Okay,” Carth said, “However, your companions are staying here I believe.”

Jaden seemed confused. Were they? Was this something Carth had organised? Was it something everyone else wanted to do? Or was it the fact that they had all become bored of him after two months of travelling together?

“Are all my companions staying?” Jaden asked.

“I don’t know,” Carth told Jaden, “Bao-Dur has agreed to stay on Telos to help with the Restoration Project…”

“I need to speak with Admiral Onasi.” Mandalore interrupted.

“I need to go back to Nar Shaddaa,” Atton told them, “There are some old friends there who might consider helping the Republic.

“Atris has called to me, through the Force,” Brianna told them, “She wants something for me to do.”

“So you’re all abandoning me?” Jaden asked, feeling slightly upset at the fact they were leaving him, “What about you Visas? HK? T3? Zor?”

T3 beeped silently. Jaden knew that T3 was saying no.

“Are you kidding?” Zor asked, “I’m injured and need rest.”

Jaden sighed. Everyone was leaving him.

“Statement. I may consider staying with you Master.” HK told Jaden.

“Really?” Jaden asked.

“HK, I could gladly use some assistance here on Telos.” Bao-Dur told him, a little too overconfidently.

“Query. What for Meatbag?” HK asked.

“Well, let’s just say that many people want to have me killed and I will need someone to…” Bao-Dur started.

“Statement. Deal Meatbag!” HK shouted.

“What about you Visas?” Jaden asked, hoping that somebody was going to stay with him.

“I felt a disturbance in the Force,” She told Jaden, “On Katarr, I must go there.”

Jaden sighed. Kreia’s predictions of the future were coming true. Did that mean Mira would die too? Jaden had to find out. He knew that she had gone to an old mining facility, near the Unknown Regions. He had to find her and stop her. Maybe Kreia was also right about Jaden going into the Unknown Regions to find Revan. It might be the last time, he ever saw his friends again.

“Okay then,” Jaden told them, “This maybe the last time I’ll see you all. Brianna, I just want to express my feelings towards you and I want to do it in front of all my friends.”

Brianna walked towards Jaden. He grabbed her around the waist and pulled her in for a long kiss. There was big reaction from everyone. The main reaction was from the Droids though. Jaden could hear T3 beeping wildly in excitement.

“Statement. Master, please get a room!” HK shouted, “I think I’ll have to erase these last thirty seconds now!”

Eventually Jaden pulled away from Brianna and whispered something to her.

“I’ll miss you Brianna. There is one last thing I want you to do for me. Rebuild the Jedi Order on Coruscant. The dark side of the Force is rising and the Republic will need all the assistance that they can get.”

Before Jaden could leave, Brianna whispered something to him.

“Anything for you Jaden.”

Jaden smiled and walked off. Little did he know that Bastila was following him.

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Nice chapter! Are you going to kill Mira of?

Really good one, pity that the fic is almost ending.

Really good one, pity that the fic is almost ending.

Don't worry, I shall make the end better than The Sith Lord. I have it all planned out and I'm writing it out now. I don't want to spoil anything, but three people will die in this final Chapter. I won't reveal who and I don't want anyone guessing as it may wreck the Fic for others. It maybe a bit too obvious though.

Ok Pottsie. Can we guess in spoiler tags?

Ok Pottsie. Can we guess in spoiler tags?

I would let you, but I want to keep this secret until the end. Don't worry, I won't abandon this Fic, so near the end.

Well, at least the ending will be better than The Sith Lords. I am so mad because KOTOR II will probably be on xbox 360! :(

Well, at least the ending will be better than The Sith Lords. I am so mad because KOTOR II will probably be on xbox 360! :(

KOTOR III, LordRevan123. I hope it is on PC, because I don't have an Xbox, but I hope it would be on PS2, because then I wouldn't have to worry about requirements to have on the PC. The last Chapter shall be posted as soon as possible.

Sweet chapter. I look forward to the last battle. Perhaps before you post I can beta read it for you and help in terms of description. Up to you however.

Sweet chapter. I look forward to the last battle. Perhaps before you post I can beta read it for you and help in terms of description. Up to you however.

Sure. You've been one of my greatest advisors over Fanfics. The others have been Jae Onasi and RC.

Actually JM12, I've declined your offer. Feel free to say whatever here though. All the electronics, shut itself down for no reason and then came back on again. Anyway here is the next Chapter.

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Chapter VII
The Final Battle
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Jaden sat at the cockpit of the Ebon Hawk. So many thoughts plagued his mind. Thoughts about his friends, thoughts about his past and thoughts about his future. All of these three things would affect his future. He knew this was true.

“Jaden.” A voice called.

Jaden stopped to listen to the voice.

“Who’s there?” He asked.

“Bastila Shan,” She told Jaden, entering the cockpit, “Do you remember me?”

Jaden thought for a moment and he suddenly remembered her from when he was training as a Jedi, almost ten years ago. He had practised duelling with her and he had even helped her on missions.

“Yeah I remember you,” Jaden asked, “What are you doing here?”

“I needed to speak to you.” She told him.

“Why didn’t you say back on Telos?” Jaden asked.

“I would, but you were busy at the time,” Bastila told him, “Listen, I wish to join you and Revan.”

“Bastila you can’t,” Jaden told her, “The Jedi Order needs to be rebuilt and I seriously doubt my friends efforts to do it on their own.”

Bastila put her hand on Jaden’s shoulder, comforting him.

“They’ll be fine,” Bastila told Jaden, “Now where are we going?”

Jaden returned to the controls of the Ebon Hawk and looked at their current location. They had just passed Dantooine.

“We’re on our way to an old mining facility, just on the edge of the Unknown Regions.” Jaden told her.

Suddenly a blaster shot hit the Ebon Hawk, causing it to rock slightly. It reminded Jaden of the last time he and his friends had been shot down.

“What was that?” Bastila asked.

Jaden looked out of the window. A Republic fighter was attacking them. But how? Why would someone from the Republic attack Jaden? Jaden knew this wasn’t right. He sped off, hoping to avoid the fighter.

*****
Mira walked into the detention centre of Station 5. This was were the Bounty was. She wondered who the Bounty was on. It must be someone who could hide well. Mira had her hands on her pistols, being aware of the environment around her. She had left her Lightsabers back on the Ebon Hawk, for she could never trust them. A good pistol was a lot better than a glowing stick to her. Mira could feel heavy breathing on the back of the neck. She immediately turned around to see her worst nightmare.

“Hanharr!” She shouted, “What are you doing here?”

Hanharr growled at her.

“I’m the Bounty?” She asked, “No, this isn’t right, you’re the…”

Hanharr growled at her again, telling her that this time he would win against her in the duel that he should’ve won on Nar Shaddaa.

“Bring it on!” Mira shouted, getting out her two pistols.

*****
“Do you think we’re alright?” Bastila asked.

“I think so,” Jaden told her, hoping that nobody else would attack them, “Let’s get to that mining facility.”

Jaden drove the Ebon Hawk forward, hoping to save Mira’s life.

*****
Hanharr got out his two vibroblades and ran towards Mira. Mira did the same, shooting Hanharr, but he seemed to endure all the incoming shots. Hanharr sliced through Mira, injuring her badly. Mira fell to the floor, shouting in pain. Hanharr silenced her by stabbing both his vibroblades through her heart. Hanharr roared out victory and pulled his vibroblades out of Mira.

“You are one sick twisted Wookiee.” A voice said.

Hanharr turned behind him to see a hooded figure. It looked like a Jedi. This must be the Exile, Hanharr thought angrily.

“I’m sorry were you expecting someone?” The man asked, taking off his hood, “By the anger I sense in you, I think you were expecting someone, a little younger.”

Hanharr started to feel angry and he growled at the man, asking him who he was.

“Who am I?” The man asked, “Surely you must have heard of me. I’m Revan.”

Suddenly he ignited his blue Lightsaber and threw it straight into Hanharr’s heart. Hanharr roared in agony and fell to the floor, landing next to Mira. Revan used the Force to pull his Lightsaber out of Hanharr’s body. He put his Lightsaber away.

“Well done Lord Revan,” A voice said, “You’re as ruthless as always and you’ve just removed a very big problem for me. Now I won’t have a moving carpet following me for the rest of my life.”

Revan turned around to see a man with short dark brown hair.

“You were using this Wookiee?” Revan asked angrily, “Wookiees are people too!”

“Ah, this Wookiee, known as Hanharr was born to kill,” The man told Revan, “And die too. My name is Zor Krel. I once served under you during the Mandalorian Wars.”

“I can’t say I remember you.” Revan told him.

“Don’t think too hard my lord,” Zor told him, “I shall make your death quick and painless.”

Revan reached for his Lightsaber and ignited it.

“Not if I have anything to say about it.” Revan told him.

Zor ignited his Lightsaber and ran towards Revan.

*****
The Ebon Hawk landed in Station 5. Jaden prepared to leave the Ebon Hawk.

“Jaden, you can’t possibly go by yourself.” Bastila told him.

“Trust me, I’ve done worse,” Jaden told him, “Wait here.”

Jaden walked off, hoping to save Mira and find Revan.

*****
Revan and Zor had been fighting for five mintutes. Revan immediately blocked Zor’s strike and Revan used his strength to force Zor to the floor. Revan smiled and tried to stab him, but Zor rolled over to the side, causing Revan to fall over. Zor saw this as his chance to injure Revan and he slashed at his body, then he slashed at his arm. Revan shouted out in pain. Zor smiled to himself and he circled around the wounded Revan. He circled around him at a slow speed, like a Kath Hound when it has found it’s prey. This was were Revan would die, a most painful death. The bloodshed tonight would be the living Force that Zor would feed on.

“Say goodbye to your life, Lord Revan, my old friend.” Zor told Revan, preparing to bring his Lightsaber onto Revan.

“Zor!” A familiar voice shouted.

Zor immediately turned around to see Jaden.

“What are you doing here?” Zor asked angrily.

“I’m here to stop you from killing Revan,” Jaden told him, ignited his Lightsaber, “I knew there was something strange about you when you joined me, but I didn’t bother thinking about it.”

“It’s a good thing you didn’t,” Zor told Jaden, “Otherwise you would’ve figured it out.”

“What out?” Jaden asked, “Wait a minute, you shot my ship down the first time on Korriban and you were shooting at my ship awhile ago.”

“Well done Jaden,” Zor told him, “You’ve finally figured it out. I used you. I’m a Sith. And I’m now the greatest Sith in the Galaxy.”

“Not if I can help it Zor!” Revan shouted, then he looked at Jaden, “Take this Lightsaber friend!”

He used the Force to guide his Lightsaber to Jaden and Jaden grabbed it. He used both Lightsabers to attack Zor. Zor was very good defensively. He could see things before they happened. That would work to his advantage. Jaden knew that he would slip up though. Both Jedi and Sith weren’t that great. Zor immediately used his Lightsaber to destroy Jaden’s Lightsaber. This left him with Revan’s. Jaden blocked all of Zor’s incoming hits, focusing on his next move. Jaden brought his Lightsaber down onto Zor’s, hoping to force it out of his hand, but Zor had a strong grip. Zor then kicked Jaden in the crotch and cut off his arm. Zor then used the Force to push Jaden backwards. He landed on Revan.

“Prepare to say goodbye Revan, Jaden,” Zor told them, “I shall feed on the Force gladly tonight.”

But before he could do anything, both Revan and Jaden could see a Lightsaber stuck through his body. Zor didn’t say anything. He just looked at his body to see the tip of a yellow Lightsaber sticking through him. He turned around. Revan and Jaden noticed that Bastila was there. She pulled her Lightsaber back to her. It was a Double-Bladed Lightsaber. Zor yelled out in pain and fell backwards, falling into the bottomless pit below.

Bastila ran towards Revan and Jaden and helped them up.

“Thanks for saving us Bastila.” Jaden told her.

“Bastila, it is so good to see you again,” Revan told Bastila, kissing her, “But what are you doing here?”

“I want to help you,” Bastila told him, “You and Jaden.”

“You can’t Bastila,” Revan told her, “You must help rebuild the Jedi Order.”

“Exactly what I told her.” Jaden commented.

“I’ve waited four years Revan,” Bastila told Revan, “I couldn’t wait anymore. I love you Revan.”

“I know you do,” Revan told her, tears falling from his eyes, “You must help Carth, help the Republic, rebuild the Jedi Order. Only you can do this. That is how you can help me, do you understand?”

Bastila nodded, tears were falling from her eyes, like Revan.

“I understand Revan,” She told Revan, “But let Jaden help you. He is strong with the Force and he once served you during the Mandalorian Wars. He has had the same visions as you had four years ago.”

“Okay Bastila,” Revan told her, “Listen, take the Ebon Hawk, I…”

“We.” Jaden interrupted.

“Okay, we won’t need the Ebon Hawk, I have a ship,” Revan continued, “When the time for war comes, you’ll know.”

Bastila nodded. She and Revan embraced in a long kiss.

“Goodbye Revan.” She whispered.

As soon as she disappeared, Revan spoke.

“Goodbye Bastila.”

Jaden comforted Revan.

“I’m not usually one for romantic goodbyes, so that was good,” Jaden commented, “Come on, we better leave this place.”

Before Jaden was about to leave with Revan, he picked up Mira’s body and carried it to Revan’s old, but comfortable ship.

“We’ll find a nice place to give her a funeral.” Jaden told Revan.

“I know,” Revan told him, “I miss Bastila.”

“I know you do,” Jaden told him, “I miss all my friends, just like you do. This isn’t the time to be missing people. We must fight for the Galaxy.”

Revan smiled for the first time in years.

“You’re right,” He said, “We better do what the Force sent us to do.”

Revan went over to his ship’s controls and Jaden sat at the co-pilot’s seat.

The Galaxy was preparing for war. Darkness was rising.

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The End
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Nicely nicely well done. That intense moment before Zor trues to kill them and then Bastila comes to save the day. Nice touch. Mira I am still confused. If I remember correctly, Kreia says that she would die helping people and have no regrets. I was thinking in terms of a planet as only a Jedi would do. Anyway, good job and I see that you are submitting for the Archives. Great job.

Thanks for the comments JediMaster12. Well Kreia's predictions can't always be true can they. They could veary. Like the weather for example.

This is my second piece in The Jedi Archives. The Heart Of The Guardian should be posted there too. Have you voted in the Entertainment Centre Awards 2006 yet or are you waiting for awhile?

Good ending chapter. Sad to see Mira go away. Hope the T3 one is as good as this! ;)

Good ending chapter. Sad to see Mira go away. Hope the T3 one is as good as this! ;)

Thanks, but I might change my mind about a T3 Fic. I might do the other one, because it hasn't been done or I might think up something else. Take a look at this in the Jedi Archives.

Pretty good fic, Pottsie. The only thing that jumped out at me was the continuity error--Jaden gets his arm cut off, but then he picks up Mira--he'd need 2 arms for that, even if she's really light. And they'd also want to get him to a hospital ASAP, despite lightsabers cauterizing wounds and stopping bleeding.
However, the fight scenes are exciting, and the reason for Zor's need to kill is very interesting.

You and stingerhs both have 2 fics there as of this posting time. :)

Pretty good fic, Pottsie. The only thing that jumped out at me was the continuity error--Jaden gets his arm cut off, but then he picks up Mira--he'd need 2 arms for that, even if she's really light. And they'd also want to get him to a hospital ASAP, despite lightsabers cauterizing wounds and stopping bleeding.
However, the fight scenes are exciting, and the reason for Zor's need to kill is very interesting.

You and stingerhs both have 2 fics there as of this posting time. :)

So we do :lol:. Anyway, I have a good excuse for the mistakes. It was late last night and there were small powercuts that made the Computer restart and I was in a hurry to finish this Fic off. If I have time to redo this, I will. Thanks Jae.

Its a bit strange that Jaden is just like, "Oh we'll give Mira a good funeral." I would be crying buckets!!!

Its a bit strange that Jaden is just like, "Oh we'll give Mira a good funeral." I would be crying buckets!!!

Jaden just didn't want to show how upset he would've been. Besides if Brianna had died, then he would crying in buckets.