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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 10:00 PM
#434
Hello, Anglu! If you're having trouble getting Kotor 2/TSL to work, check out The Work Bench (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=554) for more info on how to get it started. There's some great help there (I know, because it's helped me ou...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
08-02-2006, 10:14 PM
#5
Chapter 4: The Lesson on Feeling Surroundings As we settled into the plush seats of the transport ship to Coruscant, I asked again about Jolee’s experiences with a general after his first mission. “If I’m going to work yapping my lips for yo...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
08-02-2006, 9:57 PM
#4
Chapter 3: Jolee’s First Mission We had been hiking in the nature preserve for our exercise that day when Jolee stopped short. “Did you feel that?” he asked quietly. “I feel the creatures around me, and I can feel a small disturbance, b...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
08-02-2006, 9:27 PM
#3
Chapter 2: The Story of Apprentice Sitor The violet blade of Jolee’s lightsaber hummed perilously close to my right ear. I barely ducked out of the way and quickly turned as we battled through our fourth practice run. We both had shields on, but t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
08-02-2006, 9:00 PM
#2
The Adventures of Jolee Bindo as told to Jae Onasi Chapter 1: The Assignment I stood before the Jedi Council on Coruscant, trying to remember Master Zhar’s teachings of the Jedi Code to calm the nervousness that seemed to well up unexpectedly...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
08-02-2006, 8:30 PM
#1
Please feel free to leave comments here (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=161263). Thank you. This is set shortly after the end of Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic. Various characters and some dialogue have been adapted from the g...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN] Pookie
  Jae Onasi
08-01-2006, 4:02 PM
#1
I originally did this for one of the KFM duelling circle challenges, and had so much fun with it, I thought I'd post it here. Ever wonder why you end up with a crate of gizka on your ship on Tatooine? Well, here's your answer. :) Please feel free...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Short Fic] Pookie
  Jae Onasi
08-02-2006, 7:56 PM
#6
I haven't started a fad, have I...? Why yes, yes you have.... :D Thanks folks. I had to write it fast for the KFM challenge to get it in on time (in fact, I didn't think I'd even get to enter the challenge because I had so many other things to do a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Short Fic] Pookie
  Jae Onasi
08-01-2006, 4:02 PM
#1
I originally did this for one of the KFM duelling circle challenges, and had so much fun with it, I thought I'd post it here. Ever wonder why you end up with a crate of gizka on your ship on Tatooine? Well, here's your answer. :) -----------------...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie Fic] Misplaced Trust
  Jae Onasi
08-01-2006, 12:51 AM
#2
I've always wondered about that conversation myself....interesting take on it, and I liked it. The name of the drink as 'it's, uh, green' made me chuckle. Only one thing really jumped out at me--you talked about the fireworks starting before sunset...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  Jae Onasi
07-30-2006, 10:32 PM
#5
GameBanshee has a walkthrough here (http://gamebanshee.com/starwarskotorii/). Achilles' Influence walkthrough is here (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=153012) Have fun!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Writer's "Flash Forward!!!" Problem
  Jae Onasi
08-01-2006, 2:32 PM
#7
Niner, nothing wrong with it split into multiple chapters or one long one. Chapter breaks are purely arbitrary, anyway. The only reason I kept mine about 5 pages long in Word is because it seemed about the right amount for people to read in one sitti...  [Read More]
Posted in: Writer's "Flash Forward!!!" Problem
  Jae Onasi
07-31-2006, 5:28 PM
#5
When I started writing AOJB, I never expected it to get as long as it did. About 10 chapters into it, I started to realize I was losing track of where I wanted to take everything, and I'd get good ideas, snippets of conversations or a 'Bindoism' and...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic]Trials
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 2:20 PM
#18
Jae--in moderator mode--Folks, the PM system is a fabulous tool. It's Free! It's Easy! I highly recommend you use it for your off topic discussions! When you post off-topic stuff, it really distracts from people's stories. When a casual reader star...  [Read More]
Posted in: Never Trust a Hutt: Travels of Kavar Part One
  Jae Onasi
07-27-2006, 11:05 PM
#14
Ok, sorry about the spelling. For some reason word hasn't been working on my computer, I need to get it re-installed or something like that. Anyway, I've taken your advise and I'll start adding spaces between the paragraphs to make it easier to read....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Defiance
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 10:04 AM
#32
Cool story. I liked how the Empire decided to 'spin' it in the epilogue. I got a chuckle out of that one. We left a link to this thread in the finished version that's listed in the Archives. That way, people can make comments here. The plan is to d...  [Read More]
Posted in: Darkness Rising
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 9:31 AM
#97
Pretty good fic, Pottsie. The only thing that jumped out at me was the continuity error--Jaden gets his arm cut off, but then he picks up Mira--he'd need 2 arms for that, even if she's really light. And they'd also want to get him to a hospital ASAP,...  [Read More]
Posted in: Knights of the Old Republic: Into the Darkness
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 12:07 AM
#16
I like how you've written this--very interesting. Hope to see more....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars Jedi Knight:Jedi Heroes
  Jae Onasi
07-31-2006, 7:22 PM
#120
The Mom-erator here--I pruned a bunch of posts about buddy lists, which is not the topic of this thread.... Please help keep Jason Skywalker's thread spam-free. He's worked hard on his story and deserves the courtesy. Jason (and everyone else, actua...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
07-29-2006, 4:17 PM
#205
I enjoyed the story very much. Hope you write more! Hehe, I can just imagine Carth doting over a little girl. She'll have him wrapped around her little finger. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
07-29-2006, 1:11 AM
#199
I enjoyed the duelling scenes--that's some excitement. Interesting to see Traya show up there. Now to see how the rest of the battles are resolved, and get Kirabaros and Michaela, and Carth and Revan back together.... :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: What should KotOR3 be called?
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 8:50 AM
#124
Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic 3, the Search for More Money. :lol: That's honest, if nothing else. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
08-01-2006, 8:49 PM
#365
Go Jae. Go Jae. Nice Reviews. Something nice for Mach to read. Well, I figured the probability was low that mach would review his own stuff, and the stories were just too good not to bring to everyone's attention....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
08-01-2006, 7:27 PM
#363
Review: Star Wars: The Beginning (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?p=2132518#post2132518) and Star Wars: Republic Dawn (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=163919) What can I say about machievelli’s Star Wars: The Beginning and it...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Jae Onasi
07-28-2006, 12:32 PM
#348
So, what caused the hole in the bedroom floor? :D I'm glad you're posting reviews on fics from different sites, btw. I've been learning different things from the writers who post in these places. Each place has a different approach. Of course, the m...  [Read More]
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