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machievelli

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Posted in: Gryphonrider Excerpts
  machievelli
08-30-2008, 12:02 AM
#1
A little background: This is from the first Gryphonrider book. The main Character Dhyanna is a junior officer and had suggested a bold plan. Since she suggested it, she is the one who commands it. All ancillary parts, the background actions, have...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Death Incarnate
  machievelli
09-04-2008, 9:17 PM
#6
read...  [Read More]
Posted in: Stormtroopers
  machievelli
09-02-2008, 11:29 PM
#8
I have a question about Stormtroopers in the Empire's time and in the Imperial Remnant. How would a human male become a Stormtrooper? What sorts of steps would one have to take until he is signed onto active duty? Regardless of comments made in the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Bounty Hunting
  machievelli
09-04-2008, 9:18 PM
#13
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Posted in: Topic: Origins
  machievelli
08-21-2008, 1:08 PM
#4
Darn it. I've written something a while back that could fit prefectly into this topic, but it was already posted in the CEC and is thus inelligible for the contest. Well, if I have the time (with my two exams coming up) and a good idea, I'll submit s...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Twist of Fate
  machievelli
08-28-2008, 1:50 PM
#6
so don't make us wait. Write it!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Emperor's Dark Jedi
  machievelli
08-21-2008, 3:40 PM
#4
download Open Office from Sun Microsystems. Better than the modern Word in my opinion. Don't get me started with either vista or Microsoft Office 2007 (Grumble)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Co-Author Wanted for Mass Effect Fanfic Novel
  machievelli
08-10-2008, 11:24 PM
#4
I've got a co-author lined up, but I'd love it if you gave us responses on our installments! You know I'll comment. nuff said...  [Read More]
Posted in: Ships being destroyed.
  machievelli
08-07-2008, 6:10 PM
#6
Hey y'all. I have a problem with my fic. It's so that i have planned that the cruiser is to be destroyed from the inside, with random explosions all over the place, but i can't think of any failiure that could cause that? Help?:confused: Consider t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Oslozhneniya ("Complications")--Starring Rev7!
  machievelli
07-18-2008, 10:13 PM
#40
I don't want to give away the location of my secret weapon of translation, Rev7... :xp: Having had to ask Tys for translations of phrases I need maybe I should ask if it gives roman translations....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
07-29-2008, 11:33 PM
#205
I did have some issues with certain character relationships, but that was your choice. I think the Exile lacked self-confidence. If she was a general in the Mando Wars, then she would not look up to the Council or consider herself unworthy of being a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-12-2008, 3:25 AM
#879
Coruscant Entertainment Center Ace's High (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=191930) EXzSOldier Alternate Universe during ANH at the battle of Yavin: All in all a good beginning. The only complaints I had were technical addressed below....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-05-2008, 12:56 AM
#876
Coruscant Entertainment Center Death Incarnate (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=191628) RakataDark Not long after the Battle of Endor: With the Empire collapsing, a secret agent decides to tell his story. Some problems with the wrong w...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-31-2008, 11:31 PM
#875
Actually, the city on FF7 is indeed spelt Midgar, without the "d". Having never played the game,. I stand corrected....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-29-2008, 2:09 AM
#873
Coruscant Entertainment Center Knights of the Old Republic III - Threat from the unknown. (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=191095) Carsew Post TSL: The battles begin again You’re using the wrong words sometimes (of instead of off...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-22-2008, 1:21 AM
#869
Coruscant Entertainment Center Death (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=191137) GodsillY Non SW Fiction: Desperate times call for desperate men. I noticed a comment by the author in the forward: Finally if you want to tell me what you t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-15-2008, 11:45 PM
#868
Cheers for the critique, machievelli. :) I'll work on those word issues. I tend to think words should work a certain way, even if they don't lol. Again, thanks. Go ahead. A comedian of the 50s and 60s made an entire act of using the wrong word at t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-15-2008, 6:32 PM
#866
Very much appreciated. What was your favorite part? I am flattered at the wording you used "...because it is that good." If you have any comments about earlier chapters, I'm still open to criticism. Thanks. I only read the first two sect...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-15-2008, 1:03 AM
#863
Coruscant Entertainment Center Triumvirate Wars (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=190285) TheExile After KOTOR: Snippets of the war against the Sith. The writing is disjointed, as is the story. Even a battle, while chaotic, has a flow t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-08-2008, 4:21 PM
#860
Wha-a-a-at? Mach hasn't played on the Dark Side? :eek: You need to! It's wicked fun (well, most of the time - sometimes it made me want to cry) and yields some terrific story fodder. The "snapshot" I wrote actually happens in-game if you ki...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-08-2008, 1:39 AM
#857
Coruscant Entertainment Center Fall of Midnight (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=190715) Rueben Shan Non SW fiction: To hunt of become the hunted? The basics are good, albeit short. The primary problem I had was why would the son of a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-01-2008, 2:24 AM
#855
Coruscant Entertainment Center Vybory (Choices) (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=190581) Tysyacha Post TSL: 12th chapter of the Vremya series. The situation becomes dire with future menace. The shift in emphasis is intriguing. The stor...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-25-2008, 4:08 AM
#854
Look, I made a birthday thread just for you. (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=190733) ROTFLMAO. I did like the sexy stormtrooper, though....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-25-2008, 2:42 AM
#850
For anyone interested, the day this is supposed to be posted is my birthday. I will be 55 when I wake up tomorrow, and I am going to try to have some fun. Coruscant Entertainment Center The Transdimensional War (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthre...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-18-2008, 8:31 PM
#848
Revan411, my primary goal as the local critic is to make the writing better not only by example, but constructive criticism. I hate the 'rah rah' sort of comments, and both Darth333 (Who hired me as it were) told me to 'fix without damaging the ego....  [Read More]
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