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Posted in: Thoughts on the Force
  machievelli
03-16-2008, 11:28 PM
#7
True: It would make for at least one interesting story to focus on some people with force or midichorian diseases. By that reckoning, of what you said about "the one" (Sith'ari) would quite possibly be one of many, given enough time. Perh...  [Read More]
Posted in: Thoughts on the Force
  machievelli
03-13-2008, 11:30 AM
#4
very good points the both of you. I do know and realize that ph could not be the governing factor, and any chemical change gross enough to be readily detected (At our modern level of technology) would also be life threatening. keep it up people. Ple...  [Read More]
Posted in: Thoughts on the Force
  machievelli
03-13-2008, 1:41 AM
#1
The Force: A theoretical relationship to Midichlorians I have constantly show a penchant for being a bit pedantic. Goes with my role in our little homesite here, the old fart who thinks he knows it all. While I don’t know it ‘all’, I do have...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW timeline...
  machievelli
02-26-2008, 10:07 AM
#5
(ha, mach! my story isn't so chronologically screwed after all! :p ) Only if you assume that he is in his late 40s to mid 50s when we meet him in TSL. I was going by apparent age, which would have made him mid to late forties. That was my only quibb...  [Read More]
Posted in: General Questions on Writing
  machievelli
02-26-2008, 10:01 AM
#7
As the local critic, I can tell you that a lot of leeway is not only allowed but requested in what you can or cannot do. As for color of the saber, I see not reason why it can't be whatever you wish. As a writer for over 30 years, don't worry how th...  [Read More]
Posted in: Why Haven't you reviewed me!!!!
  machievelli
02-29-2008, 10:26 AM
#13
(I'm WJ, by the way... same author, new name ;) and to answer the question that inevitably surfaced in my mind; no, I don't think you're an idiot, I just don't assume everyone in the universe and their dad pays attention to me and my actions, or care...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] KotOR the untold story
  machievelli
04-30-2008, 7:01 PM
#10
This is totally off-topic but I can't help myself... :eyeraise: Can someone tell me how this thread has only 4 posts but over 1,600 views? As one of the only people who has commented on my work, kid, you have to ask?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-05-2008, 9:49 PM
#802
I sent out a request for people to let me know if I should review their non-SW postings. What I got was a resounding silence. All right my dearies, no more mister nice guy. I am going to have to start at page 18, the very bottom of the list. If a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-02-2008, 12:46 AM
#799
Coruscant Entertainment Center The Jedi, Reloaded (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=188235) Tysyacha KOTOR During escape from Taris: Damn those cheat codes! I wasn’t sure whether to groan or laugh when I saw it, Tys. Or is this insult...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-25-2008, 12:07 AM
#797
Coruscant Entertainment Center Vremya, Opyat' "Time, Again" (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=188168) Tysyacha After TSL: Sequel to "One Gift, Five Destinies", How much does your companion need to know? You used the...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-18-2008, 3:49 AM
#796
Coruscant Entertainment Center Teachings of a Mandalore (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=187873) JediMaster12 During KOTOR: A little advice about love from Canderous The piece flows well, the scene interesting in that the advice is del...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-11-2008, 2:58 AM
#794
Coruscant Entertainment Center End of a War; Beginning Anew (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=187644) Darth Visilius Sequel on to The Wrong Path: The Jedi are unable to find out what is happening… Remember when making a noun possessi...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-04-2008, 12:08 PM
#790
Coruscant Entertainment Center The Unfinished Tales: Forked (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=187431) Bee Hoon Just after the Mandalorian wars: The soon to be Exile and Kavar both consider the future. The piece is well done, each first...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-28-2008, 11:50 AM
#788
Coruscant Entertainment Center Vremya ("Time") (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=187272) Tysyacha After TSL: The Exile contemplates a bleak future The word is tends not intends. The piece is an excellent bit of introspectio...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-21-2008, 12:31 PM
#787
Obsession (http://hawk.kotorfanmedia.com/node/1775) Kattalez During TSL after Nar Shaddaa: A silent watcher yearns for more. Excellent work! The depth of the character is explored, the yearning deep enough that you can feel it with him. Pick of th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-14-2008, 2:50 AM
#783
Coruscant Entertainment Center Liberation (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=185000) JediAthos Mandalorian Wars January contest: The events on Taris prior to and during the liberation. The scenes need work, as does the dialogue. The prob...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-07-2008, 12:13 PM
#782
Coruscant Entertainment Center The End of Something Grand (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=186832) Lord Sturkie Before the Yuuzhan Vong left their galaxy: Two young apprentices vie against each other. The writing is well done, the piec...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-29-2008, 6:18 PM
#781
Thanks for the tips, I'll slow it right down after chapter four. Which I have just posted. I have a great plot twist and story line that will be fully explained in the coming chapters and episodes. Don't expect to be left in the dark! As I have told...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-29-2008, 11:31 AM
#779
29 Feb The Last Hope: Episode One - The True Sith (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=186639) DarthJebu05 Some editing problems, nothing that can’t be corrected. The flow is a little off, and you’re pushing the pace. Ease off a bit, al...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-22-2008, 2:50 AM
#776
22 Feb Coruscant Entertainment Center I'm Here for the Party (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=186337) Tysyacha KOTOR on Taris: Brave warrior or Party animal? A short piece, but amusing. The idea that our dear Revan is a party animal...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-14-2008, 6:11 PM
#775
Coruscant Entertainment Center Carth's Wonderful Night (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=186148) DarthJebu05 After KOTOR: A crossover of Scrubs; What do you do when you wake up the next morning. Some confusing sentences. As an example w...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-08-2008, 12:35 PM
#773
Coruscant Entertainment Center Cat woman (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=185945) Lord Nihilus PreKOTOR: How Juhani fell to the darkside. The piece has some problems; first, dream sequences are usually in separate paragraphs. Second; t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-01-2008, 12:47 PM
#769
Consecrated Demise (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=185685) Mr BFA After TSL: As the Exile plans on following Revan, Revan is also discovering the truth. The piece flow well but you have problems with cumbersome sentences. Try vocalizin...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
01-25-2008, 2:43 AM
#767
25 jan Coruscant Entertainment Center Prophecy of Damnation (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=185491) Darth Manus Two years after TSL: An agent is sent from 5,000 years in the future to gain information from the Ghost of Ajunta Pall Th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
01-18-2008, 12:31 AM
#766
Coruscant Entertainment Center A Threat From Within (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=185290) Jedi Athos Post TSL: People search for Revan in different ways. You didn’t need the first and in ‘She took the point and Atton, Visas, an...  [Read More]
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