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machievelli

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Posted in: Why did they do it?
  machievelli
09-21-2007, 3:13 PM
#1
Now that they had defeated the Mandalorians, taken their vacation, and had breakfast, Revan and Malak decided out of boredom to go to the dark side… As foolish as that sentence sounds, most of the fiction I have read where characters go to the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Martial arts: Or; Fighting without weapons
  machievelli
08-16-2007, 2:23 PM
#1
Martial arts: Or; Fighting without weapons Every martial art depends on one basic skill, that the user is capable of fighting an armed enemy using nothing but physical skills. Those who needed to defend themselves with out weapons created all of the...  [Read More]
Posted in: How to understand the Mandalorians:
  machievelli
08-16-2007, 2:11 PM
#1
How to understand the Mandalorians: A Historical respective This week, I happened to pick up two movies at the same store on the same day. They were the Last Samurai, and the original 300 Spartans. As I was watching the Last Samurai, I suddenly real...  [Read More]
Posted in: War and the Jedi
  machievelli
07-05-2007, 12:48 PM
#4
Addenda: I am almost finished with Shatterpoint. At one point Depa, the Master assigned to a advise a guerrilla unit say something that is very germaine to the thread. She said a Jedi, thinking like a judiciar caused the slaughter of the Jedi on Geon...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
07-19-2007, 12:31 PM
#202
CRAP!!! Oh well great fic! I was trying to avoid emtional entanglements when I wrote both KOTOR and TSL. Both women do end up bonding (Since my version of Revan was Echani herself) but my explanation of such a bond among that race was that you could...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-29-2007, 11:23 AM
#726
Thanks for the review:) Just to clarify, dialogue needs punctuation after the ""? correct. YOu did it twice if I recall...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-28-2007, 3:04 PM
#724
This week is all LF. Not because I thought it would balance out, but because they revamped the KFM site and I was hopelessly frustrated. I'll be back in there again next week though The Path of Revan (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=1822...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-21-2007, 3:35 PM
#723
I had an interesting time getting this review done. First there was only one new post here, and KFM were in the throes of their annual 'pirate' motif. So I was sure I wouldn't have anything to review. But the pirate flag vanished yesterday, but LF w...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-14-2007, 1:51 PM
#721
Galactic Senate Coruscant Theater New Jedi Order - Falling Darkness (http://www.galacticsenate.com/showthread.php?t=16990) Nighvision90 Alternate universe during NJO: A new mission might spell the end of the New Republic. Primary problem is forget...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
09-07-2007, 3:30 PM
#719
Coruscant Entertainment Center A Hero's Journey (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=182022 ) Mr. BFA Some problems with wording. Learnt and burnt are proper but interrupt the flow. Happier rather than more happy With the sentence “We h...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-31-2007, 1:20 PM
#717
Darth Wyyrlok II the Undead warrior (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=174485 ) The Padawan Set before and during TSL: A Sith lord’s rise to power and immortality. I see others have commented, so I will try to avoid repeating them. You...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-24-2007, 12:22 PM
#714
Coruscant Entertainment Center DXUN (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=179900) Sabretooth During Mandalorian war: A look at prisoners and interrogations. You left out words sometimes. ‘Looks the Mandalorians are lying quiet’ needs a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-17-2007, 12:09 PM
#713
Coruscant Entertainment Center Glad To Leave (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=180655) Weave During final battle in TSL: A Sith discovers there is peace in losing… The writing is a bit cumbersome and repetitive. ‘More fluids oozed f...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-10-2007, 4:19 PM
#712
Coruscant Entertainment Center Void A tale from the Book of the Nine (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=179992) OD Mia Time not specified, but probably between ROTS and Survivor’s Guilt in the EU: A mysterious person meets the 501st. I...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-03-2007, 2:38 PM
#711
Coruscant Entertainment Center Enter Calo Nord (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=179416) RC1162 Before KOTOR: Calo Nord’s first bounty hunt on Taris The writing style is good, but the actual taking of the bounty at the start was a bi...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-27-2007, 3:25 PM
#709
27 July Coruscant Entertainment Center Legacy of the Force: Purgatory (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=179539) Tysyacha During the Legacy of the Force series after Mara Jade Skywalker’s death: Luke faces a new challenge, pondering bo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-20-2007, 10:36 AM
#705
Thanks for the review mach, but two mistakes in that review is that it was for the May contest, May Day and it was inspired by Jasra's First Love, Last Embrace Fan Fic. Personally, I thought my style had improved since the old days, but we all have...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-19-2007, 11:37 PM
#702
Coruscant Entertainment Center The Mandalorian wars (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=179866) Mindtwistah Before KOTOR: A look at the Mandalorian wars from the trenches. Welcome to the site, friend. I won’t ding you on spelling. Jus...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-14-2007, 5:47 PM
#698
Not too sure how you saw Quane as the exile though. Roompa explains in chapter four that she went looking for Revan as soon as he left, meaning she would have crashed on the planet and gotten stuck there long before TSL. I stand corrected. Ther reas...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-13-2007, 3:50 PM
#696
Thanks for the review mach, but I will be rewriting Bridge over Troubled Water as soon as I can. Also, have you reviewed I Couldn't Leave You (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=177693)? looking at its location TS, it will be week after nex...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-12-2007, 11:24 PM
#693
Postring a bit early because I have to get up at 4 AM to get to work, and wouldn't be able to post until almost seven tomorrow evening. Coruscant Entertainment Center Revan: A Day in the Life of A Jedi (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=1...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-03-2007, 1:54 PM
#692
Sitrep: The VA doesn't have an office in Las Vegas. The nearest regional office is in Reno. Try LA to San Franciso via Sacramento. Luckily they can mail me the form I have to fill out, so desert trudging is not in the future...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-02-2007, 6:16 PM
#690
Mach try this website for your 214: http://www.archives.gov/st-louis/military-personnel/index.html All well and god, except that I must have a written request sent through channels. Thanks to the privacy act of 1974, it cannot be submitted through...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-02-2007, 3:23 PM
#688
Holiedaze: My acritlce will be late because of real life yet again. My driver's license expires this month, and I had hoped to just go down, hand them money, and have it sent to me. No chance in hell. First, I'm in another state. They expect mer t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-30-2007, 4:43 PM
#686
Thanks for the reviews!:) I'll be sure to polish up both when I have the time. Hehe, I actually didn't really get a beta reader... Just reread repeatedly until I was satisfied:P I'll try to work on the flow of A Reason as well:) Nice to know my su...  [Read More]
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