machievelli

11-20-2008, 10:33 PM
#1

A child's story I've been working on. It'a hung up around page 65 (FIgure three posts) but I wonder what you guys would think? The Barque Death On a Pale Horse, sort of… The town of Sunrise California basked between the cooling breeze of the oc... [Read More]

Posted in: The Search

machievelli

11-20-2008, 5:17 PM
#5

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Posted in: My Fan Fiction- Star Wars The Old Republic

machievelli

11-20-2008, 4:16 PM
#5

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Posted in: The Critic's Chair on Misc. Writings and Musings

machievelli

11-19-2008, 10:45 PM
#5

I am glad someone finally stepped up to the plate on this one. I admitted 2 years ago that my knowledge of art and poetry is of the order of 'I know what I like', so I could not point out what they did right or wrong, or point out the 'breadth of the... [Read More]

Posted in: Fan-made story/book series

machievelli

11-18-2008, 11:56 PM
#8

What you could do is set a basic theme and see where it can go. I've been thinking of asking Karen Traviss (Author of all of the Mando novels so far) if she'd be willing to edit an anthology of such from writers who don't have agents.... [Read More]

Posted in: Umbral Tide: Chapter V: Night Attack!

machievelli

11-20-2008, 4:09 PM
#9

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Posted in: The Last Line

machievelli

11-20-2008, 2:54 PM
#11

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Posted in: Whisper on the Wind

machievelli

11-20-2008, 2:09 PM
#5

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Posted in: Girls night out.

machievelli

11-19-2008, 10:36 PM
#21

Hmmm...Thanks! By the same token, you could have her unsure how the Exile will react, so have her in a dither before she does it.... [Read More]

Posted in: Family of Choice

machievelli

11-20-2008, 8:05 PM
#75

Absolutely chilling--and absolutely brilliant. Five stars on this latest chapter! :) Thanks Tys. My only question to you among others is... I intend to jump right to the Mandalorian Wars next. Shall I continue? I see I've had almost 900 hits, so let... [Read More]

Posted in: Family of Choice

machievelli

11-20-2008, 10:43 AM
#73

All I have to say is... Dr. Strangelove... :conspire:... [Read More]

Posted in: Rescue from Mustafar

machievelli

11-20-2008, 1:49 PM
#17

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Posted in: Knights of the Old Republic:The Curupted Republic

machievelli

11-20-2008, 1:48 PM
#12

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