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Posted in: Distant Star Wars Past

machievelli

01-15-2008, 10:02 AM
#6

Yeah, but consider how much Earth has leapt forward in the past 500 years. 500 years ago, guns were crude weapons, the world being round was a novel new concept not everyone had accepted, space travel was something that hadn't even been thought of. N... [Read More]

Posted in: Distant Star Wars Past

machievelli

12-07-2007, 6:01 PM
#2

I've looked on wookieepedia but there doesn't seem to be anything about the main. SW planets in mid-level industrial eras; every society in the SW universe seems to go right from barbarism to spacefaring without there being much in between. And I kno... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

01-17-2008, 4:17 PM
#764

Hey, machievelli. I just read the comment about my "Never Blind in the Force" fanfic. I just wanna say thank you for correcting me. I also told why Kajo Mark aka Darth Atrocious went to the Dark Side. It's explained on Chapter 10. :) Thank... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

01-11-2008, 12:35 PM
#762

11 Jan 2008 Coruscant Entertainment Center Sandtrap (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=185027) JediMaster12 KOTOR on Tatooine: Two unlikely allies learn to work together. The basic style is good, the theme well portrayed. Your Man Unt... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

01-08-2008, 11:08 AM
#761

Depends on what they call the tomato now. :D since a fruit by definition has the seeds inside, a tomato is a fruit.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

01-06-2008, 11:20 AM
#759

Thanks for the review, Machman! :D you're welcome, son. Did you eat you vegetables like I told you?... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

01-04-2008, 1:22 PM
#755

Coruscant Entertainment Center TIME SPAN (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=184742) Wolv No specific time given: A squad of Republic commandos faces a different enemy with a different plan. First, you need to remember conversation breaks... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

12-28-2007, 3:40 PM
#754

Coruscant Entertainment Center You Know My Name (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=184703) Tysyacha The battle on the temple in KOTOR: Revan struggles not to fall. A number of points were marred by direct game references, but not as many... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

12-21-2007, 12:19 PM
#753

Coruscant Entertainment Center Path to Exile, Chapter1 (http://hawk.kotorfanmedia.com/node/968) Mithran Star PreKOTOR: What caused the Exile to go to war? The only negative I have about this piece is it is very short. The background could have bee... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

12-14-2007, 3:07 PM
#752

14 Dec 2007 Coruscant Entertainment Center Vtoraya Popytka (Second Chance) (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=184287) Tysyacha After TSL: Everyone deserves a second chance, but are you willing to pay the price for it? The story needs ed... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

12-07-2007, 6:53 PM
#751

Coruscant Entertainment Center The Unknown World (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=184067) Salzella The Rakata Home world during KOTOR: The last thoughts before entering the temple are dark… You left out the word ‘were’ in ‘like... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

12-03-2007, 11:21 AM
#750

Only one impossible thing? But I want my story to have lots of weird and impossible things. Isn't that ok. :P Yeh, sorry for the VERY vague description on the giant ship. I will work on this stuff. Well done on all of your work, and for taking the... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-30-2007, 2:21 PM
#748

two weeks since I posted Heart of the assassin, and only one comment. sigh Coruscant Entertainment Center Luck of the Draw (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=184016) uilleand KFM Dueling Challenge, set on Taris during KOTOR: Trapped on... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-23-2007, 1:57 PM
#747

An intersting week. Forgot thanksgiving, then found out my computer was starting to check the hard drive, which suggests problems with the system. Then I found out that the reason for it is a bad battery. kotorfanmedia Epilog: Tabula Rasa (http://... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-16-2007, 3:41 PM
#746

I've been watching an interesting Anime named Noir. Only one disc so far, but I like it. The series gave me an idea. Anyone interested in seeing the dark side of me should look at Heart of the Assassin in the outer rim. This is a work in progress, an... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-08-2007, 8:50 PM
#744

Posting a little early because tomorrow is payday. Oh and daylight savings time is fun. try it when you forget the 'fall back' so you lose an hour of sleep. Coruscant Entertainment Center KotOR III: The Unknown Regions (http://www.lucasforums.com/s... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-03-2007, 11:37 AM
#742

Can I ask you to send me a note about your concerns with the ending? Not fair to say there are problems without saying what they are! *grin* I'm very interested in the specifics. I think the intention does get lost because I strayed from the actual w... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-02-2007, 4:04 PM
#740

Feast of Fright on Dantooine (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=183244) Tysyacha After TSL: An ancient feast is revived. The style is good if a bit bland. The basis of the story works without the usual me screaming no about how it has obv... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

11-01-2007, 3:58 PM
#739

Older? Than what, precisely? Space dust?? *chuckle* Oh, don't worry - I know, I know....just...older. *sigh* Kid, the writers on here run from 12 and thirteen (Perhaps younger) and I think I'm the grand dad of the place at 54. My comment was merely... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-26-2007, 12:28 AM
#737

Tommorw the library is closed so I'm posting this early. Coruscant Entertainment Center Such A Quiet Thing (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=183095) Uilleand Long before KOTOR: The path followed by Kreia. The style is well done, the bas... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-20-2007, 11:27 AM
#736

Sorry for not replying. Anyway, I apoligise for making this Fic suck, but hey, at least its better than AVP (However, the sequel looks awsome). Anyway, to make up for my mistakes, I'll re-edit my last chapters so they can meet with everybody's stand... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-19-2007, 4:34 PM
#734

Kotorfanmedia The True Sith (http://hawk.kotorfanmedia.com/node/5343) Jaina Solo A few weeks after KOTOR: Struggling with what she once was, Revan makes plans for going into the Unknown Regions I love it when some of the best is the first I see. T... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-12-2007, 2:08 PM
#733

Coruscant Entertainment Center When I ran out of specifics to review here at LF, I asked that anyone who might have been missed please let me know. Thanks to that, we have the following piece missed about four months ago during my problem-with-movin... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-06-2007, 11:25 AM
#732

Thanks for the review, and I'm sorry that you weren't too pleased with the ending. I had originally intended to make it a two parter, which would have explained why they didn't let their daughter speak to Revan, but it was one of the last fics I wrot... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

10-05-2007, 2:50 PM
#729

Coruscant Entertainment Center Alien: New Frontiers (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=182669) Phantom Knight No specific era given: The Aliens from that series of movies move into the Star Wars universe… When you described the face hu... [Read More]

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