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Posted in: Sir Mouse
  machievelli
07-17-2008, 11:49 PM
#3
This is an adorable and touching story, mach! Thanks for not having Sir Mouse kill the cat outright, for I believe that you and your rodent friend are good creatures at heart. :) Part of the reason was that, but I also considered as a man who owned...  [Read More]
Posted in: Sir Mouse
  machievelli
07-17-2008, 10:34 PM
#1
I read the Droid Mouse and his son, and wondered if anyone might like this. A children's book in search of an artist so I can sell it... Sir Mouse and the Cat Long ago, in a country far from here, there lived a mouse and a rat. They lived together...  [Read More]
Posted in: I need help with some fictions- I know this is not quite the place to ask, sorry.
  machievelli
06-30-2008, 11:30 PM
#4
This forum is where you can get help. We have everything from technical support (Myself among them) for everything from grammar to proper terminology to religious views. There are also a number of excellent betas who can proofread your work. Try the...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-18-2008, 2:16 AM
#845
Coruscant Entertainment Center The (Droid) Mouse and His Child (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=189865) Tysyacha KOTOR Between Dantooine and Kashyyk: The smallest thing can make the difference. The story flows smoothly, the basic premi...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-12-2008, 1:00 AM
#844
Wow, thanks Mach! I'm rather proud of the Untold Tales thread. :D As I said when I started giving Reprise Picks, I started doing Picks of the week, but there were so many that deserved them that had been reviewed before. So when someone slips one th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-11-2008, 2:02 AM
#841
Thank you for the review Mach. I wasn't really sure about this one, just because I didn't think it had a really good flowing feeling to it. It's unusual, in my opinion, but even when I try to go back and edit it, there's not really much I can see. [I...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-10-2008, 4:32 PM
#839
Coruscant Entertainment Center My chains are broken (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=189782) SithLord1 10 years after TSL: A test of character may lead to danger. Remember to have spaces between sentences and after punctuation. Some wo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-04-2008, 6:49 PM
#837
mach, I am honored and blush at your words at the same time! :) Thank you!!!!!! Praise is best given for fact, not fancy. I wonder sometimes how much good I'm doing around here, what with Arcecious not even knowing I was working. But I see so many wh...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
07-04-2008, 4:53 AM
#835
Coruscant Entertainment Center He Was My Second Chance (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=188712) Tysyacha During the battle of the Star Forge: One last chance at redemption. Tys has graced our pages and my picks of the week more than an...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-30-2008, 12:32 AM
#834
Thanks for the review Mach. (I really should get back to trying to write some more of that story) I wanted to make the DS Revan, different to what the other Sith Masters have been before him. Revan is cunning, and in my opinion, vindictive when it co...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-27-2008, 1:31 AM
#831
Danger May Befall (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=187947) Darth Insidious Between Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones: The Dark Lord of the Sith and Gilbert and Sullivan? The piece is a bit convoluted, but the last line set me gigg...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-27-2008, 1:28 AM
#830
I'm so confused as to what this thread is about. It's primarily for critical comments on the fan fics, LF. But occasionally I ask a question and give out Whatever prizes. A whatever prize is named after my ex step-daughter's favorite line when lectu...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-26-2008, 2:46 PM
#825
Lavrentiy Beria You got the other quarter Rev. For those interested, when the Tsar fell, his intelligence agency was the Okhrana. This was replaced by the Cheka. After Dzherzhinski died, it became the OPGU. Stalin changed the name to the NKVD right...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-26-2008, 12:26 AM
#823
Tried a google search on this. Appears that the parent organization was the NKO (People's Commisariats of Defense) and NKF (Naval version apparently). Wasn't sure if Beriya or someone named Abakumov (its appointed head in '43) were responsible for SM...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-25-2008, 12:22 AM
#820
Tough question, but at least I tried. :giveup: good try. It reminds me of an 'important question' exercise we did where I came up with Miyamoto Musashi, and literally gave the person every clue except the name....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-24-2008, 12:05 AM
#818
I'm thinking that it is Nikolay Aleksandrovitch Bulganin? KGB is the Komitet Gosudarstvennoy Bezopasnosti. It was an intellegance agency, aka the "Committee of State Security". That's about all that I could give ya. :confused: Wrong. Th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-23-2008, 1:18 AM
#816
For those who haven't read tysyacha's work reviewed this week, I had posted this on her thread, and am reposting it here: Now, for a whatever prize, Which leader of the KGB actually started Smersh, and what was the name of the mother organization wh...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-21-2008, 12:43 AM
#815
Huh... Cool... I didn't know someone here gave reveiws of the stories here... I vote 'keep it up'. Every bit of C & C helps... I've been doing it since 2005 and you just noticed? Whimper!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-20-2008, 2:39 AM
#813
Coruscant Entertainment Center Nasha Doroga ili Shosse (Our Way or the Highway) (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=189029) Tysyacha After TSL, Part 8 in the "Vremya" series, maybe it was heat prostration. Or maybe not… Th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-13-2008, 2:36 AM
#810
Coruscant Entertainment Center The Lost Tales Of Revan (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=188868) Shato Khan After TSL: Members of both crews are gathered to find Revan. Some problems with word usage and spelling, Though there is no evid...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-06-2008, 7:22 PM
#809
to everyone wondering where my column is; I have been using the varied routers around my home so I would not have to walk over to the local library to do my article. however none of them were working starting tuesday, so I had not even started my ar...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-30-2008, 1:49 AM
#807
Coruscant Entertainment Center It's Just a Little Thing (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=187998) Jae Onasi No specific time given, though after KOTOR: Friendship means doing things for others… The piece is up to Jae’s usual...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-23-2008, 12:59 AM
#806
Coruscant Entertainment Center A Matrix Online Fanfic: Mediation (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=178398) Davinq Non Star Wars fiction set in the Matrix: Two rival groups fight to see who can control the human side of the Matrix. Remem...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-15-2008, 11:51 PM
#804
They put the Outer Rim (Non Star Wars) in the normal queue here, so I’ve been going through all of them. Only two pages (A dozen by me) so if anyone wants to try their hand and stick a fork in me by all means do so. Otherwise they won’t be review...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-09-2008, 9:18 AM
#803
Coruscant Entertainment Center DBZ no title yet (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=176976) Reven0123 DragonBall Z adventure: After a spy is caught, a mission is planned. The biggest problem is flow. It doesn’t flow well and part of tha...  [Read More]
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