machievelli

07-30-2006, 9:26 PM
#1

Back in July I think it was when I first posted part of my KOTOR novel, someone asked me if i was going to do a KOTORII novel. When I told them I did not have a copy of the game they asked if I wanted a copy of the KOTORII strategy guide. Unfortunate... [Read More]

Posted in: Writer's "Flash Forward!!!" Problem

machievelli

08-01-2006, 2:54 PM
#8

With al this good advice there is nothing for me to say... [Read More]

Posted in: Fan Fiction Writer needed

machievelli

07-07-2006, 4:55 PM
#31

How do you feel about character development? I'm thinking I'm in desperate need of character writers. I agree. As I told someone commetning on Republic Dawn, I don't create a character that I cannot find a use for.... [Read More]

Posted in: Fan Fiction Writer needed

machievelli

07-06-2006, 11:02 PM
#21

I suppose in a certain style I have already done this at the projects forums so I could trasfer some of that data here. It would just require people to flush out the personalities and there stories. I'm in if you want me. If you'd like, perhaps I co... [Read More]

Posted in: Fan Fiction Writer needed

machievelli

07-06-2006, 1:22 AM
#7

Greetings to those at this subforum who don't know me. I'm trying to round up some talent for a mod that I'm putting together. I'm heavily in need of those who are good with story and plot development to actually give the mod substance. The Project... [Read More]

Posted in: Why Haven't you reviewed me!!!!

machievelli

07-16-2006, 1:15 AM
#5

I haven't finished my fic yet, but I would like you to review it so I could possibly improve more by the end. Would you like me to PM you a request and email it as is, or wait until it's finished? Here's the link to the thread: [FIC]Amongst the Rui... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

07-17-2006, 1:46 PM
#87

and it was 95 degrees out by us with 9000% humidity, and I was the one manning the hot beef station. Great food, great company, great fun, but I was exhausted when I was done, and I just forgot to spell check it. If you've been following the big fi... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

07-17-2006, 10:24 AM
#85

Mach, are you talking about the quillons? Or are you talking about a 2 small blades that come out near where the quillons, blades, and hilt meet? The two smaller blades. And it is spelled quillions and pronounced 'kwee-ons' The term "bastard s... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

07-16-2006, 10:49 PM
#80

I'm not sure what kind of swords you are using, but my bastard sword is 48" (120 cm) long overall, with 12" (30 cm) of it being hilt. The Zweihander and Heavy Scots Claymore are only different by the design of the two smaller blads near th... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

07-16-2006, 10:30 PM
#78

I do not know of any published manuals on what you want, but fencing is not it. Fencing is all working with the point. That is why I compared it to Kendo, which works primarily with the edge and power strokes rather that European methods. The proble... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-16-2006, 2:16 PM
#75

If anyone has any good resources on sword fighting I would appreciate it if they would share. I'm attempting to script the final battle of my story and it is not going very well at this point. I attempted to locate some web sources on fencing but hav... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

07-16-2006, 1:14 AM
#73

The numbers would not change much regardless of size of the ship.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

07-15-2006, 12:10 PM
#71

Mach (or anyone into Navy)--got any mutiny tips for me? My enterprising Sith Lord has managed to corrupt some captains and they're coming in their ships with the rest of a Republic force, only to turn on them when they arrive on site. First thing to... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-30-2006, 10:20 PM
#362

Thanks for the review Mach. It's not done yet, but I have worked hard on it. So I am glad you at least said it was "well done." I know that my storyline is very off the wall and doesn't really hold up in the real SW universe. But that is wh... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-28-2006, 7:24 PM
#359

Nice retaliation Mach. I'm glad you have reviewed Against All Odds. I read that one three or four times myself and it never fails to produce a result. BTW: Happy Birthday (belated) It had to come up. At this rate I will be doing this fifteen years f... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-28-2006, 6:07 PM
#357

Hey, Mach, you've posted three times in a row. Can't you Edit Posts or something? Anyway, I'm looking foward to your next Reviews. Whenever they are. Yeah I can, but sometimes it hard to shut me up. My tombstone is going to read; SO THERE!!!!!... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-28-2006, 5:46 PM
#355

Happy late Birthday, Mach, hope you had a good one. Also I swear The Crystal Of Life has already been reviewed (Then again it is a good Fic). I think what happened was I posted it early, Pottsie. yes, i see that now, Mach :). thanks. about the X-Win... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-28-2006, 3:12 PM
#351

So, what caused the hole in the bedroom floor? :D We had bought a shotgun because my wife is just a leetle paranoid. The only one with real experience with firearms is your truly, and I still haven't gotten them out to the range to teach them. My s... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-28-2006, 12:15 PM
#347

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) it isn't finished yet, but you can read what I have so far. (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=166285) raven Onasi Based on KOTOR: The incidents aboard End... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-24-2006, 3:34 PM
#346

If The Galactic Senate is closed, maybe you could do twice the amount of CEC Fics to review. Anyway, I'm still waiting for a review of my first finished Fic (I'd never thought I'd see the day). It is called The Sith Lord and it is in my Sig. I cut... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-21-2006, 11:39 AM
#344

The Galactic Senate is closed due to security problems, so the review this week is short. Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Knights of the old Republic III, The Unknown Regions (http://www.lucasforum... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-16-2006, 11:25 PM
#343

At 10 feet, falling on your back may break bones, too. 25 feet will definitely cause some significant damage. That is why, without knowing Bespin's base gravity, I compared it to Saturn rather than Jupiter.... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-16-2006, 5:36 PM
#341

Once again, thanks for the review, mach! :D There are actually some minor differences between that story as it appears here and the copy I emailed you, mainly just some cosmetic stuff in the grammar and a slightly longer passage when the befuddled C... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-14-2006, 1:52 PM
#338

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) The Missions of the Old Knights Part One. (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=165637) ExileRevan Set shortly after KOTOR I: A pair of unlikely companions me... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

07-07-2006, 1:10 PM
#336

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) master naskin (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=165496) anakin34 No era set The piece is not long enough for me to make a whole lot of comments, kid. The... [Read More]

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