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machievelli

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Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-10-2006, 12:51 PM
#19
If they made a game that played the jedi would actualy handle situations... no one would buy it =) to much talking not enugh action Actually the way I write is the way I belive such a game would play. Are you saying my style is not interesting enoug...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-09-2006, 4:08 PM
#17
Interlude “What do you mean she’s not on the station Grenn roared. The Security officer on the other end of the com line wilted. “We went to her rooms as instructed, but Marai Devos was not there. Their equipment was gone, so I believed they...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-09-2006, 3:48 PM
#16
Another great chapter Mach. i like the story more then the game =) The only thing i miss is the way you play out some fight seens and just skip over others.. i under stand that you cant write them all, but I can dream cant I ;) A lot of the fights...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-08-2006, 3:26 PM
#14
Confrontation Atton I had never been so embarrassed or... conflicted in my life. She was almost ten years older than me, and had Jedi powers that scared me witless. But she was also a vulnerable attractive woman, and I wanted to shove everyone asid...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-07-2006, 1:14 PM
#13
Exoneration, Problems, and going on Marai It took the TSF almost four days to clear us. When you consider 20 odd hours to Peragus, and the same back, it meant they spent a day and a half trying to lay the blame on us. When Lieutenant Grenn came in...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-05-2006, 11:16 PM
#12
Ebon Hawk Atton Marai was thoughtful when she came forward again. Honestly I think Kreia did it just to make her feel bad. “How were you babes doing back there?” I asked lightly. “Babes?” She walked forward, sitting silently in the co pilo...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-05-2006, 1:04 PM
#11
I noticed that when my spell checker kept dinging it and I couldn't figure out why. Her name is Devos...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-04-2006, 5:05 PM
#9
Harbinger Marai As we charged onto Harbinger I expect a watch officer. Maybe the two Intelligence officers. I wouldn’t have been surprised by the Master at Arms and a couple of his beefy boys, or even a Marine Strike team. What I got was eerie s...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-04-2006, 10:08 AM
#7
Fuel Depot Marai “Master? How do you know me?” The droid stepped forward. I recognized it as an HK series 50. Systech had made a lot of them, and we’d used their Series 46 and 47s in combat because they were so easy to modify. By beefing up...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-03-2006, 3:10 PM
#5
Peragus Marai I wished I had a holovid system right then. The look on his face when I gave my name was priceless. “Uh, now we had better... You know...Get to the command console.” “Right.” I walked to the door. then looked back. He was s...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-02-2006, 5:17 PM
#4
Peragus Marai I crouched as the door opened. There were a couple of bodies. I picked up a vibrosword from one man’s hands, and checked them. They had been hit with laser fire and crushing impacts, as if someone had taken a bat and beaten them to...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-01-2006, 7:20 PM
#2
Pain and Remembrance Marai It was like watching a revenant climbing out of it’s grave. I was frozen staring at her. She adjusted her hood. Of her face all I could see was her mouth and the braids of her white hair. She looked back at me. If she h...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-01-2006, 3:06 PM
#1
Knights of The Old Republic Return from Exile It is a time of chaos and danger to the Republic. Bloodied by the Mandalorian Wars, decimated by the Jedi Civil War, the Jedi order reels back in disarray. Where once thousands stood, now barely a hundr...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-09-2006, 3:44 PM
#21
I finally just decided to wing it. You guys do not understand the depths of my incompetence...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-08-2006, 11:35 PM
#19
how do I get the dlgeditor to accept that I even have dialogue? I was able to find them with find refs but with something like 7,000 dialogue points coming up when I use Atris as a keyword. it is a little un-nerving. Oh, BTW, I need to do the same w...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-08-2006, 10:15 AM
#17
All right, downloaded dlgeditor, and now I'm hopelessly lost. Of course, It took me 3 weeks to use HTML for my reviews. I still don't know how or why it works. Every one repeat after me 'Mach is an idiot' 'Mach is an idiot' 'Mach is an idiot' 'Ma...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-08-2006, 12:00 AM
#15
is it on the site where I get mods?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-07-2006, 9:54 PM
#13
I've always thought that the Jedi that led troops were older Jedi as far as the movies went i.e Obi-Wan, Ayala Secura, Yoda, Mace Windu, etc.... But you forget that Anakin was only 22. With the clones it is different. If you read my clone war shor...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-07-2006, 9:53 PM
#12
The Exile was a general during the Mandalorian Wars, so she can't be too young. But that's one of my pet peeves in SW--generals aren't 18 year old Jedi who lead small strike teams all over the place. There are some things that you can only learn thr...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-07-2006, 9:49 PM
#11
Dialogue Chain as in options? I can get that to show up using the dialogue editor. Mostly it is Atris expressing her contempt for the Exile and the fact the the destruction of Peragus set about a chain reaction that would cause an echo to cross over...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-07-2006, 5:34 PM
#7
Another question: Does anyone have the entire dialogue chain for the first meeting between the exile and Atris? I am not sure what is said and may need to look at it for my dialogue...  [Read More]
Posted in: Old men forget...
  machievelli
08-05-2006, 6:54 PM
#6
Question about Atris. In the prima guide for KOTOR, they give you an age for Carth. Did they do the same for Atris? The reason I am asking, is I am assuming Marai was 22 or three years older than my version of Revan. That would make her 31 or two in...  [Read More]
Posted in: Why Haven't you reviewed me!!!!
  machievelli
08-04-2006, 10:43 PM
#7
It has come to my attention (From someone whose work is already there) that I have not been keeping track of the Jedi Archive. As one of the person that moaned until it got placed, I can only say, mea culpa. Starting with my next review cycle (11 A...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-04-2006, 12:32 PM
#367
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Echo 13 vs The Element of the Force (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=165345) steven In a parallel universe, a New Republic Marine team meets a different...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-02-2006, 11:28 AM
#366
Well, I figured the probability was low that mach would review his own stuff, and the stories were just too good not to bring to everyone's attention. Actually in the third week I think I came to one of mine (Why We Die) and said then that I would n...  [Read More]
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