machievelli

07-03-2006, 10:58 AM
#159

editing and rewriting the end of the last chapter. tell me what you think.... [Read More]

07-03-2006, 10:42 AM
#158

:) So, when ya gonna start the next one? (Jae runs before Machievelli can throw something at her....) :D Not immediately. I have some unimportant stuff like cleaning, building a stand for a rabbit box, the 4th of July and my birthday in the way. (S... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

07-03-2006, 10:13 AM
#156

Sure, the questions got answered. I'm just not a big fan of everyone falling over dead because I prefer my FantasyLand to be happier, probably because I've seen more death up close and personal than the vast majority of people. I don't read Hamlet o... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

07-02-2006, 2:38 PM
#154

Mach, we're all going to need anti-depressants after an ending like that. Other than that, I enjoyed it. :) I could have ended it on a high note, and was going to with the announcement of the first Republic conference, but I hadn't resolved what Si... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

07-02-2006, 2:39 AM
#151

Counting the cost Master Soo-chin stepped down from the ramp. There was still firing going on at the Citadel about fifteen kilometers away. A third of the building had been blown down by traitorous defenders, making it look like a cake that had been... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-01-2006, 2:21 AM
#150

Stop drinking the coffee! :D While I don't have quite those same parts, I know what you mean--there've been a few nights where I stayed up way too late and feel asleep at the keyboard. One of the perks of having a laptop and lying in bed. :) I have... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

06-30-2006, 8:21 PM
#148

Whew! What a ride! Roller coasters are tamer than this. :) How do you think I feel? I had not even blocked it out when I posted the section before two days ago. When I started into it the Muse grabbed my by parts you don't need to consider and dragg... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

06-30-2006, 4:38 PM
#146

Escape The man read the terse message from Coruscant, then shut off his reader, looking out over the city. It was all starting to come apart. The thrice damned Jedi had ruined over ten years of work without even breaking a sweat. The report from Bo... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-28-2006, 6:46 PM
#145

Before anyone asks, I remembered that Lucas as on Curuscant, so he has been replaced with Tran, the Corellian ONI head. Hobart was head of the council on Coruscant, so he has been replaced by Master Desical The Aqualish, who will not be found for a... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn

machievelli

06-28-2006, 6:40 PM
#144

Raiding “It was only a harmless prank.” Sienna said. She had been cleaned up, as had Breia. They stood in what is nicknamed a ‘Cadet Brace’, a position of attention so tight that the body cannot move. “So let us see what your little ‘ha... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-28-2006, 11:19 AM
#143

Woo! Whatever Prize! Thank you! I'll give it the appropriate appreciation that it deserves. :D Battle of the Planets is still my fav, but I haven't seen a lot of the others. Project A-ko's blurb is a child born from Superman and Wonder Woman (Super... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-28-2006, 10:32 AM
#141

and a half if you count the one I shared with him. :D Answer: Dominion Tank Police. My favorite Anime btw! :D -RH My problem with anime is that the blurbs sound so stupid, but then the series is so good. That happened with ProjectA-Ko, Tank POlice... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-27-2006, 11:07 PM
#138

:rofl: Does googling the sig count? I'm making use of my available resources, after all. ;) :D By all means. Go for it. At least someone other than Hallucination will get the prize. The little gtuy has what, three? This is great! me reading first f... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-27-2006, 4:06 PM
#135

To those that have been reading... About three weeks ago, I discovered that we had Adult Swim on demand on our TV. Thinking I was going to watch the movie Ghost in the Shell, I discovered instead I had come into the middle of the first season of the... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-22-2006, 6:24 PM
#131

Yes slacked off again. However if you look at at the lulu.com website this time next week, I will have another Faerie book up there. 200 odd pages in an orgiastic blast. So to make up for it... Other problems Samsun hit the floor, rolling. He was... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-05-2006, 11:23 AM
#334

TADA! Finally finished Victim of Betrayal, after 7 and a half arduous months. Machie, can you give me a bit of review for it? Not sure whether this is the right way to ask and all, considering the special protocol detailed in "Why haven't you re... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-03-2006, 1:02 AM
#331

^I wish people would assume my name was spanish (which it is), but they all think it's Dutch. @Jae: You aren't supposed to hang up on them, you have to toy with them, like so: Telemarketer: Hello Mr. X, do you have a moment? Me: I'm a little busy.... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-01-2006, 11:55 PM
#329

first, a lot of the people are too flipping stupid to wonder why I get upset. I agree about telelmarketers, expecially when the look at it and 'assume' that it is spanish so they try to pronounce it 'correctly'. I wasn't talking about pronunciation... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-01-2006, 6:12 PM
#325

*takes deep breath* Thanks. That was driving me nuts. It's fixed on the main page too. Yes, I didn't know how easy it would be to correct. As for being driven nuts, I could tell you my last name and the odds were it would not be spelled correctly... [Read More]

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machievelli

07-01-2006, 2:23 PM
#323

Hello admins? Mach's got MacLeodCorp down as the author of The Gremlins instead of me both in here and on the Star Wars Knights main page. Can somebody please fix that? done here. Not sure i can fix it on SWK. As I said in the private, sorry. Mea C... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-30-2006, 11:22 AM
#319

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) The Gremlins (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=165396 ) Mace_MacLeod During the Imperial Era: A couple of boys have some fun with Imperial ship design. A... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-30-2006, 11:14 AM
#318

Hmmm. You said that they would have recognized each other quirks. Probably, but it is a story. To misquote Shakespeare, a story is supposed to hold a mirror up to nature. If you had practiced together off and on for about ten years, or watched each... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-24-2006, 12:04 PM
#315

With my jedi senses, I failed to detect the fact that 'Bushida' is the female for of Bushido. Didn't i make the same mistake about five months ago?... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-23-2006, 1:33 PM
#312

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) The Minefield of Battle (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=165041) Jedi Knight 707 Probably directly before the events of KOTOR; A pair of our favorite Jed... [Read More]

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machievelli

06-22-2006, 10:27 AM
#310

just a quick question. since im too lazy (like the others here) to check for myself, ill jst ask. did you review Mace Windu: Jedi Master Reborn and Galactic Conquest: Rise of the Imps? just curious, cuz of what i searched, i cant find it. Mace Wind... [Read More]

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