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machievelli

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Posted in: Missing Styles
  machievelli
08-28-2006, 3:27 PM
#1
The first time I ran through the game, all of the masters taught me a fighting style. The problem is, I'm running through it again with the Handmaiden as part of a female led team, and while every master is teaching me a style, I'm not getting them i...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-28-2006, 11:33 PM
#95
Actually the agrarianization of Germany was Henry Morgenthau's idea, including General order 1068 which told the Americans in German to have no pity and made it a court martial offense to give a kid a candy bar. But the Russians agreed. whole heart...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-28-2006, 10:32 PM
#93
I'd never considered Mira being interested in history before, and it was another thing that helped your chapters seem less like a complete write-off of the game. The way she finished off Hanharr was realistic, and I liked it how you mentioned the amo...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-28-2006, 7:45 PM
#91
What is it that bad? No one has ANYTHING to say? I'm going to go get drunk. Wake me when the millennia arrives....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-27-2006, 9:44 PM
#90
Mira I felt like you’d expect after I’d been hit repeatedly with a stunner. At least when I did it to someone, they woke up with some painkillers and a glass of water ready. All I got was empty space. I could feel the prickling of mines around...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-27-2006, 12:40 PM
#89
Mira She was walking fat dumb and happy, wrapped up in her own thoughts. “You know, I thought Jedi were supposed to be smart.” I said in a conversational tone. She froze. She wasn’t looking back. “You know, I have a theory. Humans are the m...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-26-2006, 2:29 PM
#88
The Red Eclipse Marai I had barely turned from Atton when I felt; the Toydarian was working on his accounts. “Three bricks of spice out of Ylesia, then with the turn around...Um... no, that’s won’t work... “We need to speak.” A hissing...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-26-2006, 3:29 AM
#87
Confrontation Mira I watched her through my scope. If I were like the rest of the lowlifes in the guild, one touch would have spread her head all over the landscape. Most Jedi I remembered were old toothless relics spouting peace and love. She look...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-26-2006, 1:06 AM
#85
In Orbit of Nar Shaddaa Marai Atton had brought up the planet and moon. “There you have it people. Nar Shaddaa. The gaping maw of the of Nal Hutta, and everything that travels through half of known space comes through here first. Home to Mandalor...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-24-2006, 4:21 PM
#84
Walking into the trap Kavar Is it possible this meeting is a trap?” Queen Talia asked. “You have spent so much time keeping me alive, i do not think I can afford to lose you.” “Of course it could be a trap. Vaklu is no fool, or we would ha...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-24-2006, 2:05 PM
#80
Of Bonding Handmaiden I suddenly realized that it was about Marai that had called to me. I was one of five sisters, but I had never been sister to them. Sister of flesh they always called me, yet to the Echani, a true sister is sister of flesh and...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-24-2006, 1:42 PM
#79
Quick question: What species is the holo of Goto? The only time i ever saw it before was in the ancient comic book serial based on the original episode....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-24-2006, 2:00 AM
#77
For all who waited with bated breath on the turgid romance that I had worried about revealing, forget it. First, I rewrote it, so there. Second when I tried to post it, I had exactly 430 charcters too many. For those interested, that is two paragrap...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-24-2006, 1:58 AM
#76
Communication. There was a checkpoint at the shuttle, and they were searching for weapons. If you had a star port visa, they left you alone, but the average citizen wasn’t allowed anything more dangerous than an eating knife. I watched this, and m...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-23-2006, 10:31 AM
#75
let me think; no...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-22-2006, 10:38 PM
#73
A muder mystery? What on earth could that be? :p Picture this: A Homicide detective in a Texas city has a past best left buried. Before Sarah Doyle came to the United States, she was one of the most feared assassins the Mujahadeen ever fielded. Bur...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-22-2006, 6:27 PM
#71
Muphy's law concerning writers: Whatever your best at is either sequestered (Meaning they won't speak to you,) or not what the 'public' (Meaning the editor) wants. No, I have yet to sell a major work even with 4 star wars, three star trek, one mud...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-22-2006, 4:37 AM
#69
My biggest problem with selling it is finding an agent. You have a catch 22 when dealing with agents, and I postulated you have two levels of catch 22 with them. First level, most agents only want to handle moneymakers. So if you haven't sold, then...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-22-2006, 1:53 AM
#65
The Echani are a much more unique and independant culture than many of the others in the others in the galaxy. To me, it doesn't seem like some of its citizens would settle on a far-off world, but to each their own. :) No I was saying her family co...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-22-2006, 1:43 AM
#64
I liked the manner in which you introduced lightsabers into the story by using some of Marai's fallen Jedi comrades. This will give even more significance to the lightsabers Marai and Brianna use. This wouldn't be like anybody we know, would it? ;)....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-21-2006, 3:39 PM
#61
I read Jae's comment above. Got it in one. My explanation was when you love somone so much that their well being is more important than anything else. The entire 'sexual contact' between them was a deep soul searching hug when they bonded, some drea...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-21-2006, 10:34 AM
#59
That's a change I hadn't considered, although it's contradicted by how Kreia says Revan was born beyond the Outer Rim. How so? An American born in Germany is still an american....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-21-2006, 10:22 AM
#58
There is actually a rule against kissing scenes with same-sex couples here, although it's too harsh. Very descriptive scenes of that I don't think should be allowed, but just mentioning or mildly desribing it works out well. I thought it made Luxa se...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
  machievelli
08-21-2006, 2:04 AM
#56
Thank you. My take on it, was that Danika Wordweaver, my version of Revan was an amalgam of Revan, and the memories of a soldier that died at the battle when she was captured. Her thoughts were impressed on Revan's damaged mind, which caused the forc...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
08-25-2006, 1:20 PM
#376
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Star Wars: The Beginning of the Galactic Empire (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=165377) Revanscool Alternate Universe. Set at the end of Star Wars Video...  [Read More]
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