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Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith Reckoning
 machievelli
09-10-2006, 5:17 PM
#10
Present day: I looked around me. Four stone walls. How could I have been so stupid? The old saw 'fool me once' ran through my head. I had spent the last three years here, and while they weren't willing to just kill me, I was still as surely dead bei...  [Read More]
Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith Reckoning
 machievelli
09-09-2006, 10:06 PM
#5
Tysyacha and I will be alternating, so this might get a bit confusing. Before you ask, this is the Danika Wordeaver Revan from my KOTOR novel... Four Years Earlier Revan I had forgotten how much I hated this damn planet. Even when it was just bait...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-11-2006, 2:49 PM
#158
Fateful meeting Marai The station was frantic on our arrival. The Sith fleet had tried to scatter, but the newer corvettes of the Republic fleet were as heavily armed as the Mandalorian era frigates that led it. The three Mammoth class interdiction...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-11-2006, 12:58 PM
#156
:lol: "Thank you for calling the Jedi hotline. This is Jedi Jane. I sense through the Force that you are Joe Raniskran. How may I help you?" My wife jokes about it all the time. If telephone Psychic are so good, why don't they call you to...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-11-2006, 10:33 AM
#154
I don't think that rank existed in the Republic Navy. The title Jedi Lord existed at one point, though that wasn't until much later. The vague description of Nihilus and the contradictory explanations of his past leave many doors open. I look forward...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-11-2006, 2:02 AM
#152
It did seem a bit rushed, though I liked it how Marai was talking to Nihilus as if they weren't complete strangers. Admiral Lord Quintain was originally mentioned in my KOTOR novel as one of the Republic's worst Admirals. What I looked at was 'what...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-10-2006, 8:30 PM
#150
For those of you that looked at the last post, and think perhaps I am slipping... I admit it was rushed, and i am editing and expanding it. I will repost it before I post the next segment....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-09-2006, 6:35 PM
#149
Citadel Station Ships had come out of hyperspace, a fleet of nightmares. Republic ships cruised alongside Mandalorian and Sith vessels. But the bulk of that fleet had been ripped apart by some massive force. There were rents in the hulls, drives with...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-09-2006, 11:43 AM
#147
I find it amusing that an assasin droid would care aboutr buryial rites, still keep up the hard work :D I was just making a sarcastic stab at C3PO's 'I know six million languages' but with something that HK would no doubt know, how they would dispos...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-08-2006, 2:22 PM
#144
I apologize about the brevity of today's post. However I have a serious combat scene coming, and want to give it my full attention. On top of that I have jury duty, so bear with me... Additional information on jury duty. After 3 days the defendant p...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-08-2006, 2:19 PM
#143
Marai I looked into that face I had once cared so deeply for, and felt nothing in return. My own saber-staff hummed, Then she came at me. It was all attack, with no thought of defense. Against someone who had never faced a lightsaber it would have...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-08-2006, 10:38 AM
#142
I will have to reread this. Today I have my entire column to flesh out, and jury duty. I did correct the over droid. You see, I had HK steal his ship for his own purpose which would have come clear in the next section....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-07-2006, 1:25 PM
#139
Pursuit Marai I was standing on a night swept plain. Off in the distance, I could see the glow of a force field interacting with the atmosphere. I felt a surge of the force so great I was driven to my knees. Telos, I was on Telos. Above me glowing...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-07-2006, 10:21 AM
#138
more brilliant chapters Mach... just out of curiosity tho, why didnt you get Bao-dur and Atton in on the Jedi thing? I could see that maybe Atton has too much anger, and hate towards the Jedi, but you did mention that Marai could see Bao from the sh...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-06-2006, 10:41 AM
#135
Nephew? :confused: My own little joke. As if my family is the only one here commenting....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-06-2006, 12:32 AM
#132
All right people, A: What did you think of the battle, and B: Why is my nephew here the only one commenting consistently? Oh BTW, ED, is there an easy way to use the module for the droid factory/planet? Remember my computer illiteracy...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-05-2006, 6:49 PM
#130
Condemnation Marai It took three days to clean things up enough to even think about what to do. I kept coming back to the pad with ‘my’ casualties on it. Forty men and women had survived. Of the 200 I had led into that horror, forty. I had bee...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-05-2006, 12:00 AM
#129
The Battle The mercenaries moved forward. They knew what the enemy had, knew their defenses. There would be no surprises. ***** Atton I felt the wind whipping at me as we shot out from the settlement. There was a black blot ahead of me. The merce...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-04-2006, 1:39 PM
#127
I am not going to post until the entire battle montage is done. That is why the section just posted was so short....  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-04-2006, 1:37 PM
#126
Preparations Mira It was a nightmare. It was almost ten kilometers to Khoonda. We ran, knowing we were too late. We were almost there when I waved for them to stop. I walked ahead, scanning left and right. “Republic mines, but they’re laid ou...  [Read More]
Posted in: SW: Return From Exile
 machievelli
09-04-2006, 12:56 AM
#125
Dantooine Marai Dantooine was a pastoral world. The Jedi Civil War had come here not because of position, but through mere chance. When Revan had been redeemed, the woman she had become was brought here. She had left from here to undertake the miss...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
 machievelli
09-11-2006, 2:05 AM
#106
I guess I should've mentioned whether I was talking about Star Wars or the U.S. I'll fix that... Not a problem. Most people don't even know where the ranks came from. The 'Admiral' or Fleet admiral was in overall command in action, with his assista...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
 machievelli
09-10-2006, 8:20 PM
#104
Vice Admiral - The equivalent of a Lieuteneant General. Rear Admiral (upper half) - Someone who commands ships at the back of an assault, but not the furthest rear. Rear Admiral (lower half) - Somone who commands the ships at the furthest rear of a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
 machievelli
09-06-2006, 12:34 AM
#164
*Sniff* this is beautiful! Thanks, kid. Have you read the Beginning as well?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
 machievelli
09-08-2006, 1:41 PM
#379
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Clone Trooper Jedi (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=167447) Lord Konohomaru Set during Star Wars Battlefronts: A young clone trooper is trained in the f...  [Read More]
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