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machievelli

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Posted in: Why Haven't you reviewed me!!!!
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 4:38 PM
#1
Do you know how often I see that? As I told Darth back when I first started, I spend an average of 30 hours a week writing, and part of that time when I'm on the computer reading for the column. Right now I am spending an average of eight hours a we...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 12:20 PM
#107
An unlikely team It had been done before Breia had even arrived at Corellia in the captured Pirate. She had seen her ship resting in space in an orbit that would never touch the planet. The hazard lights had been switched on. The cubicle had already...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
  machievelli
05-13-2006, 6:09 PM
#106
You mean it's not already? ;P I never bet on politics, because I never know who's on the inside making deals (you support me on this bill, I'll make sure you get some appropriations for your district....) OK, if I was LBJ and it was American poli...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
  machievelli
05-13-2006, 2:11 PM
#104
I'm thinking that it is quite fortunate the Jedi monastery has such well-connected members to facilitate addressing important matters such as this weaponized Iridian plague. Very fortunate indeed. One thing the original order IMO had was such conne...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
  machievelli
05-11-2006, 6:14 PM
#102
I love it when people actually get things done in spite of politics. :) Sienna's a very fun character. The scene with Holani and the director reminds me a bit of Clancy's Clear and Present Danger (if I have the right book title--the one where he fin...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
  machievelli
05-11-2006, 12:04 PM
#100
Investigations Sienna walked toward the front desk, watching the guard watch her. Ever since she was sixteen, she had noticed that the male eye followed her like a tracking sensor if she was close enough to really see. Even the other Apprentices had...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 5:24 PM
#279
All right. My next post...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 5:22 PM
#277
You never answered the question Darth; You want me to write a 'how to get reviewed' postie?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 11:50 AM
#274
darth, Help! edited 3 times, and it still didn't work....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 11:23 AM
#273
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) An Inverse of Stars: Part One (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=162264) An Inverse of Stars: Part Two (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=162351)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-11-2006, 11:43 AM
#272
and I'm not too sure what combination mach did in his story. I did it when my main character (Female) imagined what would happen if she had bonded with the girl Kalendra. If this worries you read the chapter in question in the first posting. I can s...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-11-2006, 11:30 AM
#271
Actually oh super mod, it is what is easier for you....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-11-2006, 10:54 AM
#268
As I tell everyone, there are three ways you get reviewed. One is to be next up in the queue starting from the bottom. Second is I can review it, send you a copy and post it when we get there. The last is I review it, save a copy, then give you a blo...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 7:48 PM
#88
Therefore at first be shy as a maiden. When the enemy gives you an opening be as swift as a hare and he will be unable to withstand you. Ebon Hawk Enroute to the Star Forge System Danika The next few days were tense. Everyone dealt with the tensi...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 7:36 PM
#87
All right, I'll settle for two......  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 7:12 PM
#85
Three coments, but all by the same person. What you guys don't love me no more?...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 7:11 PM
#84
Question 1: Is a Rakatan star map able to be moved? I don't know but I think it quite possible that the star map would have required extra special care if it would need to be moved out of a cave and into a tomb if it was to retain it's functionality....  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 11:39 AM
#82
Heh, the hot and cold grenades. I had a slight problem with that in the game, too. Iced acid is still too acidic to walk on. It doesn't magically stop reacting just because it's frozen. However, it's just a game. :) I didn't feel comfortable with it...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-14-2006, 2:38 AM
#80
This seemed strange to me. IIRC Ajunta Pall's sword in the game was double-bladed. I reviewed the sword's description in post #116 and you don't indicate the sword is double-bladed. Not that big of a deal but I was trying to figure out how Uthar pull...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-13-2006, 8:36 PM
#78
All right, my bad. I cut out Naga Sadow by mistake. The system obviously bumped it. So I will have to go in and repost bumping them back into position. It might not have been me... I went back, and intended to edit post 118 which was right before t...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-13-2006, 8:11 PM
#77
I didn't cut the Naga Sadow Tomb! All I did was remove the Wraid Dragons, and left off the side room. As for the master Yuthura mentioned, I did mention that she was from another Jedi Academy, fo he obviously is from that one. The Terentateks peri...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-13-2006, 1:45 PM
#75
Actually it was intentional. You have a lot of side quests on Korriban, and while the idea that you had to penetrate a tomb to impress Master Wynn, I saw no reason to cover every one of them. When I write something, I have to take a straight line app...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 7:10 PM
#73
We're down to the last 133 pages. How am I doing? This time I am going to wait until at least 3 of you respond....  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-12-2006, 7:02 PM
#72
Gauntlet As we approached the entryway to the Academy, I saw three students standing guard. One of them, a woman saw us coming. “You! You went into the tomb of Naga Sadow with Master Uthar. Where is he?” “He is dead. I killed him.” “We f...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
05-10-2006, 6:04 PM
#71
Acceptance I jogged back to the Academy entrance. The cool air felt electric, and as I ran up the ramp into the central chamber, I understood why. Master Uthar stood in the center of the room, surrounded by the dozen or so students. Kneeling at his...  [Read More]
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