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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: The Missing Number
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 8:13 AM
#4
Thanks so much for the kind comments!:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Missing Number
  Bee Hoon
08-02-2008, 1:41 AM
#1
A/N: I don't know how this story got so long, so don't ask:P I was tempted at the last minute to chuck this and write a new one, but hey, I'm too lazy to wring another tale out of this brain of mine. I hope you enjoy! P.S. Excuse the name's obvious...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Memory Best Left Forgotten
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 6:07 AM
#3
Not bad for a first try :) The language could use polishing, for example, describing Ralon's screams instead of just typing "AHHHH", as well as describing exactly how Vader used mind tricks on him (although Vader seems more likely to rip th...  [Read More]
Posted in: Two Roads
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 6:18 AM
#2
I loved it! This definitely has my vote:D The descriptions about the choices that she had to make, and how she chose and ended the pregnancy were marvelous. Excellent work as usual!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Insomnia
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 7:24 AM
#2
Ooh, nicely done! I liked how you discussed the various ways Grissom used to keep himself awake, and how Kreia appeared to him. I have to give you credit for such an original idea. Great work! *sandwich, btw :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Secret Crossroad
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 7:44 AM
#2
Wow, Ariane is a surprising one O.o The story felt a little rushed, and I'm wondering exactly why Ariane did what she did. Going to the extent of having kids with him and not feeling for the father of her children--it's odd! Besides that, good job:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Secrecy is Key
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 8:08 AM
#2
Quite an enjoyable read, but I really want to know more about Aryn, and Jana Vincent's future! Good work with this:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Insults
  Bee Hoon
08-01-2008, 12:40 PM
#34
^^ Ouch >.> Way to go ruining Atton's adorable jealous grouchy moment:P...  [Read More]
Posted in: Insults
  Bee Hoon
08-01-2008, 8:55 AM
#32
I'll never forget Atton telling Mira to "go sit on a rocket". He's so cute when he's grouchy <3...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sithidiom: The Complete History of the True Sith----by AristotŠ¹lēsticus
  Bee Hoon
08-04-2008, 5:54 AM
#2
Erm, I see the prelude but I do not see the fic:s...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR III: The End of the Saga
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2008, 12:50 PM
#16
Okay, it's late and I'm tired, but where did the Ebon Hawk pop out from? @_@ I don't recall it being mentioned in the earlier chapters! First of all, don't rush to post chapters. I know it's great fun to read feedback and all, but take your time to...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR III: The End of the Saga
  Bee Hoon
07-25-2008, 1:23 AM
#13
Ah, here is the picture (http://knightsoftheoldrepublic.filefront.com/potd/66483) that I thought of immediately when you mentioned Atton and Carth in the cockpit together:p (Picture made by Shem)...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR III: The End of the Saga
  Bee Hoon
07-24-2008, 11:08 PM
#11
Hey there, sorry, I keep getting distracted :p Anyway, in the first paragraph, Atton is really acting quite out of character:P The Atton that we see in the game would never give up the controls to Carth even if Carth was the better pilot--perhaps es...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR III: The End of the Saga
  Bee Hoon
07-23-2008, 7:35 AM
#8
Hehe, nice to know that my feedback is being utilized!:) It has improved dramatically, but there's still lots of places where you could expand. As our resident critic machiavelli always says, polish it, and then polish it some more! the ship's name i...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR III: The End of the Saga
  Bee Hoon
07-23-2008, 2:07 AM
#6
Thanks for taking the time to explain:) Hehe, foreshadowing always drives me nuts because I like to *know* things, but it's an effective plot device. Anyway. If you say that Revan and the Exile are needed to defeat Darth Thane, isn't sending Ray (...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR III: The End of the Saga
  Bee Hoon
07-22-2008, 10:10 AM
#3
Hey there, welcome to the CEC!:) First off, I'll state the obvious It is very short; I have received and given reviews longer than either of the current installments. Having seen so little of the story, I can't really comment on it in depth, other t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Snapshots Of a Fall
  Bee Hoon
07-22-2008, 3:49 AM
#2
I love the descriptions, and how you made Atton lose control,which is a nice nod to the exile's leadership (so frequently harped upon :P). It sounds very dark and dangerous, and the ending sets the tone well. Excellent work!...  [Read More]
Posted in: July/August '08 Topic: Secrets
  Bee Hoon
08-01-2008, 12:02 PM
#30
Gah, I'm tempted to chuck my story (which I have worked on a lot:P) and start a new one!! :/...  [Read More]
Posted in: July/August '08 Topic: Secrets
  Bee Hoon
07-14-2008, 12:02 AM
#12
Oops, my bad :P Didn't spot that somehow....  [Read More]
Posted in: July/August '08 Topic: Secrets
  Bee Hoon
07-13-2008, 10:30 PM
#7
So, erm, when is the deadline?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnsey's Art
  Bee Hoon
07-22-2008, 11:15 PM
#38
Ooh, the colours are so pretty!:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Which KOTOR I and II character are you?
  Bee Hoon
07-09-2008, 12:04 PM
#55
Inyri, at least he's cuter than Disciple :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: Which KOTOR I and II character are you?
  Bee Hoon
07-09-2008, 11:51 AM
#52
Pavlos, I have to say that becoming the two most abhorred party members does not bode well:P Although maybe it would have been a good idea to not randomly check all the boxes in the category of descriptive words....  [Read More]
Posted in: General Questions on Writing
  Bee Hoon
07-21-2008, 2:12 AM
#41
^^ No worries. You usually write in the style that you personally enjoy, which is a perfectly acceptable reason :lol:...  [Read More]
Posted in: General Questions on Writing
  Bee Hoon
07-21-2008, 12:07 AM
#39
I should start reading books in english =/Yes, you should. You'd be missing out on countless awesomesauce books if you don't. Well, personally, I like to see a polished fic, and by this I mean minimal typos, punctuation and grammatical errors. I hav...  [Read More]
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