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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: Burnseyy's Poetry
  Bee Hoon
10-12-2008, 11:44 AM
#5
^Not to mention neighbours who beat the hell out of their spouses >:3 Nice imagery. Can't really help much though, as I'm not a poet :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: Umbral Tide: Prologue: The Stake Awaits
  Bee Hoon
10-09-2008, 9:14 AM
#2
It's an enjoyable read! I'd love to see where you take this :) Just one question: why bother building a spiral staircase if it's going to burn anyway? :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: Legacy of the Jedi
  Bee Hoon
10-12-2008, 12:19 PM
#16
Hmmm, not bad so far. Small errors here and there, but a quick polish would fix those :) Why would the Jedi condone his attachment to his parents? It is against doctrine, and if he can't even remember them, why would they tell him who his parents a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prior to Exile
  Bee Hoon
10-07-2008, 12:38 AM
#4
Alek Squinquargesimus is just a terrible name. I've never read the comics, but why such a literally unspeakable name? ;p Generally, I quite like the idea. The language is quite free of errors. I did find something strange though-> He frowned, bu...  [Read More]
Posted in: Various Star Wars arts
  Bee Hoon
10-02-2008, 8:12 AM
#3
^ I believe "well-endowed" is the phrase that you are looking for ;p I'm afraid I'm not much of an artsy person, so I can't really give constructive criticism. I do love the hair of the raven-haired girl in Otherworldly Battle, but the re...  [Read More]
Posted in: Exile's lill' vid section :D
  Bee Hoon
10-01-2008, 11:22 AM
#2
Next time, just PM a moderator or edit your first post;) There's a small box when you create a new thread, where you can check it if you want a review for the thread (by machievelli, if I'm not mistaken)....  [Read More]
Posted in: Survivour
  Bee Hoon
10-10-2008, 7:37 AM
#15
What's kohenada? And I think you mean permacrete, not percamete;) Practicing on a plain seems like a pretty big risk to me: an unobstructed view from all sides, plus a lightsaber which surely would stand out. Why does he have a personal ship? I'm al...  [Read More]
Posted in: Survival Of the Jedi
  Bee Hoon
09-29-2008, 8:13 AM
#5
You're welcome :) Just remember that there's no rush--polish it until you're happy, then publish it! All the best and hope to see a fantastic fic from you!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Survival Of the Jedi
  Bee Hoon
09-29-2008, 5:11 AM
#3
First off, there's punctuation errors, For example, it should be: "Execute Order 66." What do you mean by excited daydreaming? Can you wake from daydreaming? How did he know that he should not be on the Goliath, unless he had prior knowled...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-10-2008, 12:42 PM
#17
I do, but it needs a major clean-up because I was transposing it from third person to first person:P Or maybe not O_o You'll see!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-10-2008, 10:51 AM
#15
Thanks, JM12! Well, I do write when I feel like it;p Chapter One Part Two: Abyss The bell atop the Core has just tolled, signaling the hour before sunset, when there a stir among the doormen and security guards. Revan strained to hear the speeder t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-05-2008, 1:16 AM
#13
Thanks guys! It looked longer in word ;_; I shouldn't have split this and the next chapter, but oh well. What's done is done=p...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-04-2008, 5:23 AM
#10
Thanks Litofsky! :D Hmmm, you'll have to see what happens:P...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-03-2008, 10:11 AM
#8
Chapter One Part One:Jabberwillenglock Revan threw an arm over his eyes as the sky brightened. Shiny new shoes clicked sharply against the ferrocrete as happy, productive members of society went to work. He groped blindly for his bottle and raised...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
09-28-2008, 3:35 AM
#7
The Sabre is no ordinary beta, Bee. The Sabre is a beta auteur. <3 - It's spelled license, or at least it is in America. - I think you scrawl onto or on something, not in it. - It's unclear as to who the last sentence is directed at. Going by the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
09-27-2008, 1:11 PM
#4
Thanks for the comments! :) I'm especially glad to hear about the title, because Sabre and I agonised over it for almost an entire day. At that point I would have gladly gone with the most boring and drab title if he would let me :xp:...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
09-26-2008, 4:04 AM
#1
A/N: First off, many thanks to Sabretooth who is the most awesomesauce beta ever <3 I can't possibly tell you how helpful it is to give him a katana and let him loose :D Besides that, thanks to Emperor Devon and Rogue Nine for their encouragement...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Evil Transformation
  Bee Hoon
10-06-2008, 6:53 AM
#7
Just a few quick comments--the first thing that struck me about the portrayal of Vaeda (which incidentally, sounds like a play on Vader >.>), Kota and Fulay just doesn't seem to jive with their positions as Jedi Padawans and Master. The Jedi fr...  [Read More]
Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things
  Bee Hoon
10-02-2008, 9:56 AM
#13
I think that Me would make a pretty catchy song:P It reads like lyrics too!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time
  Bee Hoon
09-30-2008, 11:48 AM
#21
they’d settled on whether a holo-actress had had the cosmetic surgery she’d vigorously denied in this morning’s showbiz news broadcast.I'm of two minds about this. On one hand, it's a cute touch, and on the other, I'm not sure that...  [Read More]
Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time
  Bee Hoon
09-29-2008, 12:15 PM
#16
Heh, it's your call;) Oh no, I'll have to read An Easy Escape soon :O Oh, I see. Well, I suppose you'll have to decide whether you want the bright cheery family restaurant type, or the gloomy dodgy type of tapcaf:p Ah, the exfiltration makes sense. I...  [Read More]
Posted in: Vynn Drax: Down Time
  Bee Hoon
09-29-2008, 10:28 AM
#14
A bit of contradiction where you said a smuggler only trusts himself, and that Solo only trusts Chewie (which Vynn would probably call Chewbacca as I don't think they're close?). Nice touch with the smuggler's trust issues though :p It should be comp...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Bee Hoon
10-12-2008, 4:40 AM
#71
Double posting! ;_; First off, there's small errors here and there. I'm too lazy to point out all of them, but a quick example: Your salinity is high, pulse slightly faster – you are under stress. I presumed the threat on your life was the cau...  [Read More]
Posted in: Second expansion for Neverwinter Nights 2 (Storm of Zehir)
  Bee Hoon
10-12-2008, 5:48 AM
#63
So does that make the evil ending sort of canon then?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Second expansion for Neverwinter Nights 2 (Storm of Zehir)
  Bee Hoon
10-10-2008, 9:10 AM
#60
Both of those are good reads! Thanks :D ...where did heck did One of Many pop out from? O_o...  [Read More]
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