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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: September '09: Getting the crystals
  Bee Hoon
09-24-2009, 6:25 AM
#1
The same old drill; please read, review and vote! :) Heart of Stone (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200448) by machievelli Music of the Force (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200661) by Writer T'katlu (http://www.lucasforu...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Phantom Menace
  Bee Hoon
01-02-2010, 9:45 AM
#14
Small language notes: It's "taken aback", and a couple of instances with improper use of hyphens. "A venerable" is incorrect, as it is an adjective. The Force is our ally, not alley. There are more errors, but a slow and thorough...  [Read More]
Posted in: August '09: The Horrors of Loss
  Bee Hoon
08-08-2009, 8:00 AM
#17
D_Y, hmmm, I suppose you could if you felt that inspired :) Sorry, forgot to mention that the deadline is 14th August, so make sure your entries are in by that date!...  [Read More]
Posted in: July '09: Navigational Error
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 2:49 AM
#12
It was a tight race indeed! Congrats to Black Knight of Keno and Writer, who will choose the topic for August. Please post it asap :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: July '09: Navigational Error
  Bee Hoon
07-15-2009, 6:53 AM
#1
We have a good number of fics this month :D As usual, please read, comment and vote! :) Wrong Place, Wrong Time, Wrong Place (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=198791) by JediAthos The Unknown Planet (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread...  [Read More]
Posted in: As Lazarus Contemplates the Ocean
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 8:18 AM
#7
I am very confused :p But stylistically speaking, love it! I have a feeling I'm going to be thinking about Phlebas as I fall asleep and try to puzzle it out :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: From Error to Destiny
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 8:10 AM
#4
“Arkai, the loading is finished and the droids are securely aboard. Loading ramp is closing now” the computer told the smuggler right when the grinding of metal echoed through the hull, indicating a closing loading ramp.This sentence coul...  [Read More]
Posted in: Symmetry
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 5:35 AM
#8
smooth and groovy:lol: I'm not sure that lolling is the right word to use (especially after looking up the definition, but I closed the tab, so look it up yourself :p ). That having been said, I really enjoyed it! The style is good, and I definitely...  [Read More]
Posted in: Haven
  Bee Hoon
07-27-2009, 6:35 AM
#6
Heh, they'll probably retcon it so that he was :p Yeah, given that, I guess it makes more sense :) It's amazing that ship survived for that long if Ace can't maintain it :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: Haven
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 5:22 AM
#4
Nicely done! Arai sounds like a character I'd love to hear more about while Ace sounds like, well, Han Solo and Atton (but less angsty :D). But at present, they were nowhere near the Outer Rim. They were leaving Corellia with a cargo hold so full t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Life of Venku Ordo
  Bee Hoon
07-06-2009, 8:42 AM
#2
Merged posts because I am like that ;o If you really don't want machievelli to review, I suppose you could PM him. However, I don't see why you would want to do that as he gives really useful constructive criticism:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Unknown Planet
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 5:05 AM
#3
Xor assumed a defensive stance and helped it off.Helped what? The creature? O_o First of all, the fic seems to lack direction. The cumbersome sentence structure doesn't help, but it certainly would be better if you kept a single focus in mind, and t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Wrong Place, Wrong Time, Wrong Place
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 3:25 AM
#7
JediAthos, I salute your attitude :D Imho, DI put a lot of effort into writing such an indepth review, but it's very helpful :) DI's pretty said all that needs saying. The story fits the theme perfectly, although it's somewhat predictable as a result...  [Read More]
Posted in: July '09: Navigational Error
  Bee Hoon
07-15-2009, 7:47 AM
#17
D_Y, yep, that's fine :) Sorry guys! Fics are going up now! *is guilty*...  [Read More]
Posted in: July '09: Navigational Error
  Bee Hoon
07-03-2009, 8:26 AM
#12
Writer is right:) You can enter, but you can't win your own theme ;)...  [Read More]
Posted in: July '09: Navigational Error
  Bee Hoon
06-27-2009, 5:06 AM
#2
The deadline is 2 weeks from today, which means the 11th of July :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Some photoshop work
  Bee Hoon
07-03-2009, 7:48 AM
#27
Hmm, perhaps make the head smaller? The proportion of his head to everything else makes him look quite childlike. In addition, the colour of the outfit looks washed out compared to the face, and I'm not a huge fan of the background. I love the grinni...  [Read More]
Posted in: Some photoshop work
  Bee Hoon
06-24-2009, 8:11 AM
#4
I can't seem to see the pictures either :(...  [Read More]
Posted in: A trap
  Bee Hoon
06-16-2009, 12:41 AM
#10
Baby dragons or dragon eggs, if said protagonist was feeling particularly suicidal :P...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Soul Adrift
  Bee Hoon
07-03-2009, 7:43 AM
#124
^ No spammy posts asking for updates, please:P I'm sure Endorenna will update when she's ready!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Javyar's Wall of Fame
  Bee Hoon
10-07-2009, 3:36 AM
#28
'Getting the crystals' was the topic of September '09. machievelli takes top honours for Heart of Stone (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=200448), while Writer and Endorenna tie for a close second, with Music of the Force (http://www.lucas...  [Read More]
Posted in: Javyar's Wall of Fame
  Bee Hoon
09-08-2009, 7:52 PM
#27
August '09 gave us the bleak topic of "The Horrors of Loss". vanir came out tops again with Whole lotta loss (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=199477), while Alkonium's Loss (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=199487) ta...  [Read More]
Posted in: Javyar's Wall of Fame
  Bee Hoon
07-26-2009, 4:14 AM
#26
Another good number of fics this month for the topic "Navigational Error"! :D Writer and Black Knight of Keno tie for first place for Haven (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=198927) and From Error to Destiny (http://www.lucasforu...  [Read More]
Posted in: Javyar's Wall of Fame
  Bee Hoon
06-22-2009, 7:07 AM
#25
May had the topic of 'That Special Tune'. vanir takes top honours for Intention (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=197895) with 15 votes and Adavardes gets an honourable mention for Tick Tock (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=197...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Bee Hoon
08-24-2009, 8:49 AM
#1038
Thanks mach! :D I blame my procrastinating self :p...  [Read More]