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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: [Shortie] - Forever loved
  Bee Hoon
10-16-2008, 7:03 AM
#2
Just noticed that I didn't comment in Forsaken Path :O Anyway, I thought it was a lovely sequel, if bittersweet. The part where you described his conflicting feelings about silence was nicely done! Jonas' rhetoric is disjointed, as thoughts often are...  [Read More]
Posted in: Chronicles of a President
  Bee Hoon
10-16-2008, 8:23 AM
#3
Hurray, and welcome to the CEC! :D I keep picturing Litofsky as a Siberian tiger in a suit;p Anyway, don't mind me, for it is a good read:) Your descriptions are lovely, and our dear ADA seems like an impressive legal eagle :lol: As Sabre said, I'v...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Black Visor
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 10:40 AM
#4
Sounds more like Boba is trying to collect a bounty on them, but that seems pretty risky! I enjoyed the military talk, and there's some interesting descriptions in there. The story may have a somewhat improbable twist, but it does have potential :) A...  [Read More]
Posted in: In The Head
  Bee Hoon
10-15-2008, 10:19 AM
#1
A/N: The ending is abrupt, but as always, I am too lazy to do anything about that :p It's just a short silly piece, so don't expect any mind-blowing revelations :lol: I hope you enjoy! * * * “Well, check it again. It can’t be anything else.”...  [Read More]
Posted in: No Rules For Gods
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 9:55 AM
#6
I'm not going to read the whole thing and you know what I think! And I think you're evil for even coming up with the concept and I love how you used the creed as the title for every section and I like sentences which run like the wind and you know th...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Trooper's Tale
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 10:25 AM
#2
Ooh, I like the premise of disobeying Order 66!:D The story flows well, although there are small mistakes here and there. The pacing could be better, and the descriptions of Jade training are nice and crisp. I wish there had been more of Ryo's feelin...  [Read More]
Posted in: What is Nihilus saying...
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 10:15 AM
#23
I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks this (as I think I picked up the idea from somewhere out there on the internet), but I believe that what she was trying to say was that in the end, the being who held destroyed Katarr and held so much sway ove...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Obscure Circumstances Surrounding the Death of Sir Richard Raleigh Wellesley
  Bee Hoon
10-15-2008, 12:28 PM
#8
No birds chirp or coo on this field; their mirth has been replaced by the sharp words of rifles and submachineguns.As I've said, I like :) Sir Wellesley pushed his way out of the train, knowing that it could start any moment. He also knew that he wa...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Obscure Circumstances Surrounding the Death of Sir Richard Raleigh Wellesley
  Bee Hoon
10-14-2008, 10:40 AM
#2
I like! I still object to the use of metal detectors, but it does kind of foreshadow what happens. Which I suspected:P The way you describe the room and just blow it off had me in giggles, as did Marcus' screwy perspective. It's very whimsical in a d...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Graceful Exit
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 9:49 AM
#2
Inyrikins! <3 You wrote a fic of medium length! :D I liked it:) Language is good and flows nicely, except for the occasional teeny-weeny bit of awkwardness. Greiss and Calo seem to have a colourful history, but unfortunately, it's only hinted at....  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnseyy's Poetry
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 9:25 AM
#28
I like Secret better--it doesn't really seem to be about insanity, but more like self doubt and social isolation. Very easy to relate to, and hence very good! :) P.S. Sorry to spoil your fun, but I think you should not run around throwing cartwheels...  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnseyy's Poetry
  Bee Hoon
10-15-2008, 9:14 AM
#19
You bumped your head? :O Are you okay? When? How? Avoid any future potentially head-bumping activities! :3 That having been said, I like the untitled poem as well. Have you shown it to your mum? :P...  [Read More]
Posted in: Burnseyy's Poetry
  Bee Hoon
10-14-2008, 9:27 AM
#13
Very evocative, and I especially liked the first two stanzas of Place of Ghosts! Good work :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Legacy of the Jedi
  Bee Hoon
10-12-2008, 12:56 PM
#20
You already hinted that the other boy wasn't Javen's father;D Okie, but it would be good if you could justify them giving away their firstborn son, taking into consideration the fact that: 1. Royalty tend to be a tad obsessive about firstborns and li...  [Read More]
Posted in: Legacy of the Jedi
  Bee Hoon
10-12-2008, 12:45 PM
#18
Mmm, when I was younger, I used to love writng about precocious characters.One or two are okay, but you have to remember that they are exceptions to the rule, so don't overuse them. It may be hard to write from a POV of say, a 30 year old, but as it...  [Read More]
Posted in: Survivour
  Bee Hoon
10-13-2008, 11:40 AM
#18
I think there would be holovids about the jedi and sith. Anikin was arrogant and wouldn't expect an attack from a small child plus a lightsaber can cause a scar as ventress attacked and scarred anikins face with her lightsaber Yeah, I think so too...  [Read More]
Posted in: Starship of Fools
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 10:04 AM
#4
...as fast as the onset of a Hutt's intestinal difficulties!:lol: That was cute and silly! An enjoyable read! :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-16-2008, 8:12 AM
#24
*iz lag* Thank you very much for the comments! I really should read the EU stuff to give me a better feel of the SW universe... But I'm lazy and I have no idea where to start. Hee, poor Revan. No, he's not invincible, but Sabre keeps reminding me ho...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-13-2008, 6:13 AM
#22
Sabre, that is true ;p Darth_Yuthura, thanks! Hee, chapter 1 and 2 should have been published as one chapter, so that's my mistake:P...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
10-13-2008, 12:30 AM
#19
Thanks! ;D Hey, I need to write Exile as a bit more badass, since I usually write her as weepy and needy >.< Hee, Sabre practically rewrote the action scene. It received his tender loving attention closely, despite the fact that the fight proba...  [Read More]
Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 9:20 AM
#31
Mmm, I liked them both! The first two stanzas of "The Randomization of Nothing" were marvelously claustrophobic, while the rest of it evokes the fear of the void :O Eternal Night makes me think of a vampire--the incredibly preternatural typ...  [Read More]
Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things
  Bee Hoon
10-15-2008, 7:10 AM
#24
I swear, all your poems would make such awesome lyrics! :O I like it :) As you said, it's not sad, but I need a happy poem atm, so thanks :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Bee Hoon
10-17-2008, 9:12 AM
#79
Awww, get well soon! Food poisoning is miserable :( I'll get around to reading your fic--but no promises as to when, as I have been rather distracted :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: The False Peace
  Bee Hoon
10-13-2008, 2:26 AM
#75
Ah, I see. I haven't read any EU novels, so I'm kinda out of my depth ;D No problem, just give every chapter a quick read before posting. I find that it's a good way to catch errors :) Well, it isn't just salinity (by which I presume you're referrin...  [Read More]
Posted in: Questions about the Cantina? Ask them here!
  Bee Hoon
10-15-2008, 12:58 PM
#38
Endorenna, yes, they are:) CommanderQ, welcome to the forum! Click here for the full version (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=175496), but basically you just write your story based on this month's topic and start a new thread with it in this...  [Read More]
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