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JediMaster12

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Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars: Assassination Protocols
  JediMaster12
07-24-2006, 1:49 PM
#29
I liked what happened to HK though I think it would have been much funnier if you left in the programming that indicates the type of statement. That's what makes it comical. HK being meatbagized :lol: My version: Expletive: Dammit! I have been meatba...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars: Assassination Protocols
  JediMaster12
07-23-2006, 12:58 PM
#21
I just read the first two chapters and I find it to be particularly interesting. You have managaed to capture HK's murderous nature quite well though I hope to see some of the comedic versions. This looks like the makings of a good adventure. I see t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  JediMaster12
07-21-2006, 9:38 PM
#80
Comedic work in action and the master has just returned to witness it. I read the latest chapters and I have noticed a great improvement. It will be interesting to see how you will tie the past and the future together....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  JediMaster12
07-17-2006, 1:12 AM
#43
Well Chapter four has gotten a bit more descriptive and there are a few more details. As to the length problem, I'll let you in on a secret. My chapters average 4-5 pages typed at 1.5 spacing on Microsoft word. They would be longer at 2pt spacing. I'...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Heir of Darkness
  JediMaster12
07-15-2006, 2:31 PM
#35
I have read igyman's fic and I find it to be a very interesting read. I do agree with Jae that more description is needed to give and idea of facial expressions and feelings. Also I suggest that when you plan out a chapter you might want think about...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
07-08-2006, 4:27 PM
#249
"The door is unlocked and the alarms are going to ring any moment," Alkea replied from the inside. She crawled up into the vents to hide and wait....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
07-07-2006, 8:53 PM
#247
Alkea said nothing but turned tail to where the children would be. She went with a quickened pace. She used the FOrce to sense out the building and from the plans she had downloaded. She was going to rig the evac alarms so that they would leave....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
07-04-2006, 3:39 PM
#243
The Sith officer had no time to react except maybe squeeze off one shot as he was struck down by Alkea. When the room was full of bodies, she took a deep breath and it felt like she was choking. She glanced at the security cams and saw her brother le...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
07-02-2006, 7:19 PM
#241
They were silenced by the hum of a lightsaber as Alkea stood there in front of them. She said calmly and firmly, "I wouldn't do that if I were you. Now you are going to pretend like none of this happened. Got it?"...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  JediMaster12
07-17-2006, 1:16 AM
#83
Isn't a katana more deadly since they can be extremely sharp?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-24-2006, 2:02 PM
#167
Oh I have up until the last battle. I am almost finished writing this story. Teehee! as to the nausea, it's a bit of both but more likely from the bad memories of tumbling down the river near death. Well here is the next chapter and again involves a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-23-2006, 12:46 PM
#164
OK here is the next chapter. Again I went off my eccentric streak and used another movie. Try to guess. Chapter 7: Crash and Burn Belos was in worse shape than I thought. When we arrived we had to stop short at one of the moons. My Republic friends...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-21-2006, 9:18 PM
#162
Jae:That amber thing ties in with one of his descendants. Ashira from Broken Wounds- her eyes are amber. Other than that just keep reading. The master returns once more. Here is the next chapter for your reading entertainment and I have something in...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-17-2006, 12:59 AM
#158
That was the official reason. She could just be an advisor to Mara since she helped rescue her and knew her. Like Kirabaros would aske her that. Like he mentions, he only invades if it is urgent. Right now there are bigger issues. OK enough of that a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-15-2006, 3:34 PM
#156
To answer your question Pottsie, I used the name Zherron because it seemed to fit. I honestly did not think about Zherron from TSL but in short, they are not related. @igyman: Zoran I remembered from my book The Power of One and thought it to be a go...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-15-2006, 1:56 PM
#153
Ok everyone. Here is a new chapter. I think it is a bit mushy and dumb but other people seemed to like it so I am running with it. Here are some interesting tidbits and we get to see some old friends. Chapter 4: Last Words and Departure Two days of...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-14-2006, 9:36 PM
#151
He's not jealous because JC won him over with his charming personality. I think Carth called him a sweet talker at one point. Oh and Jae, I guess I wasn't clear on his training. I assumed he was getting better but I have also heard that sometimes cer...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-09-2006, 1:15 PM
#146
Chapter 3: Debriefing and Concerns The transmission was loud and clear: the governor of Belos was dead as well as most of the family, the civilian populace is being terrorized by the dead that littered the streets and the Blood King had a new warship...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-08-2006, 4:23 PM
#145
No not really. I knew the others would come in at different points. Juhani plays a bit of a part in this third segment near the end battle. That's all I will say until I post the next chapter. Maybe tomorrow will bring a new one. Who knows?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-08-2006, 1:41 PM
#143
Chapter 2: Training The next morning began my training and, for a change, I looked forward to it. I rose early as I usually did after having a nightmare. I dressed in a simple training tunic. I took a chance and glanced in the mirror. I looked at my...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-07-2006, 8:45 PM
#140
Book Three: The Return of Kirabaros It has been almost two years since the Blood King made his appearance with the death of Jacen Cirrus. He began a reign of terror beginning at Belos and attempted to conquer the people of Avalon and her sister plane...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-05-2006, 1:55 AM
#139
The epilogue I was thinking in terms that he would be disoriented. You don't know if you are dead or alive. I was intending it to be ambiguous. To answer the question of why he came back, well, you can't finish the story without the main character. I...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-04-2006, 3:35 PM
#136
Yep. Jae: The Blood King was a name that I took based on the Scorpion King but this guy lives for bloodshed. He is worse than a war mongrel of a Mandalorian. His appearance I borrowed from the Aztecs with the warrior order of the Eagles. Pottsie: I w...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-03-2006, 4:14 PM
#133
Chapter 30: Dreams and Despair -Revan- At one point I felt ready to give up the search but that tugging through our bond kept me going. I was actually ready to abandon all the normalcy of eating and taking care of myself. Carth actually had to force...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
07-03-2006, 5:43 AM
#131
Chapter 29: Thoughts of the Aftermath -Revan- I don’t remember much after I hit the boulder but that battle was imprinted to a degree in my mind. I remember waking up and saw Jacen and the Blood King on the ground. It looked like he had tackled hi...  [Read More]
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