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JediMaster12

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Posted in: The Sith Lord
  JediMaster12
06-01-2006, 1:36 PM
#103
Nice. Very good. Yeah the chapter is short. I would more reaction sentences in when characters are being spoken to. It makes for a better image of reactions of anger and the whatnot....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Lord
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 6:16 PM
#100
Nice two chapters Pottsie. Jae is right about the battles. The funny thing is that I can see the images in my head when I think about it or let my mind drift. I can see the smoke, the fire, the bodies, the bleakened landscape pockmarked by blast fire...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Lord
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 4:26 PM
#79
I know. Thanks for the advice. If it weren't for you, I wouldn't have put so much effort in my Fics. I am touched. Really. Another good chapter and a nice little plot twist. I just posted another chapter to Heart of the Guardian. I've got a few surpr...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Sith Lord
  JediMaster12
05-28-2006, 12:23 PM
#61
Good chapter Pottsie. I'm glad that you listen to the advice given to you. You are describing plots quite well. Keep it up. Incidently a new diddy is up. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Other]StarWars: Diddies
  JediMaster12
05-27-2006, 12:51 PM
#15
I'll PM them to you when I find them. I learned it by listening to it and I think the original artist calls it hip hop or something. I'll try and find it....  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
06-01-2006, 1:49 PM
#153
Alkea managed to find a few off duty Siths who looked like they were just chillin'. She had handed her lightsaber to Komad before entering since the reaction would not be favorable if she had brought it in. She siddled up and played cutsey with them...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 10:04 PM
#151
Akea entered the cantina and immediately she wrinkled her nose. She disliked alcohol and here it was like a permanent haze hovering everywhere. I am going to desperately need a shower after this she thought to herself. She walked in and scanned for a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 6:34 PM
#149
Alkea replied for her brother, "He will be waiting."...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 9:19 PM
#146
The debris had managed to stop shaking and Alkea calmed down. She said, "If you want to approach a male and drunken trooper, the best way to do it is with finesee. Believe me, nothing is more powerful than the smile of a woman." She looked...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 4:22 PM
#141
Alkea cringed at John's comment inwardly. She was thoroughly annoyed right now and it wsa starting to show in more ways than one. Some of the debris they were standing near was starting to shake. Alkea became aware with what she was doing and calmed...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 12:05 PM
#139
Alkea had cocked her eyebrow at John when he commented on flirting. She detested crude jokes at her expense and had detested them more since she had left. She ignored the brute and listened to the banter to figure out what to do about obtaining a Sit...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-28-2006, 12:26 PM
#131
Greea felt the exchange but didn't hear it. She was glad that Alkea was opening up again. She just squeesed her husband's hand as her way of understanding. Alkea looked at her brother and asked, "Where do we go from here?"...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-27-2006, 12:58 PM
#128
Brother are you trying to set me up on a date? Alkea sent through the Force. It was first time in a long time that she teased him. She liked the soldier and she felt she could let go but wasn't sure. She wasn't quite ready to be that sociable and she...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part II: Rise of the Jedi
  JediMaster12
05-26-2006, 10:00 PM
#125
Alkea heard the message from her brother. She was kind of sorry that their conversation was going to get cut short so she decided to make the best of it, "Revenge is never the best way to go. It consumes you. I ran away but that didn't help eith...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
05-26-2006, 10:19 PM
#17
Chapter 9: Fate and Coincidence Miklos and Andros were having a hard time of it. They had been trying to keep the troops from figuring out that Ashira was not there. They were successful in part that they always were careful to say that orders were r...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The Galactic Scream
  JediMaster12
06-01-2006, 1:41 PM
#28
Suggestion: check your spelling as often as you can and read through it twice for any unintentional grammar mistakes. I use spell check for the simple words....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The Galactic Scream
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 6:19 PM
#26
Nice. It is a bit short but I like where this is going....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The Galactic Scream
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 9:15 PM
#23
You have a good thing going but mostly my suggestion were what Jae said. She's a pal when it comes to critiquing! Anyway one suggestion I have is to label your chapters and post a single chapter in one post. It's cruel to the reader but it doesn't le...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
06-01-2006, 4:43 PM
#76
Chapter 12: The Academy I had a wave of nostalgic emotion, not of my own before falling off Lagos. I awoke to a gentle calm that I hadn’t felt in months. I sat up to find myself in a room that vaguely reminded me of my old room when Tergis trained...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 10:37 PM
#72
Chapter 11: The Long Journey There were no huge farewells the next morning as the three of us had left early. Three draigons were somehow located in all the chaos, including my especial pet Lagos whom I raised myself and they were loaded with our pac...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 7:25 PM
#71
Just wait and see :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 6:32 PM
#69
Chapter 10: Mobilization I was told I was out for two days and within two weeks the Rashikians had taken over the western provinces, killing all who resisted and claiming that their leader was coming. I remember waking up in the hospital to find my w...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 9:08 PM
#68
Thank you. Pottsie I didn't mention Zez Kai-Ell because well you'll see :D Currently I am working on a chapter that will require me to do a bit of explaining and well, you'll find out. Sith at Peace thank you for your comments. A lot of this culture...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  JediMaster12
05-30-2006, 12:25 PM
#65
Chapter 9: Conclave It wasn’t difficult to assemble the leaders for conclave. In fact most of the people seemed to know that it was going to happen before it was announced. I attributed it to the strange osmosis that occurs; it was like news went w...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  JediMaster12
05-31-2006, 6:22 PM
#175
Yes doesn't he? Another good chapter. The suspense is building and I am on the edge of my seat waiting...waiting...waiting......  [Read More]
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