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JediMaster12

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Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  JediMaster12
08-31-2006, 1:31 PM
#12
Yes it is related to Heart of the Guardian and has references from Broken Wounds. Mostly time connections. Igyman: I will have to send my HK unit after you. I cannot stand grammar police. Just kidding. Yeah I know all about that and I fixed my master...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  JediMaster12
08-30-2006, 6:19 PM
#7
Yes it is. This next chapter is an introductory one. Chapter 3 The day was a gentle spring one, the first of the season. It was evident in the grassy field near the river where a hut stood welcoming the spring air. The sounds of spring were joyous...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  JediMaster12
08-29-2006, 5:01 PM
#5
Thanks igyman. I purposely left the what in there on Ch 2 because I have heard the same response given to a similar question. Truth be told both can be correct but your version is more grammatically correct. Still your imput is good. Don't worry: thi...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  JediMaster12
08-29-2006, 12:28 PM
#3
Chapter 2 The office had a certain amount of stuffiness about it that was almost suffocating. Mostly it was due to the uneasy tensions among the people that were gathered there. The Chancellor was sitting at his desk staring at the row of faces that...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  JediMaster12
08-28-2006, 10:40 PM
#2
Chapter 1 The cruiser ship approached Coruscant with a peaceful grace that was the envy of the official diplomatic vessels used by the other Senators. It was sleek an unusual in design in that it was designed for speed but a tough ship, one of the c...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception
  JediMaster12
08-28-2006, 5:55 PM
#1
The continuing adventures of Kirabaros in: Star Wars: Heart of Deception It has been two years since the Blood King had been defeated by Kirabaros. Avalon and her sister planets have joined the Republic. Peace was just but a breath away but with a...  [Read More]
Posted in: Fanfics
  JediMaster12
08-28-2006, 12:34 PM
#5
I prefer the Archives for clean reading because on ocassion I go there to reread fics that I have been following. CEC is good when I want to hear comments regarding my own fics because writing, like anything else, is a learning process....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]Memories Do Help-Short Fic
  JediMaster12
08-26-2006, 1:04 PM
#2
Memories Do Help It was late into the night at a villa bordering the Jasilyn plains. The streams that flowed by the main house ran by with a gentle murmur. The music of the night was the soft songs of the weaverbirds and the crickets as they played...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]Memories Do Help-Short Fic
  JediMaster12
08-26-2006, 1:01 PM
#1
This was a piece that I wrote for my first dueling circle response. I have Jae Onasi to thank for being my beta reader. You know lightsaber duels are a deadly dance in grace but sometimes the mere memory of it can produce the most strangest of result...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie Fic] Memories Do Help
  JediMaster12
08-25-2006, 12:16 PM
#5
*Takes a bow* Thank you. This was an idea that I had been toying with long before the official challenge came out. You know me, the crazy ideas pushed to the limit. Thanks for your comments....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie Fic] Memories Do Help
  JediMaster12
08-24-2006, 6:16 PM
#1
This was a piece I wrote for my first KFM Dueling Circle Challenge. For those that have read my Heart of the Guardian trilogy, this is an event that comes from Book Three. I had fun writing this and I have Jae Onasi to thank for giving the beta read...  [Read More]
Posted in: Tips to a Good Fanfic!
  JediMaster12
08-17-2006, 9:28 PM
#36
If you read some earlier posts, a good idea is to look at famous paintings depicting battles. You can look at war documentaries or in my case, watch a ton of war movies. It also depends on what you are looking at. If it is a lightsaber duel, watch so...  [Read More]
Posted in: Tips to a Good Fanfic!
  JediMaster12
08-16-2006, 1:25 PM
#34
Limit distractions. This is important for some. I can write well enough when there is noise in the backround, but I write best when I'm alone and there's little noise (except for music). Brainstorm. When you're doing stuff that doesn't require much...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-28-2006, 5:50 PM
#52
Aww. Thanks Jae and you too igyman. I actually had some ideas on how to further develop their relationship but I think I am going to have to wait on that for a LONG time. The last scene, I was trying to get the feel of trust being rebuilt. Personally...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-28-2006, 12:43 PM
#49
Here is the last chapter to my story. I'll be posting a new fic soon. Thanks to all who have been loyal readers. Chapter 23: Forgiveness to the Future “Dragus is dead my master and the Belosians have defeated us.” “Yes I know. I foresaw that...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-27-2006, 11:38 AM
#48
Chapter 22: Broken Wounds Heal Three days passed since the Council sent for Andros, Miklos and Anakin and three days of trekking through the forest back to the cabin that Ashira went to stay in. All that was there when Obi-wan went through it were th...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-26-2006, 12:56 PM
#47
Chapter 21: New Beginnings The encampment was lively with the troops and the tribesmen mingling a few days afterward. Though they had their differences, they always stood by each other. That was the scene that Obi-wan saw when he made his way through...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-24-2006, 4:39 PM
#46
Just the fact that it is in the third person which makes getting different views alot easier. ;) To be honest I had a different line of thought going for this but it didn't quite fit well given the circumstances and the characters involved so I had...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-23-2006, 6:30 PM
#44
Chapter 19: Heat of Battle “Masters, we have engaged the enemy. We have strong reason to believe that one of our own has betrayed us.” “Certain are you, Jedi Andros?” Yoda asked. “Yes. They have been countering our aerial maneuvers with t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-22-2006, 6:37 PM
#43
I wasn't aware of the grammar stuff because it's fine on my master copy. Hmm... oh well. Here is another chapter for those kind enough to read. Just a mentioner: I am working on a brand new fic that brings back our old friend Kirabaros, Revan, etc. W...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-21-2006, 12:07 PM
#41
Chapter 17: Battle for the Herds After the dust settled, Ashira jumped to her feet. While waiting for the dust to settle, she had been picking the lock on her cuffs with a hairpin she had tucked in her mouth. Now that she was free, she moved towards...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-16-2006, 1:19 PM
#40
No offense taken. I know this isn't my best. The Lost Tales is put on the back burner until this is done and then I am going to rewrite it. Who knows I might post a minific of mine that I submitted to kotorfanmedia as a dueling ring challenge. I don'...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-15-2006, 6:32 PM
#38
Here is another chapter. Thanks to all who have taken the time to read it. Chapter 16: Revelation and Relief The command platform overlooked the enclosed kataran herds as they rustled trying to find more room to move. Shouts could be heard from belo...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-12-2006, 1:54 PM
#36
Another chapter for you to make fun of. Just kidding. Chapter 15: Spring the Trap Sheng Xin looked like a sleepy town when the first of the Separatist forces approached the city. In the skies above, the battleships loomed like the black cormorants s...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  JediMaster12
08-09-2006, 6:42 PM
#35
Thanks Jae. I'll have another chapter up soon, when I am finished writing it....  [Read More]
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