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Posted in: War and the Jedi
  machievelli
06-25-2007, 1:04 PM
#2
NORMAL FACTORS As Visas said in my version of TSL, ‘to my master we were pawns to be expended. To you we are that for we play this game for the Galaxy itself. But as this game is played out, as we die, know this my heart. We know the player weeps...  [Read More]
Posted in: War and the Jedi
  machievelli
06-25-2007, 1:02 PM
#1
Since my shorter answer may have sounded facetious, I decided to do what I am good at, explaining it using history. I mentioned in an earlier article how an infantry unit moves, and the reason I did was the Banzai charge they show in Attack of the C...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Non-SW] Warrior
  machievelli
05-28-2007, 4:20 PM
#2
Warrior's Lament The rain had been falling for several days, and even the farmers were growling. The Inn was quiet, except for the idle picking of the old bard in the corner. The old man had come to the town with the rain, and had spent the days dry...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Non-SW] Warrior
  machievelli
05-28-2007, 4:14 PM
#1
(Please leave comments here (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?p=2327473#post2327473). Thank you.) The biggest problem I have around Memorial day is i have my own beloved dead to remember. The list is too long to recount, but my younger brot...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Implications
  machievelli
06-12-2007, 1:09 PM
#5
I have considered this and I am going to do a separate article about what I think happened during that war...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Implications
  machievelli
06-11-2007, 12:46 PM
#4
I have a good understanding, but I would like to hear your opinion on this Mach: What, in your opinion, was the faults/positives about the Jedi teachings, ways, and Masters of Revan's time that may have explained so many going to war, especially Rev...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Jedi Implications
  machievelli
06-10-2007, 5:35 PM
#1
Some things to consider when you write your fan fic… As your critic, I have seen some pretty weird ideas among the stories I have read, and I am going to address them by doing what is called pointing out implications. Part of the reason I am doing...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-29-2007, 2:24 PM
#684
Coruscant Entertainment Center Between Shadows (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=174608) Bee Hoon From TSL: Excerpts from the author’s own TSL works. The style needs a bit of polishing, but not as much as I might anticipate. Remember...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-23-2007, 4:16 PM
#683
mach, I've only changed my Username once, but I will change it for a second time soon. Good reviews again. I know, kid. I'm just being a pain. BTW, for my research, do you have access to the royal patent office on the other side of the pond?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-22-2007, 2:17 PM
#681
Coruscant Entertainment Center This week I am going to review a body of work by two different writers rather than just one from each. This is not a special treat; it is because these two wrote seven stories in a row between them. ExiledFish is firs...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-15-2007, 1:53 PM
#677
Coruscant Entertainment Center The Beggining (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=177841) ExiledFish Before KOTOR: The woman later known as Kreia sets out on her first Padawan assignment. Some word usage problems, the title begs for a spel...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-14-2007, 3:55 PM
#676
Since I will be able to work on this friday morning, I am going to return to my friday postings. How long my job will stay stable, I won't bet on. This from a guy living in Vegas....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-07-2007, 3:48 PM
#674
Kotorfanmedia Old Wisdom (http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=4099) RogueLadySabyne Alternate Universe Set after ROTJ: When Luke needs someone to talk to he gets another lat Jedi. Try 4,000 years too late. I saw who showed up, and remembered a story I...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-07-2007, 3:46 PM
#673
June 7 With this one I am going to go back to six per main site so I can include the Jedi Archives and Galactic Senate again. If either of those drops off the screen, I will add two to each main sites for either the Archives or Senate. Coruscant...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-07-2007, 2:04 PM
#672
Canon: I have explained this earlier, but perhaps I did not make myself clear. We did not create this world we play in here. A man named George Lucas did. Rather graciously, he has allowed us, here in the official Lucasforums site, to play with his...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
06-01-2007, 11:38 PM
#661
ED,JM12, thanks for commenting. Just remember, I am not going to raise your allowances. Both of you, whether working against not being able to sleep, or writer's block understand the problem... Sometimes you have to work through what is bothering yo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-31-2007, 11:59 PM
#658
kotorfanmedia Ripples (http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=3884) Rc773 While the Star Forge is described by many as alive, the characterization you have given what is primarily a machine is a bit distressing. Besides, if the machine was that arrogant...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-31-2007, 11:56 PM
#657
Murphyboeing the kind of guy he is, I found out about Global Jedi Day the day after I posted my last reviews. Go figure... Coruscant Entertainment Center Love is a Lie (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=176191) Emperor Devon During TSL...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-26-2007, 12:16 AM
#655
As I said earlier, I will continue at this rate until mid June. Then I will go back to my normal lacksadaisical style...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-24-2007, 11:26 PM
#650
kotorfanmedia A Light from the Shadows, Part One & Prelude (http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?p=3578) Aelis KOTOR: The escape from Endar Spire. The style is a bit abrupt, and some spelling problems (Barracks not Baracks) but all of those are editi...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-24-2007, 11:23 PM
#649
Coruscant Entertainment Center Part 1 Evan Works // Prophecies of the Dark - Part I - Son of the Sith (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=173853) Koto[revan] No time line given in chapter one. A young girl finds herself part of a Sith prop...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-21-2007, 12:03 AM
#648
All right everyone, here's the situation. As I mentionede earlier, I have Wifi now, and that means I can get online. Problem is, I have maybe an hour and a half a day except for friday saturday and sunday, because I have to walk six blocks fartrher...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-15-2007, 6:50 PM
#647
Things will get better mach. As to the review, it's ok. At least you acknowledged it. I should point out that it is my first attempt at a songfic and it was just one of those days when I had to get the idea out of my brain. Keep a stiff upper lip mac...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-12-2007, 8:26 PM
#645
I actually think Revan had been plotting a coup at the start of the Jedi Civil War. The first planet he attacked was Foerost, which is practically next door to Coruscant. With the fleet he brought there and the other one he stole from the shipyards a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
05-07-2007, 9:26 PM
#641
I'll do that, but I may get them out of sequence accidentally....my apologies to anyone if I do. Mach--I just sent an email with everything in the Jedi Archives since your last review with one exception. Let me know if there are any problems. Tho...  [Read More]
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