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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: Astor's Little Men... (28mm miniatures)
  Bee Hoon
12-04-2008, 9:34 AM
#8
*steals Astor_Kaine's talent* They're lovely! I like the LotR ones in particular, but I'm biased;o...  [Read More]
Posted in: December '08: The Secrets of the Holidays
  Bee Hoon
12-04-2008, 9:22 AM
#19
mshcherbatskaya, you can just post it as a non-contest fic :) Or just post in TJC anyway, I always like an original spin on things! CommanderQ, it's generally a good idea to give a topic and leave it open to interpretation with as little restriction...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Bee Hoon
12-01-2008, 12:15 AM
#2
Welcome to the CEC! Just a couple of errors I noticed: *Kilan's His bounty hunters had caught the core-slime who had stolen a huge amount of credits from the Raxes, killed him, and recovered the money.I get who you're referring to, but it's a bit am...  [Read More]
Posted in: Unification
  Bee Hoon
12-04-2008, 9:30 AM
#6
I was commenting more on using "drops" actually. I would have expected a more technical term, but I am nitpicky like that :p...  [Read More]
Posted in: Unification
  Bee Hoon
12-01-2008, 10:57 AM
#3
Very nice! I note that your fics tend to have powerful political overtones, and this one stays true to that tradition. There's a few mistakes (e.g. using you're instead of your), but the grammar and the writing are generally good. As is often the cas...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Diaries of Johann Abernathy
  Bee Hoon
11-29-2008, 10:14 AM
#3
First of all, welcome to the CEC! :) The first thing I noticed about your writing is how long the sentences are (and this is coming from someone who is frequently guilty of the same thing!). The complex sentences and tendency to be somewhat verbose m...  [Read More]
Posted in: November '08: Decisions
  Bee Hoon
12-01-2008, 1:10 AM
#21
Congrats CommanderQ! You get to choose the topic of December's Tales:)...  [Read More]
Posted in: November '08: Decisions
  Bee Hoon
11-20-2008, 11:50 PM
#1
Please do leave comments and constructive criticism, as well as a vote for the submissions that you enjoyed!:D [Poetry] Death of the Force (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=193424) by Mr_BFA Fulfillment (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Barque
  Bee Hoon
12-04-2008, 9:29 AM
#9
Wow O_o talk about precocious!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Barque
  Bee Hoon
12-01-2008, 1:04 AM
#7
Not many people had written the Rise and Fall of the Third Reich at 12, and written a 30 page report on it.Did you mean read? Astrea wanted to scream but her father was abrupt about public scenesMm? There's a few more errors in grammar and punctuat...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Map]Yavin 4 Sith Colony
  Bee Hoon
11-20-2008, 11:35 PM
#2
The storage> Sith Lord's chambers.Given how the Sith are generally portrayed as selfish and such, I think this is hardly likely;o The training room is also bigger than the great hall--practical, but kinda defeats the purpose of the great hall! Bes...  [Read More]
Posted in: McLaine, Town Marshal
  Bee Hoon
12-01-2008, 11:43 AM
#13
Excellent start! I love all the little wry quips and how I can practically hear their voices in my head. Keep the chapters coming--I want to see what those sneaky Carsons get up to!...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Map]Rattlesnake, Arizona
  Bee Hoon
11-20-2008, 10:53 PM
#7
Pretty interesting, but why does Morgan and Sons have such a central location? As you said, no one really wants to have to go there and thus I imagine that most twonspeople would be more comfortable if it was more on the outskirts. P.S. Cowboy stor...  [Read More]
Posted in: Fan-made story/book series
  Bee Hoon
11-18-2008, 12:23 PM
#7
What's wrong with just reading the stories here?;o The way I see it, there doesn't seem to be much difference, except you seem to want to set a theme. Star Wars: Revan What the hell did Revan do in the Unknown Regions? Again, much freedom.I think t...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Last Line
  Bee Hoon
11-14-2008, 12:35 PM
#8
What if they didn't stop, though.Try asking it as an outright rheotical question? As it is, it doesn't have enough oomph, but I can see the potential for it. America remained silent in its isolationism and had concluded not to fight Axis forces.Conc...  [Read More]
Posted in: Whisper on the Wind
  Bee Hoon
11-09-2008, 12:25 PM
#4
All in all, it's a solid start, but I can't really say much more. Story thus far sounds a little trite, but it's well written. Since I'm a crazy fan of backstories, I wonder what Kuaile was like and about her relationship with Jordan. Nanren certainl...  [Read More]
Posted in: CommanderQ's art
  Bee Hoon
11-20-2008, 10:58 PM
#25
Well, as the other posters have mentioned, it does look pretty masculine. I'd say that the build is very masculine, and how stocky she seems adds to the effect. It's very hard for a woman to build much upper body bulk without generous consumption of...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Galaxy in Time
  Bee Hoon
11-11-2008, 11:31 AM
#2
Hey there:) First off, it's good that you introduced the characters beforehand, but perhaps you might want to consider keeping a separate list, and updating it as you slowly work the characters into the story. Besides that, I'm also old-fashioned in...  [Read More]
Posted in: November '08 Topic: Decisions
  Bee Hoon
11-20-2008, 10:49 PM
#30
Absolute last call for entries! The fics will be up in an hour or so :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  Bee Hoon
11-14-2008, 11:20 AM
#64
You changed Kiara's name to Ciara ;D Very nice, and it's amazing to see Zakal's tactics in play! The government obviously has a very high opinion of Mando'a strength (I mean, 16000 against 80? O_O), and it's apparently for good reason. It's a little...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  Bee Hoon
11-08-2008, 3:20 AM
#46
Merisa is such a steely little girl! I like how she was imagining what the helmet would feel like and ended up concluding that it was uncomfortable. The various functions of the helmet is something that never occurred to me at all, and as is usual wi...  [Read More]
Posted in: Survivour
  Bee Hoon
11-12-2008, 11:55 PM
#26
There are still some typos here and there, but it's definitely improving! I like how he considered various methods of escaping, and how Andrew was burning himself because he was all nervous and jumpy was a nice touch! It'll be interesting to see them...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
12-04-2008, 9:40 AM
#49
Late reply is late >.> Thanks for the comments <3 Litofsky, that is because I am fail at writing fight scenes :lol: I get bored after two paragraphs and want MOAR EMO FLUFF. Endorenna, I'm still a little undecided. We'll see how it goes;o...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
11-29-2008, 11:47 AM
#45
mur'phon, awww, thanks! That's high praise :) I hope you didn't get in too much trouble. Mr_BFA, well, it's always nice to have someone enthusiastic :D Chevron 7 locke, you have learned well, young one *nods wisely and strokes inexistent beard* Sa...  [Read More]
Posted in: FanArt-Resources
  Bee Hoon
11-09-2008, 11:04 PM
#3
Hey there, I'll be kinda tied up for the next couple of weeks, but if no one else comes forward by then, I'd be happy to help :) My art is failsauce, but I can help with dialogue and the scenes, as well as with the plot....  [Read More]
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