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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: The Ebon Hawk Hijinks (A KOTOR/TSL Comedy)
  Bee Hoon
12-24-2008, 10:59 AM
#5
Bastila: I am a jedi, thank you very much. We are a rare breed. Who else is a jedi here besides me? (Revan, RGN, Atton, Bao Dur, Disciple, Jolee, Juhani, Mira, Visas, and Handmaiden all raise their hands):lol: There's the occasional error, as well...  [Read More]
Posted in: Dec '08: Secrets of the Holidays!
  Bee Hoon
12-21-2008, 10:52 PM
#1
Just in time for Christmas :p Please do give constructive criticism and vote for entries that you enjoyed! :) Christmas on the Ebon Hawk (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=194594) by Chevron 7 locke The End of the Beginning. (http://lucasforu...  [Read More]
Posted in: Christmas on the Ebon Hawk
  Bee Hoon
12-23-2008, 11:12 AM
#2
The book was titled: How to make friends and lose the snooty Jedi attitude.:lol: Well, it's pretty short and silly, but quite enjoyable all the same. The idea of Christmas in Star Wars is questionable--it would have been better if you had just creat...  [Read More]
Posted in: On The Run
  Bee Hoon
12-17-2008, 12:18 PM
#2
those snipers were probably are trying to blast her head off now.Oopsie! “Screw it.” She retorted to herself,"Screw it," she... Hmm, I think retorted is a little inaccurate--perhaps try something else? :) It will be alright un...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie] Keep You Away
  Bee Hoon
12-17-2008, 12:25 PM
#9
He walked up the street for any indication that a fight had just broke out, All in all, pretty good! I liked the premise of a friend who is willing to stop you from doing something that you will one day regret. As I've said repeatedly, your poems wou...  [Read More]
Posted in: The End of the Beginning.
  Bee Hoon
12-23-2008, 11:06 AM
#4
Endorenna is correct, our rules state that we require Star Wars fics. And now I see why you said it didn't fit the topic! If you like, I can move it to the main forum, as it is ineligible:P But anyway:P Bruce Wayne stared at the grey stone floor of...  [Read More]
Posted in: Assisted Suicide
  Bee Hoon
12-17-2008, 11:57 AM
#51
you may be bedridden and in pain, but you make the most of it, you to rise above the crisisAs others have said, easier said than done. Other more experienced and more eloquent people have said their pieces, but above all-> 5. We need to be lookin...  [Read More]
Posted in: Assisted Suicide
  Bee Hoon
12-15-2008, 10:28 AM
#3
Good topic! My feelings on this has always been ambivalent--on one hand, there is church dogma dictating that suicide is a fast track to hell and that life is sacred (which I still think it is). On the other hand, is it really right to be the one to...  [Read More]
Posted in: Exodus
  Bee Hoon
12-09-2008, 10:03 AM
#6
Yep, changed the title :) It's an interesting beginning, and your descriptions of the battle are good (way better than my fight scenes :D )! I'm not sure about the allusion to a vortex (but it does get points for creativity!), and you used death twic...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Within
  Bee Hoon
12-09-2008, 8:55 AM
#11
Oh and I was saying that after some of the things that he's done, Jonas is finding it hard to look at himself in a positive light. Not being able to look himself int he eye and reassure himself that everything is OK.Yep, I got that. It's just that th...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Devil Within
  Bee Hoon
12-06-2008, 9:56 AM
#7
To make up for being constantly left behind for A Dark Path, I shall now give you a super long review (which unfortunately will probably be nitpicky. Poke me if you object!) ...desecrating it of its taint.Hmm, I don't think desecrating is the right w...  [Read More]
Posted in: Mira's Vision
  Bee Hoon
12-06-2008, 9:04 AM
#5
Hey there, welcome to the CEC :) I noticed that this is the second time that you are posting this story, and I don't really see any changes besides the spacing:/ In any case, there's minor errors here and there, such as using your instead of you're,...  [Read More]
Posted in: SANDBANKS
  Bee Hoon
12-04-2008, 11:07 AM
#5
I-I'm scared ;_; Where's my mummy? I WANT MY MUMMY!!!...  [Read More]
Posted in: December '08: The Secrets of the Holidays
  Bee Hoon
12-15-2008, 9:10 AM
#28
Thanks for the link, Litofsky:) It's already the 15th for me, and I'm hoping that more entries come in asap!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
  Bee Hoon
12-20-2008, 1:55 AM
#47
An hour later, Cadran was woken from his revere*reverie where the mans *man's eft the atmosphere closely persued by 6 TIE fighters.*pursued Tegs enormous hand clapped him *Teg's I can take you too them.*to Just a quick run-through to point out t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Unification
  Bee Hoon
12-09-2008, 9:53 AM
#12
If it is not to troublesome*too A rather stocky woman (not portly, but of a large build, presumably from a lifetime of hard work)We get the idea xD and for the past three decades yearsOops! Taking her seat, a middle-aged man with a pale complexion an...  [Read More]
Posted in: History, part 1
  Bee Hoon
12-23-2008, 11:20 AM
#2
Nilly looked at his grandpa. the young child sat on his leg and listened as his elder told a story.What story is this? And "sat on his lap" would be more accurate ;) There's plenty of errors (capitalization, spelling, grammar). I'm not qui...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
12-23-2008, 11:18 PM
#60
Sabretooth, don't discount the role of Captain Baseball Bat Boy! :P Note: Any funky grammar in the next part is entirely my fault, as I resisted Sabre's katana. As is the complete lack of action. I like emo fluff :3 Chapter 4: Love|Need What is ne...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
12-10-2008, 9:34 AM
#58
HOP, thanks! :D I have Sabre to thank for that--he made me play Max Payne 2 to see dysfunctional romances:P Mr_BFA, oh snap, my editing skills PHAIL. Thanks for pointing it out, and for the lovely review :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
12-09-2008, 9:02 AM
#55
Thanks for the comments, everyone :) Litofsky, holy cow, thanks! That was careless of me :P Moo, I really have to work on making my writing less confusing;o I have a bad habit of assuming that the reader has access to all the random daydreams and plo...  [Read More]
Posted in: Shreds of a Dying Belief
  Bee Hoon
12-05-2008, 11:36 PM
#50
Oh snap, a double post :lol: Chapter 4: Rain "Revan was power. It was like staring into the heart of the Force.” Rastler watched the soldier pull a black stocking mask over his face, and as always, he was amazed by the transformation. Fear...  [Read More]
Posted in: BFA's Poetical Place for Poetical Things
  Bee Hoon
12-17-2008, 12:01 PM
#69
I like "Lazy" :) In "Life of Truth", who's Gho?...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Soul Adrift
  Bee Hoon
12-23-2008, 10:38 AM
#94
*shakes head* A lot of the replies in this thread are borderline spam. Keep it on topic folks, which is to say constructive criticism and not repeated calls for another chapter!...  [Read More]
Posted in: (FIC)Kotor 2: The Good ending
  Bee Hoon
12-23-2008, 11:22 AM
#10
Mach is going through old fics which may have been missed in his reviews. So yes, it is read in past tense, as this is how he is keeping track of the ones he has read....  [Read More]
Posted in: story: Mira's Vision
  Bee Hoon
12-09-2008, 10:23 AM
#11
The new thread is here (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=194292). In the future, please do not start a new thread for revisions--you may replace the chapter and post an update to let everyone know that you have edited it....  [Read More]
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