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Bee Hoon

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Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Bee Hoon
02-24-2009, 11:53 PM
#1268
Hi there, everyone! <3...  [Read More]
Posted in: February '09: Essence of the Dark Side
  Bee Hoon
02-24-2009, 1:37 AM
#1
We have a good number of entries this month :D Please do read, comment and vote! They will pay.... (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=195676) by JAvatar80 The Split (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=195686) by Kyvios Virul (http://luc...  [Read More]
Posted in: Silence
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 2:37 AM
#6
CommanderQ, thanks! Revan is a guy in my fanon;) I hope to tie it in with my long fic...eventually. *is notoriously lazy* Chevron 7 locke, thankies! I'd like to think so, but there are far more original entries in this month's contest :p Endorenna,...  [Read More]
Posted in: Silence
  Bee Hoon
02-21-2009, 9:47 AM
#1
A/N: Sooooo I actually just wrote the second part, and then decided that it needed background, and then debated whether or not I should post the background because it might ruin the atmosphere.... @_@ Make me happy and completely separate the two par...  [Read More]
Posted in: So Much Death
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 1:34 AM
#4
What's neimatodes and crimeans? :p Sorry, my EU knowledge is virtually zilch. There's a few mistakes, e.g. mite and site instead of might and sight, best instead of beast, releasing instead of realising, when instead of went, excepted instead of acce...  [Read More]
Posted in: Devouring Katarr
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 12:26 AM
#3
Very nice! I'm glad you explained your inspiration for it. I especially like Nihilus' POV. It's scary! One thing though--shouldn't Visas have been quite a bit younger than she was in the game?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Crimson Tide
  Bee Hoon
02-26-2009, 2:39 AM
#21
Ease up on the spam. Either post chapters, news (to a certain extent) and feedback. Use profile messages for anything else ;)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Enlightenment of Blood
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 1:53 AM
#3
OOh, very very good piece! I like your flowing style, as well as your excellent use of your extensive vocabulary. The tone is very convincing, and completely insane in a logical kind of way. Just one thing: it's Nar Shaddaa, not Nar Shadaa. Blame Obs...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Darkness Incarnate
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 1:43 AM
#3
There are a few minor errors, such as "images of pure vulgar". "He drew placed the cylinder", eery instead of eerie. Reading through the fic carefully after a break will help you pick up those errors. As igyman said, this is a ver...  [Read More]
Posted in: Virul
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 2:05 AM
#5
This feels more like a summary or a prologue. As I too am not familiar with the RP and hence the characters involved, I can't really say much. Your style is pretty smooth though :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Dragonfighters
  Bee Hoon
02-19-2009, 11:45 AM
#5
The scene was well-written, as previous posters have said :) It's well polished and is very traditional fantasy--not a bad thing in itself, but it;s too early to say as we haven't seen much of the plot yet :) The fight descriptions are smooth and det...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Squad
  Bee Hoon
02-21-2009, 10:37 AM
#11
Ah, forgot to ask in my previous post...if magic was sealed off, how did the remaining ones conceal their appearances? Then it happened. The parish priest at St Patrick’s cathedral had always been a gentle man, and when he woke up after a long...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Squad
  Bee Hoon
02-19-2009, 11:34 AM
#8
I like how creative it is, although there are typos and punctuation errors. As always, all your little touches add great depth: the regulated flying height, the unicorn (!!), the explanation of the resonance field (although I got lost somewhere throu...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Squad
  Bee Hoon
02-14-2009, 10:14 PM
#6
Pretty darned interesting! The setting seems somewhat reminiscent of Eoin Colfer's Artemis Fowl series, except that the Faerie seem to coexist along humans much more openly. Can't imagine a dragon working as a jetliner though xD...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Split
  Bee Hoon
02-27-2009, 9:08 AM
#8
Well, you won't be able to edit the fic while it's still in Javyar's :) After the contest ends, a moderator will move it to the main CEC, where you can then edit the post to reflect your revisions and post subsequent installments :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Split
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 2:19 AM
#4
Hey, there welcome to the forums and to the CEC in particular! :D There quite a few minor mistakes here and there--grammar, spelling, punctuation, and some word usage ones which I have pointed out below. As mach, the resident critic always says, pol...  [Read More]
Posted in: They will pay....
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 2:34 AM
#6
There are minor errors (typos, a bit of grammar and punctuation). The story is a little trite, but it's very well-executed. It has a very real, genuine (as Sabre would say) tone? I'm not quite sure how to describe it, but it's a rare quality :) It's...  [Read More]
Posted in: Feb 09: Essence of the Dark Side.
  Bee Hoon
02-21-2009, 9:35 AM
#29
Jae's working her way through the list, so just be patient k? ;)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Feb 09: Essence of the Dark Side.
  Bee Hoon
02-21-2009, 8:18 AM
#27
Admiral_Thrawn, no worries :) Just take it as it comes! igyman, that looks fine :) LordOfTheFish, it'll be fine ;o Practice makes perfect anyway!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Feb 09: Essence of the Dark Side.
  Bee Hoon
02-14-2009, 9:54 PM
#16
^ I'll defer to Mr_BFA on this, but I think that being Force-sensitive is not a requirement....  [Read More]
Posted in: Feb 09: Essence of the Dark Side.
  Bee Hoon
02-09-2009, 9:09 AM
#3
Yes, it is! :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Cataclysmic Infinium
  Bee Hoon
02-21-2009, 10:24 AM
#9
Well, for something it's only about 2 kilometres wide, it seems extraordinarily broad ;D There's some errors e.g. odd of (instead of odd type of, or odd for gamma ray...), disinigrate instead of disintegrate. Have a careful read trhough and see what...  [Read More]
Posted in: Best Way to Die
  Bee Hoon
02-25-2009, 4:36 AM
#49
By turning into a supernova. If I'm going down, I'm taking LF with me ;p...  [Read More]
Posted in: A Soul Adrift
  Bee Hoon
02-21-2009, 9:20 AM
#111
Nice update! I like how Sri was spitting mad enough to threaten Nya'van, yet had enough of Sri'lo in her to want to help her when Nya'van was being tortured. The descriptions are smooth and varied, while the plot is progressing nicely. I'd liek to se...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  Bee Hoon
02-27-2009, 10:09 AM
#965
Thanks for the review and the pick of the week! :D...  [Read More]
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