Nice job. I liked seeing the character development of Ashira and Obi-wan both, and I liked that it _didn't_ end in an expected kiss. The touch on the hands was just enough.
The bad thing--it's done.... :D
Aww. Thanks Jae and you too igyman. I actually had some ideas on how to further develop their relationship but I think I am going to have to wait on that for a LONG time. The last scene, I was trying to get the feel of trust being rebuilt. Personally I liked how it turned out even though it is not one of my best.