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machievelli

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Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2005!
  machievelli
02-04-2006, 10:47 PM
#10
Again I am not voting. My preferences are my own....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Adventures of Captain Proton!
  machievelli
02-09-2006, 10:45 AM
#5
Umm..... okay.... 20's style sci-fi? Little scary, and isn't this forum only made for Star Wars related stuff only? Edit: I'm not saying that it's bad, just that it's 20's sci-fi, and that stuff can give little kids nightmares. Keep up the good work,...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
02-05-2006, 3:29 PM
#23
you remembered!...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
02-04-2006, 10:41 PM
#21
The record is 1070+ pounds. Now my question is; Did I say he was human?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
02-04-2006, 1:57 PM
#18
Nar Shadaa Jaden ran, leaping across the gap between the building ledge and a passing air-car. The pilot had time to scream at him before he was gone to the next building. idn’t like this when it happened on Coruscant. I like it even less today g...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
02-04-2006, 1:54 PM
#17
Umm, so I trust that my noticing the table weight shows that I paid attention when I read your story? I assume that most writers on this forum are looking for constructive criticism for their stories but am never quite sure. The majority of the feedb...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
01-30-2006, 11:06 AM
#15
Hai Wan, I noticed that after I wrote it, and changed it, but not here. Sometimes I'd just like to know that someone is paying attention. The table in the revised version is only 120 kilos....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-16-2006, 10:34 AM
#171
After almost five months of doing this I am not surprised by the wealth of fan-fiction out there. I am surprised by all of the excellent work done. The fact that we are writing only fan fiction begs the question; Why aren’t we doing this for a liv...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-16-2006, 10:18 AM
#170
Translation: 'I can see your house from here' According to author Terry Pratchett The Whatever prize. is what you recieve. When ever I give my stepdaughter too much information (Since she's your age guys, you might understand) her reply is; Whatev...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-15-2006, 11:20 PM
#168
You get the prize VV....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-14-2006, 10:59 AM
#158
I find pleasure in cussing in a variety of languages that breed doesn't understand. :D But WTH, I'm studying Latin, so I suppose I've picked up another new word... >.< Why don't you check out this then; Ab hoc possum videre domum tuum When y...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-14-2006, 10:54 AM
#157
And wait for Fall of the Sith until it's done, ok? I quite distinctly remember a nasty post which ended with you asking me review the entire trilogy in toto. I have not reviewed the third part yet per that request. As I also PMed you, if you want me...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-13-2006, 10:06 AM
#153
Jedi, I'm like an honest referee. I call 'em as I see 'em...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-12-2006, 6:13 PM
#150
Dylan, if you don't mind having me read it and send you a review as I'll post it before I do, I can read it this week. If you want a repair manual for the story if it needs it, I can send that too. Take your choice....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-11-2006, 2:16 PM
#148
RB, I have already written the review (I read the story right after we talked) but it hasn't been officially reviewed because every time someone comments on a story, or it is added to, it pops back up to the top of the queue and I am working from the...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-10-2006, 11:22 AM
#144
For some reason the entire first paragraph is now a hyperlink, and the second review is not. As my signature says Stercus, Stercus, Stercus, * Edit: Hehe no need to say bad words in Latin...Errare humanum est - fixed! there was a ] missing ;) -...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-10-2006, 10:58 AM
#143
Return of the Exile (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=154792) Jedi Knight 707 The Exile prepares to face the same danger that has killed so many. I am Sorry JK, I honestly thought I had reviewed your work. Better late than never... The...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-10-2006, 10:46 AM
#142
Yeah, you still haven't reviewed Return of the Exile :( You hurt my feelers :( You're right. I should have reviewed it about three weeks ago. I am terribly sorry....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-04-2006, 1:35 PM
#138
What's with the Hatorade Mach?? No review for me, and no allowance raise? How wude! Did I miss one? If so I am sorry. If not, then no dessert for you tonight youngster....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-04-2006, 1:31 PM
#137
I though you onlt reviewed completed works? I know at least one of those is obviously incomplete. Am I wrong? Anyway, nice work, Mach! Looking forward to next reviews! Doc, if I only reviewed completed works, I would have little to review. My own a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-03-2006, 6:27 PM
#132
I am still not going to raise your allowance...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-03-2006, 10:09 AM
#130
All right, let's see if it works... Lucas forums Coruscant Entertainment Centre Before I Leave you... (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=158738) Darth Longie Interlude between KOTOR and KOTOR II. Revan remembers a past teacher Dl said h...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-02-2006, 11:03 AM
#127
To RC, thanks, son, but I am not going to increase your allowance....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
02-01-2006, 11:01 AM
#124
Well later today, after my feeble attempts to try and hyperlink the story titles, I will e-mail the review this week to Darth. But I will try to do it myself first. I have noticed that three people out of 27 say go to hell. That's one in nine so far....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
01-28-2006, 2:05 PM
#121
he should scrap it and buy the latest gizmos, man. :D good work anyway. though i think youll like my fic better if you go through it fully, wont take much time. I can't afford the 'latest gizmos'. What happened is my flipping dog (Which my wife bou...  [Read More]
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