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machievelli

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Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
12-01-2005, 11:13 AM
#7
see! Shows what I know. Any help here would be appreciated. Does anyone have a list of characters from the end of the Jedi Academy books? The only two I have are Jaden and Rosh from the Jedi Academy game...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
11-29-2005, 12:20 PM
#4
I got hung up because when I introduced the man talking to her as Luke Skywalker, I suddenly realized that I hadn't read that section of the Universe! I am unsure if she should be in the Jedi Academy trilogy, or after that when Mara Jade married Luke...  [Read More]
Posted in: Acceptance
  machievelli
11-26-2005, 4:19 PM
#1
A brief intro to another SW book I hope to sell. I just came up with the idea the other day and it bugged me until I wrote it. Acceptance In the beginning... “Come out little girl.” A voice said. It wasn’t a harsh voice. In fact it was kind...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Best??
  machievelli
11-13-2005, 1:06 PM
#18
As the local critic I won't vote on this because everyone I've read so far has done their best, and some have ideas that are new and astonishing to me. It wouldn't be fair to the others who just need some tweaking to make thier work excellent....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-10-2005, 11:39 PM
#52
as for hyperlinking, I'm an old man who remembers when a computer as powerful as this POS of mine needed a 20 by 20 room with seven half inch wide, ten inch reel tape drives. I don't know HOW to hyperlink...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-10-2005, 2:57 PM
#50
Jedi707, I've been going from old to new...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-10-2005, 2:46 PM
#49
guys, until Darth333 asked me, I was just running through the sequence from start to finish. Cut me some slack!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-09-2005, 10:32 AM
#45
Darth333, who asked me to start doing these made one request recently, and that was that I post URLs for the stories I review. If you want one for a previous review, please contact me via my own e-mail audmun@msn.com. Eventually I will have one attac...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-02-2005, 10:21 AM
#44
The Corrupted Republic Steven Ten Years after Kotor II, Possibly intro to Kotor III A man with no memory has visions aboard the Yavin Spire. The writer tends to use the wrong words, or to misspell them Like another person who had seen the work, I a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-30-2005, 12:30 PM
#42
VV there's always one in every crowd. I'm just glad it's only the one....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-28-2005, 11:59 AM
#38
Great! Now I'm a post-it note!!!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-25-2005, 11:47 AM
#35
From Lucasforum: From the Coruscant Entertainment center A Jedi's Promise Fuu Based on events before KOTOR A young Jedi carries out her promise to the man she loves, Revan... Well done, with some interesting quirks that keeps you interested. Kee...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-23-2005, 10:05 AM
#32
People, this only started a month ago, right? When I was accepteded, Darth told me it would be posted on Star Wars Knights, and it has. I know I post it. Maybe they will do a sticky for the other segments of the forums, but I'm not worried or offende...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-19-2005, 4:11 PM
#26
To sabretooth, once i am done with the KOTOR line I will begin on the other games. When I do, I will post here and there under the same byline Jedi Knight 707. I will get there, I promise....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-18-2005, 8:47 AM
#23
I may be a bit slow on updating for the next couple of weeks. Our car was stolen this morning before 2AM and we're going to be frantic trying to come up with the cash for a new one... From Lucasforum: From the Coruscant Entertainment center The St...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-13-2005, 1:16 PM
#20
To Vlada, don't worry! I'm waiting for more. To Alkonium, I promise I will get to it. I started at the bottom so that I was going by older works. Hallucination, I have on my computer right now forty odd stories that have gotten about as far as you ha...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-13-2005, 2:28 AM
#16
Sorry everyone, a busy day interfered. From the Coruscant Entertainment center A SHORT CLONE WARS TALE John Skywalker A brief vignette At the end of the Clone Wars As I have said of others, he doesn’t know the military, but as I also said befo...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-08-2005, 10:10 AM
#15
I will look and as I said above to Doc and RC, will send you a copy of what the review will say. If you want a down and dirty 'the spark-plug goes there' review, send me a PM, and I will....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-04-2005, 10:17 AM
#13
An Empire to Crumble; Sithums Set in the post Kotor universe with a dark ending. Darth Revan and his apprentice Bastila go after the survivors of the fleet battle. Well written, needing only some tweaking to make it excellent. Angels of Destructio...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
11-01-2005, 10:17 AM
#11
The reason I started at the bottom was that those were the older stories, maybe languishing because of lack of interest, or the first attempts by some kid who then was too embarrassed to go on. The only site I am reviewing where this is not the case...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
10-31-2005, 10:00 AM
#9
DOc, I am working from the bottom to the top on critiques, but if you want a PM critique (I pull my punches not at all in them) I'd be glad to....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
10-29-2005, 4:45 PM
#6
Thanks for your praise Vladimir, but it may surprise you to know that I have only a High School education. I have always read anything I could get my hands on, and having a mother that constantly ragged on me to do it right the first time was a big h...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR "0.5"
  machievelli
11-26-2005, 3:56 PM
#28
Give me the URL for your site, and tell me what the problem is. I'll see if I can help...  [Read More]
Posted in: KotOR "0.5"
  machievelli
11-26-2005, 1:12 PM
#26
Quick questions: Bastila was from the planet Talravin, correct? Revan was already "dead" when Telos was destroyed, right? Did Carth ever give his wifes name? I don't think he did, but I want to make sure. Bastila was brought from Talravin,...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] A Jedi's Promise
  machievelli
11-04-2005, 2:06 AM
#15
According to what I have been able to ascertain Except for the fact that Exar Kun fought against the Republic (The writers of the game got it wrong, try 4,000 years earlier, not 1000) that he made his last stand on Yavin 4, and that he killed off a r...  [Read More]
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