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Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-10-2006, 10:39 AM
#72
Bait Meera: Planet In the Otegga system deep in the Lesser Plooriod Cluster. Galactic Reference GSFD-446/CR-A4/E-2/3. Class: C-7 class, similar to Coruscant before urban construction. Native animals and planets graded at level 4, some dangerous, bu...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-06-2006, 11:04 AM
#71
Wow, I was laughing so hard at that same thing. Still it is kind of gross and wrong :nut: Great chapter once again Machievelli. When will you be posting the next one? Again, I have to pay homage to the movie Battle Beyond the Stars. Back when Starl...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-06-2006, 11:00 AM
#70
Doesn't sound like there is much technique to me, just mechanics... you know, "Wham! Bam! Thank you ma'am!" :naughty: It matches up with the "all-business" attitude that machievelli depicts the Mandalorians with though. :D Anothe...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-05-2006, 3:42 PM
#66
Infiltration Sanji had not even known he had a special ability when he was younger. Sure he could duck a fight or his parents when they came looking to punish him, but every child has those days when everything goes right. He merely thought he was l...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-04-2006, 10:36 AM
#65
So what was Sanji doing during the diversion? I wonder, hmm... Great chapter Machievelli. I agree with cutmeister, there is some tension building up. Can't wait to see where the story goes from here. What was Sanji doing? Bwahhaaaaaa! You should be...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-31-2006, 6:58 PM
#61
Party “Oh this is rich.” “What Master?” Sanji asked. Breia held up her brail pad. He took it, reset it to standard, and read the document. “A party?” “Yes.” Breia leaned back, staring at the overhead. “Tokara company has extende...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-09-2006, 12:51 PM
#248
No worries, Alkonium....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-09-2006, 1:31 AM
#246
Shall I react as you did with kid? Saw the e-mail, downloaded it to my computer so I can read it. As promised, I will read and review it in the next posting, okay?...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-07-2006, 11:18 AM
#244
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) An Inverse of Stars: Part One (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=162264) PazaakPrincess An Alternate ending to KOTOR An excellent work by this new writer....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-05-2006, 10:04 AM
#243
I'd really like to see your criticising of my future works :D Too quote Mr. Incredible, 'we get there when we get there'....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-05-2006, 10:02 AM
#242
Wow. I usually start ten and then finish them depending on the mood I am in. This week it is a textbook on GIS and samurai sword techniques along with some fanfics. I guess we are in the same boat in terms of read load eh mach? :D My thing is when I...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-05-2006, 1:28 AM
#239
Wow! You do a lot of reading, don't you Mach? :) I read an average of four books a week right now. Down from a few years ago, when I read seven a week....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-31-2006, 7:19 PM
#225
remember you asked me to review the entire work, not just the segments. I told you at that time that I needed for you to send me a copy of the completed work so I would have time to read and review it all together....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-31-2006, 11:02 AM
#223
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Beyond The Force (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=160621) potsie Set a Century after KOTOR, a young boy from Tatooine gets his chance to become a Jedi....  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-10-2006, 5:28 PM
#36
I love it. almost 50 hits in 36 hours, and NO comments. Sigh. Well you did read it so......  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-09-2006, 1:49 PM
#35
Leviathan Saul Karath walked up to report to Lord Malak. The ships of the fleet had closed their encirclement, and now hell reigned on that planet. They had started at the edges of the city and worked inward like a harvesting machine, slicing the bu...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-09-2006, 1:24 PM
#34
Have you noticed that I have dinged people when they use improper military terminology? The reason you mentioned is precisely why. As I have mentioned in the critic column I read everything and the military has always been a specific interest. As f...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-09-2006, 1:26 AM
#32
Danika Break into a base, fight who knows how many guards, find the launch codes, then get into the Lowercity past yet more guards in the midst of a serious battle? Sure no problem. It seemed to be my day for impossible missions. I walked back to...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-09-2006, 1:06 AM
#31
[QUOTE=cutmeister]^^^ Well, it took a while to read everything from the beginning again. :xp: An apt image to sum up the planet Taris. I really liked this sentence. This works but I thought I should point out the fact that in the game this Sith sold...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-07-2006, 12:17 PM
#27
16 views in the last week, and no comments? Whimper......  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-02-2006, 12:02 AM
#26
If you are coming back to read reading this after any length of time, stop, go back, and start over. The piece is in the editing stage of this week, (1st April) not five or six months ago. I have finally deleted all of the older posts, and everything...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-01-2006, 5:59 PM
#25
Then by all means post away, sir! I think you know by now that I don't have any issues with providing my thoughts in the context of what I hope is considered constructive criticism. ;) Truthfully though I see this as your version of how the KotOR sto...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-01-2006, 10:34 AM
#23
I for one would like to read the entire story. I just started reading today and just finished Dantooine. I haven't been to kotorfanmedia.com though. Is the rest of it posted there? IIRC the KotOR comic doesn't cover the actual game storyline but int...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-01-2006, 10:26 AM
#22
My only question is how long did you spend thinking on the story before writing it? It was one that flowed smoothly from the moment I considered it. That is a rarity. Ask any writer on this site. Try less than a week from when the idea hit me to th...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-01-2006, 10:20 AM
#21
So where should I go to read the entire story, kotorfanmedia or SuperObscura? Since super obscura has the stroy from the start, I would go there. Not that I don't like this place, it's just that at either kotorfanmedia Iwould have to delete everythi...  [Read More]
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