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machievelli

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Posted in: [FanFic] Heart's Eye View
  machievelli
03-16-2006, 9:53 AM
#2
Since you're postings of this is on kotorfanmedia.com, in good conscience I cannot rewiew your work until I reach it in fairness to the hundred or so authors there....  [Read More]
Posted in: Revan's Bloodline
  machievelli
03-16-2006, 9:45 AM
#5
Sciex you didn't give me enough to review....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-28-2006, 3:48 PM
#57
The investigation There was a wordless roar, and Breia sighed. Having two Mandalorian boys running around on a ship this small was like having a herd of Gianta puppies from home! She heard a pattering of feet, followed by a thunder of boots. Padawan...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-28-2006, 12:37 PM
#56
The People Mandalore: located around star named Buir. Galactic Reference GSFD-450/CR/EN1/5. Class: D-9 class. A heavy world with a gravity of 1.5 Coruscanti Standard. land/ocean ratio; 65/35. Native animals and planets graded at level 11, extremely...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-28-2006, 9:53 AM
#55
A number of races use a a name that doesn't match what we call them. When I was writing my KOTOR book, I explained it as if the entire race were a scottish clan. In a Scots clan such as the Kilgour clan, you are say alex Kilgour, but the leader is t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-27-2006, 1:23 PM
#52
The Prisoners The woman’s staff moved slowly, tapping before her as she walked. It had been only two or three hours since she had arrived on Bandomeer, but already she had detected a quick shuffle in the police and prosecutors attached to the case...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-25-2006, 11:55 PM
#51
Going to be a little slow on the next segment. I'm also going to introduce the Mandalore in one very serious segment and a funny segment near the end....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-23-2006, 3:01 PM
#49
The planet The jungles stank, there was no other way to describe it. The managing officer of the Tokara Company Caral Santee hissed as the stench raced into his opening shuttle. Meera was not turning out to be a plum assignment. He stormed through t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-23-2006, 11:53 AM
#48
The Company Exploration, Galactic: The development of hyper-drive capable ships has had no direct impact on the Hyper-cannon network as yet. Even as CEC and Kuat shipyards began turning out such ships, the process of slowly expansion using hyper-can...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-23-2006, 10:11 AM
#46
Working on the next part.How about first contact with the Ithorians and a little fun with the Mandalore?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-19-2006, 12:37 AM
#44
Jae, if you study explosives, you'd be surprised what will and will not explode. One thing that causes a lot of problems every year are dust explosions in grain silos. A spark ignites the dust and it goes boom. That is all I did. Hai Wan, This is a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-17-2006, 10:36 AM
#40
Afterward The woman stood on the stone of the courtyard, her face turned up as if to gaze at the stars. Now she knew her destiny. The people of the temple needed one such as her. Dor had been correct, for a dozen in the Monasteries had already prove...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-17-2006, 10:29 AM
#39
Victory “Dor, come on, you can’t die!” Darshan screamed as he carried the being back to the mess deck. While they had been busy forward, Breia had gathered every scrap of medical equipment aboard. The body was set gently on the table, his cloa...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-16-2006, 10:41 AM
#37
Sorry, it's an old term meaning 'screaming and shouting'....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-16-2006, 9:24 AM
#35
Escape Holani stared at the wall. Her back was a mass of pain as the torturers began flaying her slowly in strips. Her teeth bit, and she tasted blood. She steeled herself not to scream. Yet when something burned into the wound she couldn’t help h...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-15-2006, 1:37 PM
#33
Bondage The transfer of the prisoner was easy. At the same time that Holani was paying for her room, and buying a ticket to travel to Berogol, the next planet beyond Lortu, Breia was sedated packaged and immersed into a tank of live Tanif bound for...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
03-15-2006, 1:16 PM
#32
What Dor was trying to say was that everyone involved is being directed by the force. Breia allowing herself to be taken to save her family, Holani choosing kidnapping over mass murder. Darshan flying the ship because of his faith in Koori. Dor to co...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-25-2006, 11:44 PM
#221
Maybe so, but I haven't seen a response from you on my work :D For the Anthology? Yes, I intend to use it is I can get a fakkakta agent to look at a full book. But I now am faced with making two or perhaps three anthologies set in different times......  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-25-2006, 12:48 AM
#219
I don't know if it is still there or not. I was working with word 3.1 at the time....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-24-2006, 11:08 AM
#216
Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) KotOR the untold story (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=161461) OfficerDonNZ During the beginning of KOTOR, A Jedi remembers his friend Revan, and begins...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-24-2006, 10:22 AM
#215
I have been using different variations of the Word and Microsoft office word processing programs and I heartily agree. They were designed not for fiction, but for business applications. There are a hell of a lot more businessmen using it for reports...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-20-2006, 10:26 PM
#209
It's not like the world will end if you don't, Jae. As it is, you picked the right one defined by the criteria. So WHATEVER...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
03-17-2006, 12:29 PM
#205
The tale of a Jedi on Dantooine the day of doom (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=160757) staffSaberist A young Jedi apprentice flees the destruction of Dantooine, to land on... Earth The style is spotty, but that is due only to needing...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
03-27-2006, 9:57 AM
#18
I for one would like to read the entire story. I just started reading today and just finished Dantooine. I haven't been to kotorfanmedia.com though. Is the rest of it posted there?) No, though about 250 pages is. I have 145 pages (Most of it never p...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
03-26-2006, 5:59 PM
#16
sigh. eight months, and an average of 60 people have looked at this per month. The news so far: I still haven't found an agent. Just two months ago Dark Horse (I think) decided to release a KOTOR comic book series which means I have lost the race....  [Read More]
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