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Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-15-2006, 12:47 AM
#90
Guys, you won't believe what these kids will be doing. I hope you all enjoy it, because their insurance WON"T cover it......  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 5:01 PM
#87
Explanation and plans Sanji blinked as the hood was taken off. Two men sat before him on a log. Behind them were maybe forty of the Hammerhead natives. The native were nude, but that didn’t seem to bother them. “First, who are you?” The small...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 12:42 PM
#86
He will play his part. As for our captive Mando, they will get their revenge as any kid would......  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-13-2006, 3:54 PM
#83
Those dirty rotten bastages! :forkyou: Oooo, but that's a cunning plan revealed in this chapter. :evil3: It looks bad for Breia and company. And I can't help but think that Daysah is a dead woman after Corona Sunrider is through with her. He reveal...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-12-2006, 2:13 PM
#81
Dйnouement Daysah rubbed her head. She had a splitting headache. Where- A net falling, power surging through her sending her into blackness. She snapped upright. Not a good idea. Her head seemed to lift, then swivel as if it were going to fall...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-12-2006, 12:54 PM
#80
Ah, but there is more to this plot than you think... Bwahahahahaha...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-11-2006, 3:37 PM
#76
Confusion Daysah Shani looked at the package that had come over from the Tokara Requiem with a note. “I would enjoy the pleasure of your company at dinner.” Signed by Sunrider. She tapped the message against her hand, and looked again at the pa...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  machievelli
04-11-2006, 10:52 AM
#75
Another good update. :) And I have a wild question to ask: are the natives Ithorian? Keep reading to find out....  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 9:19 PM
#256
Umm.... Ewww..... I feel sorry for your family..... :disaprove And is 'comatability' how easy is it is to put someone in (or for someone to be put into) a coma? ;) As for the crossbreeding, what about Mr Spock, you git? And as for my misspelling of...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 6:22 PM
#253
Most people don't realize that alliances are made things. The attack by the droids would have ticked them off enough to bring out the Yuuzhan Vong, and if the Republic helped, I could see an eventual true alliance rather than joining for one brief op...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 5:50 PM
#251
Neither of those bothered me as I told you privately. I don't know if there is a genetic compatability issue or not, but since Twi-lek females appear to be built approxomately the same, I see no problem there. As for the alliance, I can see it as a...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 12:19 PM
#249
14 April Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) The Mysterious Killer (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=160651) Jedi Knight 707 Against the backdrop of a galactic plague, the few Jedi remainin...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-15-2006, 1:03 AM
#57
Return Danika Our return was uneventful. The Kath hounds still menaced, but those we spoke to said the attacks had dropped off sharply. We crossed the bridge, and Canderous pushed to the fore. The man that mourned Ilse saw us coming, and stopped, u...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 11:49 AM
#55
I'm cynical enough to say illegal orders are given by all sides in any war. I think war crimes 'are in the eye of the beholder' to a certain degree. What's considered officially a war crime under law and what the average Joe citizen considers one c...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 11:23 AM
#53
Sanderal Danika We returned to the Sanderal home. It was a large building with a landing pad on its flat roof. A freighter was parked there, and men were unloading supplies from it. A war droid patrolled before the door. I approached it, and it sto...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 11:04 AM
#52
Did you purposely change the game's name for the Nurik Sandral character on Dantooine to Rurik Sanderal?[/QUOTE=cutmeister] My bad. I mispelled his name and didn't correct it. This is why I want critical commentary! [QUOTE=cutmeister]I don't unders...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-14-2006, 10:41 AM
#50
I think Master Vandar fell out of his Yoda-speak in that chapter. ;) Great attention to detail in Tests. An interesting choice to have Danika choose the path of a Consular. And she constructs a single-bladed lightsaber instead of a double-bladed one...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-13-2006, 10:22 AM
#49
Dantooine Quest: Canderous The heavy blaster rifle lay on the workbench as I worked with it. Patience is the first thing a young warrior learns, and I am by no means young. I am Canderous Ordo of clan Ordo. My deeds are enshrined in the halls of my...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-13-2006, 10:06 AM
#48
you'll notice that Vandar doesn't 'yoda speak'....  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-12-2006, 12:50 PM
#45
Tests: Danika I couldn’t wait. I went to Master Dorak, and showed him the book I had been reading. He pounced on it, and was lost in it before I could do more than explain what I had read. I left him happily engrossed in a time beyond that of the...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-12-2006, 12:37 PM
#44
Yes, this was posted as the first of Dantooine Part one. I have been constantly appalled by other writers who simply think a Jedi is going to snatch up any old sword and use it. There is a lot of training involved (Mainly time) and learning how to...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-11-2006, 11:22 AM
#42
Dantooine: Training I can’t really explain the Force, or how the training allows you to tap into it to someone that doesn‘t have at least some ability. I have had so many roll their eyes at this, and while I have always tried to explain, most d...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-11-2006, 11:14 AM
#41
I suspect some of the lack of comments may also because they know you're the Critic, and perhaps feel like they don't have the credentials to critique your material or are even intimidated (when I was a teen (awhile ago....), I was very uncomfortable...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-11-2006, 11:04 AM
#40
Woo-hoo! :emodanc: That's twice now! Does this mean I can put another line in my sig? Two-time winner of the local curmudgeon's (http://www.lucasforums.com/member.php?u=125916) highly coveted "Whatever" Prize This passage doesn't seem rig...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
04-10-2006, 5:42 PM
#37
Jedi Council Carth We expected a couple of hours, but it wasn’t until noon the next day that Bastila finally signaled for us to let her back aboard. “I have spoken briefly with the Council. Danika, they have requested an audience with you. We...  [Read More]
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