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machievelli

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Posted in: Law and Order Mod
  machievelli
10-28-2005, 12:20 PM
#1
I happen to have seen the killbastila mod, which makes the sith recognize Bastila, and attack. My question is; How hard would it be to rig a mod where the local authorities (Sith on Taris, Constables on Manaan etc) react to the fact that your charact...  [Read More]
Posted in: What we die for...
  machievelli
10-26-2005, 5:38 PM
#4
4 “Break right!” 4511 ordered. He groaned as the newbie, an SP did so, but slowly. Damn it, fighters could bank a lot harder than that! Before he could comment, the fighter flashed with multiple hits and exploded. He stormed across towa...  [Read More]
Posted in: What we die for...
  machievelli
10-26-2005, 10:26 AM
#3
Glad to help. Since I am looking (And reading) fic from three sites right now, I haven't looked at yours yet. If it isn't posted, send me an e-mail of some of it....  [Read More]
Posted in: What we die for...
  machievelli
10-25-2005, 3:22 PM
#1
What we die for... The shuttle docked with the cruiser Camirodorn. The pilot, an SP class clone turned toward the rear. He had never seen such a disreputable Jedi in his life. The fact that his entire life from tube to pilot was less than seven year...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
10-28-2005, 11:13 AM
#3
From Lucas Forum SW: KotOR: Knights of War starmark2k A disillusioned Jedi wanders the Republic during Kotor1. His ideas do what good fiction should, go outside the boundaries of what has already been done without making the reader uncomfortabl...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
10-23-2005, 3:32 PM
#1
For those that wanted to see their reviews... Star Wars: Invisible Hope Sabretooth Set during SWIII. An Arc trooper operation goes bad during the clone wars... Sabretooth’s five chapter work is solid military fiction similar to ops in Vietnam whic...  [Read More]
Posted in: Looking for a newsposter at StarWarsKnights.com
  machievelli
10-28-2005, 10:32 AM
#24
I like reading the work cold. When I buy a book off the shelf the writer doesn't give me a list of what I can think. I'm treating all of you like professionals and in my own way like my students. So it's week two; class is back in session......  [Read More]
Posted in: Looking for a newsposter at StarWarsKnights.com
  machievelli
10-21-2005, 1:54 PM
#22
For those that read this before I changed it, I am sorry. I had just spent several hours writing part of a story and when I went back to edit discovered that I had spent the day writing what my wife calls TMI or too much information. That is when yo...  [Read More]
Posted in: Looking for a newsposter at StarWarsKnights.com
  machievelli
10-21-2005, 10:42 AM
#21
Rc, if you did that you'd ruin all my fun....  [Read More]
Posted in: Looking for a newsposter at StarWarsKnights.com
  machievelli
10-20-2005, 11:15 AM
#17
It's interesting VV, that every fan-writer I have ever read hopes for that big break. I hope it will through this book for me, but I have hoped it for every story and book I have written for three decades. But up until now, fan-fic has been passed fr...  [Read More]
Posted in: Looking for a newsposter at StarWarsKnights.com
  machievelli
10-19-2005, 10:49 PM
#14
Actually I flipped a coin, and started at the bottom of the page. I will work upward on any piece that has more than a 'I will write one' comment, and they will be critiqued in sequence. That means Sabretooth and RC1162 are up first. What I am going...  [Read More]
Posted in: Looking for a newsposter at StarWarsKnights.com
  machievelli
10-18-2005, 11:17 PM
#11
The Critic Strikes Back All of the writers were nervous. They had heard about the critic, and the idea of having one filled them with dread. The elements of style werebeing passed from hand to shaking hand. Several kids had even gone out and bought...  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting licensed to write Star Wars books
  machievelli
09-27-2005, 8:34 PM
#7
Thanks, General. I have been butting my head against the 'you need an agent' or 'you're brand new, why should we even listen' walls for almost 30 years now. As for Revelations, Originally Lucasarts did want to kill it, from what I have heard, but los...  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting licensed to write Star Wars books
  machievelli
09-22-2005, 9:39 PM
#5
That may be so, Jackel, but I merely asked and got a 'sounds good, go ahead' Besides, not every great author wants to write in a controlled Genre, which things like Star Wars and Star Trek is....  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting licensed to write Star Wars books
  machievelli
09-22-2005, 12:13 PM
#3
'How did Kathy Tyers and Timothy Zahn get officially licensed by Lucasfilms to write books based on Star Wars?' Tysyacha Getting published is not fun, kid. Remember that before you read anything I write below here. I have been banging my head agains...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
10-10-2005, 6:56 PM
#15
John I will look at your work as long as you understand that I am an honest critic. If I find things that are wrong, I will tell you, but I won't just flame you just because you did something i thought was improper. As for the novel, i am caught bet...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
10-10-2005, 2:33 PM
#13
Carth It was panic time by the time Danika and Bastila returned. We had been watching the race until the fight broke out, then the Bek in charge of the video feed told us that the Sith were coming down into the Lowercity in force. Gadon had decided...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
10-07-2005, 10:59 AM
#12
Beks Danika We threaded our way back to the Hidden Bek base. Everyone was there to greet us, and Gadon held up the swoop engine accelerator to a roaring cheer. He handed it to an Ithorian who immediately hurried off to install it. “I was beginni...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
10-06-2005, 10:48 AM
#11
Danika I centered myself. The stink of the Rancor was there hot and heavy. I could still smell that lure. They had just thrown someone to their death and part of me was furious. Suddenly I felt puckish. Instead of opening it, I reached out and tappe...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
10-05-2005, 10:45 AM
#10
Wasteland Looking at them, you wouldn’t have believed they were the footings of buildings. Massive pillars thrust into the earth, and above all spread the treelike structure of the City. I was amazed that any light reached here at all. “Smoke....  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
10-02-2005, 1:20 PM
#9
Carth A JT 4100! They were made at the Protopri yards on Colrami. A military design, they had been designed for customs patrols and armed diplomatic courier work. Fast enough to catch anything smaller than a fighter or outrun a larger ship. Armed we...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
09-29-2005, 5:24 PM
#8
UpperCity Danika As we walked toward the tram station, I could see Carth was bothered by something. “Carth?” He looked up, then flushed as if he were embarrassed. “Since we’re going to be spending a lot of time together, why not tell me abo...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
09-27-2005, 3:13 PM
#7
Upper City: South I saw what he meant when we stepped outside. Among the normal citizens were a lot of people dressed in space suits, combat gear, and attitudes. The sky was cloudy; in fact the streets were cloudy. The building on Taris reach up in...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
09-25-2005, 2:08 PM
#6
Taris She looked sort of like Kalendra. Tall, dark haired, brown eyes, but Kalendra had never had such a cold and efficient look about her. The woman held a lightsaber, yellow beam clashing with the red of her opponent. Like Padawan Loras the last t...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  machievelli
09-21-2005, 9:30 PM
#5
Endar Spire I felt the first blast, and was rolling to fall out of bed. I landed on all fours, then shook my head. I was in my quarters on the Endar Spire. Beyond the Armorplast of the windows I could see the turbolaser blasts slamming into our shiel...  [Read More]
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