This has been up for a while on the Kotor FanMedia site, but I'm considering starting up a sequel of sorts, and was looking for some fresh input on the original before I get too deep into this.

Rather than bog the forum down with another lengthy series of chapter-posts, I figured I'd just provide a link to my author page over there, assuming thats okay.

http://www.kotorfanmedia.com/?author=81)

Since you're postings of this is on kotorfanmedia.com, in good conscience I cannot rewiew your work until I reach it in fairness to the hundred or so authors there.