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machievelli

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Posted in: Mira's Vision
  machievelli
12-04-2008, 3:14 PM
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Originally reviewed march 16 2006...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Dark Shadows
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12-04-2008, 3:08 PM
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Posted in: Play/Screenplay: Bond 23 (Scene 1)
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12-04-2008, 3:01 PM
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Posted in: December '08: The Secrets of the Holidays
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12-04-2008, 2:47 PM
#21
I'm Against The Doctor and Endo?! I have no chance... Just out of curiosity...will the stories that we submited to the contest be reviewed in the entertainment center? Yes, eventually. Part of my backlog of unreviewed stories for or more pages back...  [Read More]
Posted in: Rebellion
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12-04-2008, 1:48 PM
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Posted in: Wicca, Paganism and Neo-Paganism; religions?
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12-05-2008, 12:07 AM
#18
Oh God no offense, I can't believe you want to play with semantics and call it rainwater. It is firstly important that regional definitions differ, in all remotely religious and political definements. This would be various cultural perspectives. Rel...  [Read More]
Posted in: Wicca, Paganism and Neo-Paganism; religions?
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12-04-2008, 10:43 PM
#15
I don't really consider it that big of a deal as long as it isn't preached to my kids and they don't perform any abusive actions on minors. I'm a Christian, I believe in God, and I'm going to let God sort it out because I'm only human. The problem i...  [Read More]
Posted in: McLaine, Town Marshal
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12-04-2008, 3:34 PM
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Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-08-2008, 11:05 PM
#105
Impressive. How exactly do you write these kind of sequences? Do you have a rough idea of the major plot points and write the battle around that, or did it just come as you wrote? I really never did a complex chapter that addressed prewar jitters, t...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
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12-07-2008, 11:56 PM
#100
The Corvette Akaan Murcyur or Kiss of War burrowed through hyperspace in convoy with a dozen others. In her cargo bay an ol'averde; almost 300 Mando prepped their weapons, checked armor, or relaxed. Merisa sat with a group of younger warriors, showin...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
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12-05-2008, 5:44 PM
#99
A most excellent and truthful line, Mach. That was my favorite part of the entire chapter. As for the rest, there were a few grammatical errors (I believe in the beginning, should it not be "What do you need, Becket?”), but that hardly oversha...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
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12-04-2008, 10:15 PM
#97
Today Merisa looked at her audience. Manda’lor watched her with a concentration she would have expected of an enemy. Carth wanted to protest, but his own innate honesty stopped him. She watched both of them, but neither refused the challenge....  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
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12-04-2008, 8:59 PM
#96
I could answer that, but I won't...  [Read More]
Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith
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12-04-2008, 3:29 PM
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Posted in: [FIC] The tale of a Jedi on Dantooine the day of doom
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12-11-2008, 2:13 PM
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Posted in: [Fic] Heart of Evil
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12-07-2008, 11:52 PM
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Posted in: [FIC]The Mysterious Killer
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12-04-2008, 1:40 PM
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Posted in: [FIC] Ebon Hawk Pranksters
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12-04-2008, 1:40 PM
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Posted in: story: Mira's Vision
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12-04-2008, 1:39 PM
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Posted in: [FIC] It has no name
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12-04-2008, 1:39 PM
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Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
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12-04-2008, 1:38 PM
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Posted in: Darth Vader Evolved
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12-04-2008, 1:37 PM
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Posted in: [fic] Legacy of Vengeance Chapter I: Test of the Jedi
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12-04-2008, 1:37 PM
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Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-04-2008, 11:10 PM
#927
Thanks for the review, Mach. When you say "the flow is a bit off," what do you mean, specifically? Is it that I almost 'disconnected' the story, and moved from one idea to another? At any rate, thanks for reading. :) That was a pretty go...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-04-2008, 10:29 PM
#925
Coruscant Entertainment Center As I have been commenting for the last few months, I have had problems keeping track because the site lists by last comment. I found the link to shift it by when it was first posted, and have been going back and commen...  [Read More]
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