There is a problem with the character Tara. It says her lightsabers can connect into one double-bladed in chapter two. Yet it also says she is a jedi. Did you not know that jedi do not believe in using the double-bladed lightsabers because they are unprecise and are weapons of the dark side. The jedi believe that the double-bladed lightsabers are fueled with anger and hatred. Although KotOR didn't use this ideal for some reason or Bastila was an exception or the ideal was not thought about until later time but that ideal is true in Windu's time.
where did you get that? Bastila has no problem with it until she gets tortured and turned. in the clone wars era, i'm pretty sure that a jedi named Barriss Offee also weilded a double-bladed lightsaber at some point.
One of my friends I think read a book, but necer-the-less I trust his information, but if I am wrong and you can back it up please tell me. And if I am wrong sorry for the inconvenience. On a positive note it's good to finally see a Mace Windu story, though I can't say it's as good as Jae's "The Adventures of Jolee Bindo", (no offfence to you)that one of my favorite fics.
it's ok. i fully agree with you :D
A tragic ending. Too bad both Mace and Tara are dead, I really liked them. Especially Mace.
yeah, i know. but at least he died in open combat instead of falling to his death.
thanks for replying, igyman. i thought this thread was long dead :D
Have you checked out my new addition to Clone Trooper Jedi?
This is unfair :( Return on the Exile isn't getting any comments, so why do you get them?! Ah, well.
@ Lord About the double-saber thingy, I'm pretty sure that they didn'y mind per se, but more that it was frowned upon.
because Windu kicks a$$ :D
JK, if you write a lot more, i'm sure people will go back and take a look at all that you've written.
hey, ive just finished reading to where your upto now, and all i got to say is great. Mace Windu is awesome, and yes, it was crap how he just got killed off like that .. but you have brung him back alive and for that i congratualte you :D:D, great work
thanks man! it's good to see this is still attracting customers :D
thanks man! it's good to see this is still attracting customers :D
It sure is for me RC. This was one of the first Fics I read before I joined and it is one of your best. The Hunt of the Sith, never really appealed to me though...
Jedi_Knight_707, I may read your Fic again, but I thought it was against the rules to reply to an old Fic.
I think it's going to be fine if someone's making a constructive comment on an older work. We're probably going to see more bumping of older threads because the Archives directs people back to the original thread for commenting.
If the thread is getting bumped just to return it to the top, however, that's not cool. --Jae
that is in Ahto. since this is a fanfic forum, i guess it is okay to bring up old threads if you're giving good feedback.
yeah, Hunt for the Sith was kind of rushed. I may re-write the whole thing to post in the Archives, but it may not be anytime soon.
^Don't forget that the mods don't love us here. :xp:
I just read this (again) in the Archives and it's still brilliant, and although the spelling errors took a bit away from it, it was fantabulous reading it without going through tonnes of posts.
thanks, Hall. glad you still like it.
i updated our favourite droid's story too :)
fantabulous
-_- That's my word!
I may re-write the whole thing
I'm considering doing the same thing with RotE. I know that its my most popular fic, but I never really liked the way it ended. And now that I know so much more about writing, I think I'll re-write it. Same storyline, but I want it to...flow better.
i updated our favourite droid's story too
You have a fic with R2-D2?!?!?!??!?!? :rofl: *ahem* Sorry, I just thought that that was amusing :)
Glad to see your writing a fic with T3 :rofl:
ah, you've never heard of HK it seems :xp:
I'm just kidddin'. I've already read some of AP.
i like the part with the killing
thanks, man, no wonder you like Rep Comm :D
I like this story a lot. Its funny cuz I wrote a similar story concerning Mace's survival in Episode 3. However its set years after the film during the time between Empire and Return. In it he ends up being the one who completes Luke's training.
Check it out at (
http://www.wattpad.com/5277358-star-wars-the-search-for-windu)