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machievelli

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Posted in: Heart of the Assassin; full work
  machievelli
12-26-2008, 4:45 PM
#8
This one surprised me. My personal best to date was Family of choice, with 21 hits a day. But this one has over 50 hits in one day. My thanks to all who read it. Now all you have to do is actually say something, good bad indifferent :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Assassin; full work
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 3:57 PM
#6
Wow, that was amazing mach. Thank you! I really liked how you described how the kid duplicated the NSA program and protected it, and how this assassin does his work, and how 'clean' he does it. I liked the end, where he went to the cemetary especiall...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Assassin; full work
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 3:51 PM
#4
Now I went to safe house two, a small hotel ten kilometers north of the target. I pulled into the parking area. I stopped, looking at her. “We can do this hard or semi hard or soft. Semi hard is we pull a few kilometers farther south, stay i...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Assassin; full work
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 3:50 PM
#3
Then She had been pensive that last night we spent together. We had spent the day wandering. Though there was no way she could have known, I had completed my assignment the night before. It had been a pain, but worth it from the esthetics view. The...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Assassin; full work
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 3:49 PM
#2
Then When you’re ‘working’ for the government it’s easier. Every expense is paid, you work maybe twice a year, because they don’t want you to burn out. But when you really start working on your own another set of statis...  [Read More]
Posted in: Heart of the Assassin; full work
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 3:14 PM
#1
Heart of the Assassin Now I felt the trigger break clean, the gentle cough of the silenced weapon, the round already halfway to its target. The man fell forward and I waited a moment before approaching. He wasn’t who I was after. Bodyguards cov...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prologue Part II: KOTOR III: Tret'ye Srazhenie (Third Battle)
  machievelli
12-23-2008, 11:44 PM
#2
again, my own work. Anyone want to critique it?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Prologue Part I: KOTOR III: Tret'ye Srazhenie (Third Battle)
  machievelli
12-23-2008, 11:37 PM
#2
my own work, so I can't review it. Anyone want to take a shot?...  [Read More]
Posted in: Christmas on the Ebon Hawk
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 1:41 PM
#10
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Posted in: Savior
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 1:32 PM
#4
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Posted in: [Shortie] Keep You Away
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 1:10 PM
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Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 8:03 PM
#122
Captain Dono wanted to scream as his pad brought up the carnage. The damn Mandalorian scum had lost over 80 percent of their original force in the initial landing, and almost 90 percent before they had even struck here, yet nothing seemed to stop the...  [Read More]
Posted in: Family of Choice
  machievelli
12-24-2008, 11:46 PM
#120
She took the bread boarded circuit, linking it to her armor. Even in death, Zakal had defeated them. She motioned, and her people moved in closer. The Republic had a long drawn out process for operational planning. The Mando, used the short form. M...  [Read More]
Posted in: chaper 2. Mira's vision
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 1:02 PM
#6
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Posted in: Diaries of a Jedi
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:45 PM
#10
read albeit late....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars Ancient Times - The Rain Of Apocalypse –
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:14 PM
#4
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Posted in: Star Wars The New Trilogy
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:13 PM
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Posted in: The Journal of General Blise
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:11 PM
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Posted in: [FIC] Critical Mass
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:11 PM
#6
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Posted in: Try this fic!
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:10 PM
#4
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Posted in: [FIC]Rescue From Mustafar: Special Edition
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:09 PM
#6
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Posted in: I'm writing a KOTOR III play!
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:08 PM
#15
have not reviewed because I did not have time then to follow additional links, and still do not have time...  [Read More]
Posted in: [fic]Alar, mercenary for hire
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:05 PM
#2
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Posted in: [FIC] Vader's Trial
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 12:04 PM
#12
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Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents
  machievelli
12-25-2008, 11:53 PM
#937
My company has this habit of ‘removing’ additional hours of vacation time if you have too many. They intended to make 40 hours of my vacation time disappear on the 1st of Dec, so to avoid losing that five days, I’m taking a week off...  [Read More]
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