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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Coruscant
  Jae Onasi
04-19-2006, 11:04 AM
#12
*Agrees* All the foreshadowing in TSL leads me to suspect we'll be headed out, not in, during K3. Also, after our experiences on Nar Shaddaa in TSL, I'm not sure that I'd want to visit Coruscant (again). I think the Unknown regions is nearly a fore...  [Read More]
Posted in: Coruscant
  Jae Onasi
04-18-2006, 10:29 AM
#5
I think Coruscant would be very cool, but I'll be happy with a bunch of new planets or at least new areas if they're going to use some of the same planets. So, what motivation, besides being a cool place to go, would you use to get your PC to Corusc...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  Jae Onasi
04-13-2006, 11:49 PM
#2
I like it much, though you've left us all hanging on the edge of the cliff once more. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-19-2006, 11:31 AM
#112
Thanks everyone! @Pottsie--more action coming soon. I put in the sandstorm story to add a little action (and another Jolee story--any opportunity for that!), but some of what follows in the story won't make sense without some context on Li'adans and...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-18-2006, 7:46 PM
#106
Sigh, not a great day for me--my kitty had to have emergency surgery today, though he seems to have come out of it pretty well. If I missed anything, chalk it up to being distracted today. Chapter 13: The Story of the Sandstorm “You will mainta...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-15-2006, 4:47 PM
#104
I saw the movie, but I'm scared of reading the book, something about how the books are always more insightful than the movies and I got enough insight into the life a geisha. And the movie wasn't very picky about who was acting who (the main characte...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-15-2006, 9:39 AM
#102
^Yeah... You should definitely be careful around that topic..... And avoid it being done like Memoirs of a Geisha. :xp: ;P It's "The Adventures of Jolee Bindo", not "Memoirs of a Lusty Jedi...." No worries! I'd never do anything...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-15-2006, 12:15 AM
#100
AMEN TO THAT! I'm most definitely a believer in the ideals of the Jedi Order's Bindo sect. :D :) Me too. Of course, that's probably stating the obvious. :D And to think, Jae hasn't experienced the pleasures of full physical intimacy. :blush2: Well...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-14-2006, 11:02 AM
#98
^ Believe me, you didn't want to see the first draft of that chapter, because it was really, well, dumb, and it just wasn't going anywhere. :D But that's what revision is for. Talin may be a pompous jerk at (many) times, but he's a complex kind of...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-13-2006, 5:43 PM
#96
Jae, I don't know how to say it but your main character, Jae, sounds a bit like Carth in the whole pining for lost loved one thingy. At least she's not a whiner :D Still I like where this is going and I think Talin does have a BIG head. Good as alway...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-19-2006, 3:08 AM
#110
You know, I was having a generally crappy day (no pun intended, honest), and reading about Anak shooting down the chandelier to take out the atrium sculpture in the name of artistic freedom made me laugh. Seeing Corona reduced to a quivering crazed m...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-18-2006, 10:43 AM
#108
Sorry about the crotch. It was flowing well and you guys are seeing it as it is written with little or no editing. I changed the phrase to 'her privates' describing both regions. 'Crotch' itself doesn't bug me--being in the med field I call them by...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-18-2006, 8:42 AM
#101
Love the battle scenes, love imagining just what Breia's going to do next, love the kids wreaking havoc throughout the ship as the crew can only react. Using the crates as a countermeasure was a nice touch. Good to know the missiles weren't heat seak...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-17-2006, 3:51 PM
#97
I had a quote in the next section from a pair of writers I like; 'There are only three kinds of luck, blind, dumb, and bad'. My computer hiccuped and ten pages that was supposed to be here went bye-bye. So I'll have to do them again. That's OK, I...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-15-2006, 10:08 PM
#94
:rofl: Record for dismantling the ship.......  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-15-2006, 9:41 AM
#91
I don't know. I can imagine those kids doing a lot. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-14-2006, 11:39 PM
#89
And I have to assume that Suli Corona doesn't have much experience with monks of the Jedi Order as his lackeys did such a poor job at disarming Breia. Seems like her captors made quite an oversight when they didn't discover the darts Breia had concea...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-13-2006, 7:09 PM
#84
Heh, nice plot twists. I love it. The dress description was cool. I might have found a different euphemism ('crotch' just was a little too jarring--the word itself doesn't bug me, it was just its juxtaposition with such a lovely dress description),...  [Read More]
Posted in:  Tighty Whiteys (Male Underwear)
  Jae Onasi
04-19-2006, 12:10 PM
#12
I have to say, Atton looks particularly cute. Kind of makes up for all the underwear comments he makes to female Exile. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  Jae Onasi
04-18-2006, 9:19 AM
#147
Look who made the 2000 view point. Good things come to those who write. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  Jae Onasi
04-14-2006, 11:11 AM
#144
Nice descriptions--the red cloud of evil is cool. I would have used Lady instead of Lord for the honorific since Jasra's female, but that's just me. I'm dying to know if Jasra actually saw Linduu and decided to not do anything about her or not. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting rid of T3
  Jae Onasi
04-19-2006, 1:17 AM
#104
It's like telling luke to get rid of r2d2, telling Face from the a-team to get rid of the 'Vet' (corvette) or BA (Mr. T) to get rid of the van with the red stripe. Telling hassehoff (how ever you spell it) to get rid of knightrider, the dukes of haza...  [Read More]
Posted in: Getting rid of T3
  Jae Onasi
04-13-2006, 11:03 PM
#89
Keep the droids!...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Jae Onasi
04-14-2006, 11:23 AM
#54
I'm cynical enough to say illegal orders are given by all sides in any war. I think war crimes 'are in the eye of the beholder' to a certain degree. What's considered officially a war crime under law and what the average Joe citizen considers one c...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
04-15-2006, 12:52 AM
#324
Very nice. It'll be cool to see how the relationships develop....  [Read More]
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