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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: Getting to know each other
  Jae Onasi
03-16-2006, 7:33 PM
#284
Welcome to all new-(and not so new-)bies!...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Betrayal and Retribution: Percieved Reality
  Jae Onasi
03-16-2006, 3:54 PM
#7
Heh, I loved his comment on Nar Shaddaa. He's just a perfectly nasty kind of guy. I'll be glad to see the next installment....  [Read More]
Posted in: I'm writing a KOTOR III play!
  Jae Onasi
03-19-2006, 7:08 PM
#9
I'm not entirely sure if this would work, but is it possible to save as rtf or html so that the formatting transfers?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic]An Inverse of Stars: Part Two
  Jae Onasi
03-14-2006, 11:28 PM
#8
Heh, interesting story. I was starting to have a tough time imagining the woman who used to be Revan being that submissive, when you came out with that little twist in the last chapter. Keep going.... :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [TSL] [REL] Kreia's Assorted Robe Collection
  Jae Onasi
03-12-2006, 9:48 PM
#13
Got mine. Nice job--looks great!...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Dark Apprentice: Holowan Consortium - Released
  Jae Onasi
03-12-2006, 10:36 PM
#14
Got mine, too. :D I have to see the final product, you know. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: (FIC)Kotor 2: The Good ending
  Jae Onasi
03-08-2006, 11:44 PM
#5
I'm always up for a happy ending. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-18-2006, 10:06 PM
#40
Thanks folks! Taxes--does look like we'll get a refund, which is always nice. In the ideal world we'd pay just enough so that we wouldn't have to pay or get a refund (that way, we aren't loaning the gov't our salaries), but getting a refund is always...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-17-2006, 6:18 PM
#36
Hello folks! Chapter 6 may take a bit--I have to do my taxes and write a long report by the end of the month, and that's going to eat up some time. In the meantime, I'm leaving Chapter 5 for you, because I can't stand waiting for the resolution of cl...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-16-2006, 1:15 PM
#34
:) Oh, I didn't see your comments as complaining at all. You're right, the spacing will improve readability, and that's A Good Thing. I was grousing more about not being able to have it format the same in my word processing as it does online--hubby c...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-15-2006, 6:04 PM
#31
Thanks all! Yep, the formatting is making me a little nuts--how it looks in Word and how it looks on the forum can be two very different things. The story's very dialog heavy since it's in first person, so I'll have to space just about every line....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-13-2006, 6:38 PM
#26
Very good fic-tasticness, I can't wait to see where it goes. :) You misspelled 'sneared' and 'shreiks' ;) Thanks. You have a sharp eye--I proofed it twice and still missed those. :) The redemption theme/saving people is big in the SW movies--Yoda...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-13-2006, 5:22 PM
#23
Alright folks, here's Chapter 4. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. EDIT: See Jae grinning at JM12's comment above.... :D Chapter 4: The Lesson on Feeling Surroundings As we settled into the plush seats of the transport s...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
03-09-2006, 12:12 AM
#21
Bravo! Bravo! Great job Jae. You did an excellent job on this chapter and have done so on this whole story so far. I am surely going to be voting for your fic as one of the most original at the end of the year. :) Keep up the great work. You all say...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
03-17-2006, 6:53 PM
#41
Nice job. Blowing up a castle with the dust of burned excreta was not something that I ever considered. That was too funny. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
03-10-2006, 8:22 PM
#23
The encyclopedia entries were interesting. I caught the 'the style is slow and smooth, forcing the mind to concentrate...' sentence used twice as well as a few comma/single quote issues, but no biggie. A critic can never get away with grammar mistake...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]The Mysterious Killer
  Jae Onasi
03-16-2006, 5:39 PM
#30
(Jae sighs happily....) A kiss! Very nice. Hope he gets the bomber, too. I can't tell you how other writers get over writer's block--there's probably as many methods as there are writers. I finally had to make a list of all the things I wanted to i...  [Read More]
Posted in: my pictures
  Jae Onasi
03-08-2006, 11:51 PM
#12
I love the red-eye thing on Darth Android. I'm never going to complain about artistic ability because I have trouble drawing stick-people. :) You draw better than I do, and I'm a fair bit older than you are. Keep going....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars AOJS: Philosophy of The Force
  Jae Onasi
03-10-2006, 9:44 AM
#12
I like the first chapter--intriguing. I'm having a bit of trouble reading with the spelling and grammar issues, and if you clean those up just a bit, this will be even better. I'm enjoying the story, so please keep writing....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  Jae Onasi
03-15-2006, 6:21 PM
#116
Very cool Force power. I'm glad to see Jor-el's back. :D I found a few comma issues, but no big deal. Jasra's a very believable Sith--so delightfully evil. And I hope Linduu kicks her butt all the way to the Outer Rim. :giggle1:...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  Jae Onasi
03-09-2006, 9:51 AM
#111
You mean no one is going to comment on the cool move I made up? Where Linduu channeled the force through her saber, picking up the Sith like rag dolls, twirling them about in the air and then sending them smashing into the wall to meet their dooms? M...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  Jae Onasi
03-08-2006, 11:17 PM
#106
Well now, that's quite the plot twist, and was about the last thing I was expecting. Having a Sith Lord betray and kill her Sith Master is so very Star Wars and it fit in nicely. That was a quite descriptive battle scene. I hope Linduu stays Light,...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  Jae Onasi
03-14-2006, 3:20 PM
#55
This is wonderful. The only bad thing is that I have to wait for another chapter. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: What should KotOR3 be called?
  Jae Onasi
03-16-2006, 10:17 AM
#60
The Forgotten Empire was my fav. It sounds mysterious enough to imply lots of adventure and broad enough to cover many story options. Unknown Regions and Battle for the Republic appealed to me, too....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] A Jedi's Promise
  Jae Onasi
03-09-2006, 5:16 PM
#25
I liked the story and Elora's character in particular. I like the description of some of the angst the characters feel when deciding to leave the order or stay. The only place I got briefly stuck was when you switched characters--it took me a moment...  [Read More]
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