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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: (FIC) Thestory of Timmy Marong
  Jae Onasi
04-08-2006, 11:37 PM
#6
I think he is actually 11 years old, but still, I had better grammar and spelling then that at 11... Well, for an 11 year old whose primary language is likely Estonian (per his website profile), it's pretty good English. I didn't even begin learnin...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Star Wars Ancient Times - The Rain Of Apocalypse –
  Jae Onasi
04-07-2006, 8:24 PM
#2
This is an intriguing start. I'm just having a little bit of trouble reading it, however. Add line breaks between paragraphs and dialog. When reading the white text on the grey background here, it's harder to track to the next line and it's really e...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Betrayal and Retribution: Percieved Reality
  Jae Onasi
04-05-2006, 5:25 PM
#15
Very descriptive battle scenes. Qestar is a great 'bad guy.' I'll enjoy reading more....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-13-2006, 2:16 PM
#93
Good Chapter as always. I liked what Jolee said. Why is just and everything underlined? PS. Please check out my new Fanfic, Fallen. You guys have no idea how much I laugh when some of these lines pop into my head just as if Jolee's standing righ...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-13-2006, 12:30 PM
#91
Hmm, this one took awhile. I ended up dumping an entire half chapter (or more) just because it just didn't go right, and did a wholesale rewrite. @JM12--you can call me a tease. I probably deserve it. ;) Chapter 12: Li’adin The Li’adans contac...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-12-2006, 10:26 AM
#90
Great stuff Jae. And congrats on the 1,000 views. I must say you reached that mark pretty fast. Which really isn't fair as some of us "me" have to work hard for such a thing. ;) "j/k" Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the s...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-10-2006, 4:35 PM
#88
"Woohoo" sounded better than "Yeehaw!" and certainly beats something like the f-bomb. :D I figure if I can shout Woohoo! out myself at my (Not-as-old-as-Jolee-but-not-a-kid) age, Jolee probably could, too. I haven't forgotten abo...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-10-2006, 9:48 AM
#86
Oh Jolee. Such a rebel, what with kidnapping his future wife and all. So caveman-ish, heh-heh-heh. :D :D Jolee has a line in the game where he says he kidnapped Nayama after breaking out of the Ukatis prison, so I ran with it. I do hope how the...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-10-2006, 1:51 AM
#83
1000 views--Yes! That is seriously cool. So nice of you all to take the time to look it over. And, to celebrate, here's Chapter 11. :D Chapter 11: Jolee’s Wife “Why didn’t you tell me you were married?” I asked Jolee. “You never asked,...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-09-2006, 11:47 PM
#80
I don't mind if it's said more than once. :D There's quite a bit there to work with (Ukatis system, Andor, Nayama, etc.), which makes it a lot easier to write. Some of his lines are just too funny not to include, though I hate using a lot of the lin...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-07-2006, 7:45 PM
#77
Chapter 10: The Vision The mist swirled around and then suddenly cleared as the tall Sith Lord strided into view, red lightsaber flaring in the dark and casting an angry glow on his sneering face. His black cape billowed and disappeared into the dar...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-06-2006, 12:34 PM
#76
Thanks, folks. I'm going to alter the chapter a bit to incorporate the suggestions, because they're good. EDIT: Added a few lines for 'color'. @cutmeister--you would not believe how challenging it is to find anything detailed on ship-boarding tec...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-05-2006, 9:49 PM
#71
Uh, it was a _small_ freighter and they could see everything, yeah, yeah, or maybe R4 stayed by the door, that's it, but I'm just sure it's not the fact that the author is really clueless on safety techniques when boarding a potentially hostile ship...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
04-05-2006, 6:07 PM
#69
Chapter 9: A New Threat The swirling tube of light that was the visual manifestation of hyperspace had resolved back into individual stars by the time we arrived at the cockpit. R4 was already linked to the navicomputer to triangulate our location....  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] Star Wars:The Beginning.
  Jae Onasi
04-05-2006, 5:16 PM
#67
Mandolorian mating techniques.... :rofl: Love the 'bugs.'...  [Read More]
Posted in: KOTOR III Wishlist
  Jae Onasi
04-12-2006, 1:29 PM
#38
Younger and Cute PC Heads for Females. Masculane and Younger PC Heads for Males Naw, if I'm going to play a Goddess of the Force, I'd like my PC to look like she's seen at least a little bit of the galaxy. I don't want cute, I want drop-dead gorgeou...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Star wars: Heart of the Guardian
  Jae Onasi
04-05-2006, 9:36 AM
#48
The plot thickens. :) The wolf description was interesting. I did wonder what would happen if Michaela woke up and found a wolf at the foot of their bed. :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: Romance Options for Kotor 3
  Jae Onasi
04-10-2006, 10:55 AM
#74
:lol: Post of the day Heh, I think post of the year, probably. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: Romance Options for Kotor 3
  Jae Onasi
04-10-2006, 9:12 AM
#71
KOTOR 3 should be all about getting laid. Going from planet to planet trying to get with the hottest chicks/dudes you can find. Doesn't matter what species either. Twi'lek, Cather, Human. Sleep with them all! You could use your Jedi mind tricks to...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Jae Onasi
04-12-2006, 1:04 PM
#46
Jae, every writer I have studied or met is a lot like an actor. They thrive on their work, and feel better when they get the applause. As for being the critic, I think anyone can come up with a valid comment about another's work. So people, if yo...  [Read More]
Posted in: (fic) KOTOR excerpts
  Jae Onasi
04-11-2006, 12:09 AM
#39
I suspect some of the lack of comments may also because they know you're the Critic, and perhaps feel like they don't have the credentials to critique your material or are even intimidated (when I was a teen (awhile ago....), I was very uncomfortable...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
04-09-2006, 12:27 AM
#305
But these fics are done on computers, so there is no pen or sword... In other words you're beginning to confuse me.... The keyboard is mightier than the lightsaber? :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
04-08-2006, 11:06 PM
#303
The pen is mightier than the sword.......  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
04-08-2006, 4:02 PM
#301
^Thankfully I have learned the fine art of going through posts and actively looking for spelling errors. I think I'll put it to use sometime soon... We'll all be on the lookout now. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
04-08-2006, 12:34 AM
#299
Ah, she's learning the fine art of teasing all you fan-boys, and doing an excellent job of it, I might add. ;P...  [Read More]
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