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Jae Onasi

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Posted in: What's your Wallpaper? (56k ouchies)
  Jae Onasi
05-21-2006, 5:20 PM
#518
^ Studying for a pharmacy degree, Sith? :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: When will it end?
  Jae Onasi
05-17-2006, 6:07 PM
#4
Unless you've done an exhaustive reading of the fanfics, you're missing a couple gems in the bunch--Jiara's works, and Machievelli's SW: The Beginning and Republic Dawn (the punctuation needs work but he says he's posting without editting, so I don't...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Dark Apprentice [Fan-Fiction]
  Jae Onasi
05-21-2006, 12:02 AM
#6
I am finishing up chapter seven tonight, and I will send the first eighteen pages off to Onasi. Wow... I have plans on running through the seven chapters tonight, so I can beef up certain characters. At this point in the fan-fiction, I am about 50% d...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 12:57 PM
#54
Jae, for something I'm working on that won't be put here: Would someone who claims to see fairies and refuses to accept that they are fictional be defined as fixated or delusional by the shrink? Actually, if you want to be anally precise, it's neit...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  Jae Onasi
05-17-2006, 9:36 AM
#52
^ Oh yeah, noticed that Lucas used that. And why not? If it was successful for Hitler, it would work (and did work) in the movie. I wonder how much of his association with Spielberg influences that. @stingerhs--I'm only opining, since this isn't ba...  [Read More]
Posted in: The Expert Forum
  Jae Onasi
05-16-2006, 3:39 PM
#49
I also had the impression (rightly or wrongly) that the Republic could have put together an army long before the Clone wars had started if the Senate had not been bogged down in debate. I.e. they were trying to decide if the Trade federation was rea...  [Read More]
Posted in: Star Wars: Republic Dawn
  Jae Onasi
05-16-2006, 11:46 AM
#113
:lol: Too much fun. Dunning notices, indeed. I love it when master spies get things done because everyone completely misjudges them as twits....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC}Broken Wounds Heal
  Jae Onasi
05-17-2006, 12:38 AM
#12
Cool chapters. I'd like to see more battle scene descriptions--what are the death-defying fighter stunts? What do they look and feel like? Saw that you took a page from Fa Mulan. It's a good story (and animated movie), and works with the other Japa...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Betrayal and Retribution: Percieved Reality
  Jae Onasi
05-20-2006, 12:52 AM
#20
Jeez's brush with DS is definitely darker and more intense--I liked it. It takes a lot to put one over Windu. Will Jeez ultimately be able to get away with the half-truth/half-lie? It will be interesting to see....  [Read More]
Posted in: Concept Drawings
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 1:15 PM
#38
I liked both, though if absolutely forced to choose between 2 good drawings, the zhell vs. taung wins by a slim margin, simply because the action adds a bit more interest....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-21-2006, 3:40 PM
#221
^ :D You know, you're right, she would have asked about her cousin. I'll go fix that one, too--if not in the last chap, then in the next. I'll give you a Bindo prize for that--it'll look nice on the shelf next to your Whatever prize. :D Thanks, too...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-20-2006, 11:08 PM
#219
Heh, I was writing some notes out for the rest of the story while sitting at the first aid table at our taekwondo tournament in between sending a guy to the hospital for a bad concussion and treating a broken nose (it was far more 'exciting' today th...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-20-2006, 1:32 AM
#217
@cm--I'm not so sure he's totally sworn off marriage--I just think he was hurt so bad that he wasn't ready to even consider another relationship for a long while. However, if the right woman came along again, I think he'd be married again in a heartb...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-20-2006, 12:20 AM
#214
Chapter 23: Telos The days in hyperspace passed quickly with all our studies on the lightsaber form and Scourge defense. Talin and I sat down for breakfast the morning of our arrival to Telos to review plans for the day, holding hands while eating...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 4:26 PM
#213
It is possible to make a list, though it'll take me awhile (this is 115 pages in Word so far, probably more to my amazement than anyone else). I'm coming up on a reporting deadline for my volunteer post, have 3 major activities over the next 3 weeken...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 1:19 PM
#211
@JK707, thanks, and boy, do you have a lot of reading ahead of you. :D @RP--I appreciate it much. Next chapter is coming slowly together....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 1:33 AM
#208
Dad's doing better today and should be out of ICU tomorrow. Everyone's pleased with his progress, and he's feeling a lot better compared to before the surgery. Thanks for prayers and best wishes, everyone!...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-16-2006, 11:37 PM
#206
Glad to hear that your Pop is doing better and out of surgery. My best wishes for a full and speedy recovery to him. :) I understand now why the old folks I know talk about their bowels all the time. It's because their bowels give them so much grief....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-16-2006, 10:49 PM
#203
Thanks Darth Jester and JediMaster12! @JM12: He has a lot of people praying for him, but I always feel you can never have too many prayers. I adore the outfit/sketch idea. I look forward to seeing it. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-16-2006, 9:08 PM
#200
My dad is out of surgery and doing much better. If they hadn't done the surgery today, they would have had to do a much more serious surgery tomorrow. He's in ICU tonight....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] The Adventures of Jolee Bindo
  Jae Onasi
05-16-2006, 3:24 PM
#199
Yes, I laughed at Jolee asking 'what are you waiting for?' And no, I won't give the plot away. Mainly because I'm not 100% sure of all the details myself yet. :D The garden certainly would have been a more romantic setting, but I wouldn't have been...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 1:12 PM
#165
I loved the 'surely you aren't that stupid' comments. :) T-4's in trouble.... Nice job. I look forward to the next installment....  [Read More]
Posted in: MacLeodCorp (W.I.P.) New!
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 1:28 AM
#46
[Persuade] Must...resist.... Jae [failure] It's a mod, mod, mod, mod world! :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: MacLeodCorp (W.I.P.) New!
  Jae Onasi
05-17-2006, 10:23 PM
#44
Congrats on 1k posts and good luck on finals. Jimbo and I are looking forward to the next mod installment. :D...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness
  Jae Onasi
05-18-2006, 2:24 AM
#407
^ I disagree--you have to understand good writing to be a good critic. If you understand good writing, you generally can write at least passably well. You can't be a good writer and critique your own writing well. However, that doesn't stop you from...  [Read More]
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