machievelli

Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith Reckoning

09-23-2006, 4:50 PM
#26

Mira “Master, why is this so confusing to you?” I asked her a day or so later. She had been in a deep contemplative mood all of that time, and I hated to interrupt it. Tysy had always been easy going in her training. She had shown me the basics,... [Read More]

Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith Reckoning

machievelli

09-16-2006, 4:58 PM
#24

Yeah, good chapters, although i found the Mach's chapter a little confusing. I could explain it all for you this very second, Jase: But I won't. If you've read my other stuuf, you'll see all of them have a convoulted thread worked through them, an... [Read More]

Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith Reckoning

machievelli

09-15-2006, 8:18 PM
#20

Corellia Bastila “That is odd.” I looked up at Mira’s soft comment. She was deep in her studies. I had not wanted to handle an apprentice just yet, but when Tysy Dvukh had dumped her on me, there was little I could do about it. The girl had a... [Read More]

Posted in: KOTOR III: The True Sith Reckoning

machievelli

09-12-2006, 2:27 PM
#15

Tal-Shayana: Legend of the Original extinct Sith race. ‘The harp of doom’. A device created in the midst of history before the Republic was formed. Supposedly an alien race came to a Sith occupied system and terrorized the people, taking many Si... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-24-2006, 10:32 PM
#182

Confrontation Marai The floor of the cave was vitrified stone. It felt satin smooth to the touch. Ahead of me I could see light, and as I stepped into the cavern I stopped stunned at the sight before me. A massive structure that looked like a clawe... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-23-2006, 10:53 PM
#180

Nice way to have the HK situation resolved. Will Sion be doing anything the last few chapters, as he's not dead? I have considered it. You'll have to wait until the segment after next...... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-23-2006, 9:52 PM
#177

It appears my liking for Goto will remain unique to me... A pity. :) ED. I would have saved him if I could think about working around the Droid cut segments. The situation with him deciding to interfere with the process of removing the Trayus Core s... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-23-2006, 2:42 PM
#171

Marai I lit my lightsaber, and watched him. Sion watched me, then his own lit. “The last of the Jedi.” He said it almost as if he was savoring the words. “No, Kielan. Not the last. There are three more that stand outside, and two more amon... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-18-2006, 12:37 PM
#169

Dissolution Marai We passed the huge shape of the shadow mass generator, and there ahead of us was what looked like a vitrified stone road. I led with Atton and Bao-Dur behind me, Brianna and Visas next, and Mira at the rear. The road meandered alo... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-16-2006, 9:49 PM
#168

Setting up the HK/Remote/Goto scene? My version of it, yes. But you won't get to read it until i have posted the section after next.... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-15-2006, 9:45 PM
#165

Enroute to Malachor Ebon Hawk: Atton “I was bothered by something.” I said as we entered hyper space. “You and Visas keep calling this Sith lord Quintain. But who was he?” “Admiral Valentine Quintain of the Republic is who he was.” Ma... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-14-2006, 11:43 AM
#164

I had to edit two section regarding the shadow mass generator. If you read the expert column starting witt The Earth Sucks, you'll see why.... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-13-2006, 4:58 PM
#163

Kreia sounds like she's reffering to death. Will we be hearing any more of Quintain? In the next section.... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-13-2006, 1:21 PM
#161

Order of Battle Marai I had everyone seated around the mess deck table as I began the briefing. I had included Admiral Onasi and Bastila because someone might have to go after me, and I didn’t want them unclear in what they faced if they did. �... [Read More]

Posted in: SW: Return From Exile

machievelli

09-11-2006, 2:57 PM
#159

You know, the 'planned misdirection' sounds like something out of Langley and/or the A-Team. Your choice. :D Actually, it happens all the time. WEB Griffith in his Corps series had a man who had landed on Makin island during the war and commented a... [Read More]

Posted in: The Entertainment Centre Awards 2006!

machievelli

09-18-2006, 4:10 PM
#84

Best Sequel Isn't RC the only person here who has written a sequel? What do you call Star Wars the Beginning and Republic dawn by yours truly My little imaginary friend? Or Alkoniums's trilogy? As a side note, as per last year I will not vote in th... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

09-14-2006, 10:27 AM
#110

^^^^ ahh, now you run into the dilemma of the Black Hole where gravity is so great that not even light is fast enough to escape it. in that case, a more accurate name for the Mass Shadow generator would be the "Black Hole" generator. ;) t... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

machievelli

09-14-2006, 12:10 AM
#108

The Earth sucks; or; Commentary on gravity Here I am flying along with my KOTOR II novel when suddenly I noticed a mistake worthy of the movie Citizen Kane. I have a device creating a mass shadow equivalent to a B9 star with a surface gravity of... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-23-2006, 1:17 AM
#396

This isn't entirely on-topic, but at SWKnights you said someone ripped off your bank account. My sympathies. That would be awful to say the least. :( The worst is that the bank started out completely unsympathetic. Their comment was that 'if' we cou... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-23-2006, 1:09 AM
#394

Thanks for the reviews, Mach. :D I'm aware that the timeline in Misplaced Trust is a little off. Sorry about that. I just didn't think it was worth a re-write to fix it... No worries, Doc. I just pointed it out because I thought you'd shaved a few y... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-22-2006, 10:01 PM
#392

I looked at the dates/categories of the 3 kfm submissions--looks like they all could have been for the Sept. '05 Duelling circle challenge on 'Crossovers' (crossing Kotor characters with some other story/movie, like putting Kotor characters in the Pi... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-22-2006, 2:15 PM
#389

Seriously mach, I don't know how you manage to get a hold of my deleted Fics. An okay review though. The reason it is bad is because I didn't continue it. Also, I've noticed you do reviews every Friday. Do you always do it then? First, you might ha... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-22-2006, 1:56 PM
#387

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Revan's Descendant (http://www.lucaforums.com/showthread.php?t=168242) Pottsie 36 years before the Phantom menace: A Jedi discovers a young girl being served up to a... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-15-2006, 3:59 PM
#384

Nice, my first review. :lol: Mach says to be less descriptive and Jae to be a little more descriptive. Anyways, thanks for the advice Mach. I'll see if my upcoming fic is better. I was talking about the overall battle scenes, rather than the specif... [Read More]

Posted in: The Critic's 2 cents

machievelli

09-15-2006, 4:31 AM
#381

Coruscant Entertainment Center (http://www.lucasforums.com/forumdisplay.php?f=640) Red Skies (http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=168135) smsummers Prequel to KOTOR: Glimpses of the beginning of the Jedi Civil War The biggest problems are... [Read More]

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