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[Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness

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 ForceFightWMe12
02-16-2006, 10:09 PM
#251
:D Thanks guys :D

Alright, when did I post the last one? The 11th? Alright...the next chapter'll be due out...say...25th of February.
 RC-1162
02-24-2006, 7:27 AM
#252
awesome chapter FFWM12!! im sorry i didnt reply earlier, but with my exams...
 ForceFightWMe12
02-24-2006, 11:03 AM
#253
Thanks, RC :D How did you exams go?

AACK! I just realized my deadline is tomorrow :O
 RC-1162
02-25-2006, 1:47 PM
#254
no actually, my exams are coming up, thats the prob. dont worry though, ill be around from time to time. :D
 mercenery74
02-26-2006, 6:10 AM
#255
I hope the new chapter is coming soon because this story is great.
 Diego Varen
02-26-2006, 6:33 AM
#256
I hope the new chapter is coming soon because this story is great.

I agree with you.
 mercenery74
02-26-2006, 6:43 AM
#257
I agree with you.
Thanks
 JediKnight707
02-26-2006, 5:56 PM
#258
@mercenery74 don't spam.

And FFWM wasn't your chapter due yesterday.
 Jae Onasi
02-27-2006, 2:45 PM
#259
All I can say is, wow! This is an interesting and fun story, and my jaw dropped when I saw your age....
I've read stuff by people in college that couldn't hold a candle to what you have here. Your ability to paint pictures with words/conversations is terrific. Don't be afraid to show it to your Eng. teacher either--she may not be into SW stuff, but good writing is good writing, regardless of the subject/genre. I caught some spelling errors, but nothing big. When you hit high school (and I daresay, college), pick up as many Eng. classes/creative writing classes as you can--the more you write/read other good writing, the easier it will be to develop your talent even further.
Now don't ignore school for writing this fic, but I'll enjoy seeing the next installment just like everyone else here. :)
Good job and keep it up!
 ForceFightWMe12
03-01-2006, 6:09 PM
#260
Thanks Jae :D I've actually been looking to jump into the honors English and things once next year begins...pretty exciting, actually (she's excited about school? What's wrong with her?!?!?! :xp: ) and thanks for then encouragment. I'm glad you like my story! :D

Alright, I've been trying to update for the past couple of days but, wonders of wonders, my computer froze every single time I've tried to post the next chapter. Yay. So, this is about the...tenth time I'm rewritting this post.
Good news and bad news. Bad news, this chapter was cut a bit short because I couldn't figure out how to end it yet :xp: Good news, this and the next chapter should be the last without romance. I know, you're crushed. :xp:

Anyway....chapter Fifteen. Enjoy

__________________________________________________ _________


---Chapter Fifteen---



“You guys doing alright?” Revan asked, pushing his way through the motes of dust and cobwebs that his feet kicked up as he continued down the northern hallway.
“I’m fine,” came Bastila’s voice, “But I’ll be better once I get out of these cobwebs.”
“Nothing much here. Just a lot of d-du-ACHOO! Dust.” came Carth’s reply.
“Don’t tell me we’re arachnophobia now, Bastila?” Revan asked, a small smile playing over his face as he pushed away another curtain of the thin, sticky web.
“Of course not!”
“Hehaha, I can see the headline on the holonets now! Galaxy’s most famous Jedi prodigy, afraid of spiders!”
Oh, be quiet, Carth.
Revan heard what sounded like a rock falling and bouncing across the flagstones. Now suddenly alert, he brandished his blaster, taking it in his right hand. His left hand crossed over his right at the wrists, holding his flashlight parallel to the blaster’s barrel. If he had activated his lightsaber, it would have shown his full face and body, giving away information that could come in handy, should someone attack. Though now as he scanned the ancient hallway, he saw he needn’t have bothered. There was no one there. Though as he took in deep breaths to calm himself, he felt the air currents in the tunnel change. In an enclosed space like that, it only meant one thing: someone other than himself was moving around in that tunnel.
“Hey guys, keep your eyes peeled. There’s something strange going on here…”

~*~*~

“Guys, something’s wrong.” the Exile said, jogging into the cantina, and spotting the table where Mira and Atton were sitting. “I just overheard one of the judges. There’re Mandalorians, mercenaries, they’re after the others--”
“Hold on there, space boy.” Mira said, “All I understood was ‘overheard’.”
“What’s going on, Elron?” Atton asked, his expression serious for once. He was even gathering up the pazzack decks…and scooping a few extra credits into his lap along with them.
“Duulas, one of the Selkath judges at the high courts, he’s got some kind of grudge against Revan.” Elron explained, calmer this time. “And he somehow figured out where Revan was going. He’s already sent ahead Mandalorian mercenaries to the Rift. They’re going to ambush the others.”
“What??” both Scoundrels asked, simultaneously.
“We have to help them. Somehow.” Elron said.

~*~*~

“Hey guys, keep your eyes peeled. There’s something strange going on here…”
“I know…I can feel it too.”
Carth turned the high beam of his flashlight on, illuminating the room before him. He had reached the end of his corridor, and had spent the past few minutes gazing around and studying the room before him. It seemed almost to be some kind of…training room, maybe? He went to a console, and brushed off the dust. He hit what he thought was the button to turn it on, but the screen just flashed green, two yellow characters coming up, before sparking uncontrollably and burning his hand.
“Damn.” he murmured, shielding his eyes from the bright sparks. “Well, so much for this getting easier.”
He scanned the walls. Perhaps he’d find something here…
“Revan?”
“Here.”
“I reached the end of the hallway. It’s a room…looks almost like a training room of sorts…”
“Well, we won’t know what it is until we can study it closely enough. Are there any symbols or hieroglyphics anywhere? Any kind of writing at all?”
“There was a consol, but it practically blew up in my face when I tried to turn it on. But…” Carth ran the beam of his flashlight over the walls, peering at the markings closely. “It looks almost as if there was some kind of mural or painting or something here…”
“You have your data scanner, right?”
“Yeah,” the Admiral answered, attaching a sliver of metal into a slot on his datapad. He hit a button, and the edge of the metal lit up green, sending a beam of the same color light onto the wall. Carth opted to create a larger grid, then began to sweep the surface of the stone with the light methodically, being careful to capture every detail possible. Once finished, he uploaded it to the datapad, and now had an exact recreation of the carvings on the wall saved on his datapad. “And I’m one step ahead of you.”

~*~*~

As the beam of light swept through the dust, penetrating the darkness, the Jedi Counselor behind it had her senses on full alert. She felt something different in the air and the dust…it had a smell to it. She knew that ancient places often did, but this was different…
Then there were the sounds she was hearing. Every once in a while, she would hear a tapping or something of the like that would make her jump, stop, and scan the area, only to see that her fears were unfounded when the hallway was empty.
The stone hallway took a sharp right up ahead, and she headed for it cautiously. Who knew what would be hiding behind it? She took the turn, her deactivated saber out and ready--
“Hello there, sweet.”
She was met with a Mandalorian in full battle armor, his face hidden behind that damnable T-visored helmet. Before she could do anything but bring her saber up, the Mandalorian sprayed…something in her face. Her instincts told her not to breath, but even to do the Force-technique to save her, she had to draw in at least one breath.
“Bastard.” she choked out, before getting her saber unsheathed, but her opponent seemed ready for it. He had twin vibroblades out in the blink of an eye, and their blades clashed, illuminating the gloom.
“Not bad. Though I have to believe that the Jedi-beauty everyone talks about is rather overrated.” the voice said from beneath the visor. Bastila ignored the comment. If she was going to top out this man, she would have to keep her wits about her and stay calm. She was able to pin both his arms above his head, rendering the blades useless, and then laid him flat with a kick to the gut. She placed the glowing yellow blade to his neck, looking down at the Mandalorian with distaste.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you.”
Bastila whipped around, only to feel the butt of a rifle get slammed into her jaw. The dizzying blow dropped her in an instant. As she crumpled to the ground, the Jedi could have sworn her jaw was shattered. She recovered after a moment, and looked at the second man that had come from behind her. He too was a Mandalorian. And now, as she looked down the blaster barrel, she saw that a laser-sight had been attached to the muzzle. Not surprisingly, when she looked down, the laser was trained right on her heart. What was surprising, was that there was more than one.
She gasped, choking down panic. There were at least ten other red dots on her person. There was a whole army down here. And by the Jedi’s guess, she wasn’t the only one they were after…

~*~*~


Carth nearly jumped out of his skin at the noise. What the hell was that? He turned back to the door, his flashlight piercing through the darkness and motes of dust. Nothing. The air currents of the room changed as the sound reached the Admiral’s ears again, this time followed with the sound of wind being sucked in, and a sound that rattled like bones. “Double damn.” Carth murmured, pulling his blaster from its holster. If there was anything down here, he wasn’t about to let it get the jump on him. There was a second sound of gushing air, this one much closer, and the soldier knew exactly what it was. He whipped around, only to be met with the hilt of a vibroblade.
Blood poured down the Admiral’s face from his broken nose. Realizing far too late that he wasn’t alone, Carth rolled backwards, away from whatever had attacked him. He ripped a cloth from his belt and put it beneath his nose, trying to staunch the flow of blood as he raised his blaster to confront his attacker.
“Typical Republic incompetence.” the voice said from behind the T-visor.
“Mandalorians.” Carth said, feeling his own blood leak through the fabric and down his hand. However, in a second, the Mandalorian fell over, a melted hole in the dead-center of his T-visor. He placed a second round into the man’s chest, just to be sure. He then scanned the room again, reaching for his comm. as he dropped the now blood-soaked cloth.
“Revan, Bastila, come in! We’ve got trouble! Repeat, we are not alone!”

~*~*~

“Revan, Bastila, come in! We’ve got trouble! Repeat, we are not alone!”
Thanks for the early warning. Revan thought sarcastically as one of his double-blades whipped around, neatly severing a mercenary head.
As he retreated down the hallway, he called into the comm. “Group back at the sub. First one there, start the engines and prepare to get the hell out of here. Repeat, retreat to the sub!”
The Knight redirected a blaster shot, sending it ricocheting into the wall, and causing a landslide of the ancient plaster. The commotion and disturbance it created gave Revan the perfect smokescreen to bolt.
“Bastila?! Carth?! Someone, answer me!”
He got static with scattered, unrelated noises, none sounding like Carth or Bastila. The mercs were jamming their frequency.
Another chain of blaster shots came from ahead, one grazing by Revan’s shoulder. Anxious about his friends and tired of having to deal with this kind of thing, Revan used the Force to propel him in a leap, allowing him to slice straight through the mercenaries ahead without even having to put a foot down.
He was finally able to gain the main room, where there were, of course, more mercenaries and Mandalorians waiting for him.
“Stop, Knight!” one of the Mandalorians called out in a hard, commanding voice.
“Heh, yeah right!” Revan called back, his saber slicing easily through another helmeted head.
“Stop…” the same man said. He motioned someone forward and Revan froze instantly, “Or she gets it.”
The mercenary the Mandalorian had motioned forward had Bastila. Her saber arm was forced up and behind her back, a vibrosword at her exposed neck. She struggled slightly, but the Knight knew it was futile. “Revan!” she was able to choke out.
“Put your weapons down.” the guy in charge said, waving a blaster barrel in Revan’s face, “Now.”
He slowly bent over, laying his saber on the ground. Revan then pulled out his blaster, and set it down as well.
“Pick them up.” the same guy said to another merc, who obeyed immediately.
“What did you do?” Revan asked, “Pick up the whole mercenary population of Manaan and follow us down here? I can’t think of anyone I would’ve pissed off bad enough to send all of you to the bottom of the seafloor. Hell, why not shoot me in the streets?”
“Our employer wants things done quietly and efficiently.” the Mandalorian said, “And no more questions.”

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 Jae Onasi
03-01-2006, 7:52 PM
#261
Nicely done there. I'm enjoying the adventure. Your cliffhangers leave your fans wanting more.... :)

If I have a fairly large post, I've learned to write it in Word (I'm sure any word processing program would work fine) and then copy and paste it into the reply window when I'm on the forum. That way, if the computer has fits, I don't have to re-type the entire thing. If I happen to be offline, I have my own copy if for some reason I need to review or edit something.
I liked school, too. Nothing wrong with that. My grandmother used to tell me, 'the knowledge is never wasted.' :D
 Hallucination
03-01-2006, 7:56 PM
#262
Another Forcefight-tacular chapter, Forcefight (Congrats, you're name has become and adjective!). It gets three thumbs up! :thumbs1: now where did I put that third one....;)

But unless Bastilla embodies fear of spiders, she's arachnophobic, not arachnophobia ;).
 ForceFightWMe12
03-01-2006, 8:01 PM
#263
If I have a fairly large post, I've learned to write it in Word (I'm sure any word processing program would work fine) and then copy and paste it into the reply window when I'm on the forum. That way, if the computer has fits, I don't have to re-type the entire thing. If I happen to be offline, I have my own copy if for some reason I need to review or edit something.
I do the same thing, though I don't save the post in the beginning (Author's Note) with the chapter, so when my browser freezes, I have to repost the Author's note again. :xp: Anyway, glad you like it! :D :D :D

Awesome, I'm an adjective!! :lol: Thanks, Hal. And I seriously have to turn off that auto-correct thing...my Word didn't like arachnophobic, and it obviously took it into its own hands to change it...grr...
 JediKnight707
03-01-2006, 8:33 PM
#264
Where's that computer?? I'm gonna kick its machine ***. :) Great chapter. Nice adjective usage Hall Hope there's SOME romance in the next one. I mean, I'll settle for a hug. :D Keep 'em comin'
 Renegade Puma
03-02-2006, 3:44 AM
#265
Great chapter Forcefight! Although I can't see a Jedi putting down his lightsaber for anything. But in this case I understand that these certain Jedi aren't quite normal. And they are in love :) So when's the next deadline?
 MdKnightR
03-03-2006, 11:55 AM
#266
I loved the chapter, but I did detect an error. Bastilla is a Sentinel, not a Consular. I can't wait to see what happens next!
 ForceFightWMe12
03-03-2006, 4:51 PM
#267
Well you know, Counselor, Sentinel, same thing :xp: Oh, and MK, I remember I needed to ask you something...ah yes. Here it is:

You know, I have been influenced as well, but I am no writer. I think I may start a new painting based on the scene of Bastila with Revan in the library. Have him looking out the window with his back to the viewer so that all you see is his silhouette. Maybe have Bastilla in the extreme foreground so that all you see of her is the edge of her thigh and a hand holding a datapad. What do you think?

Out of curiosity, did anything come of that?


Thanks Renegade :D Yeah, Bastila and Revan...don't fall under your 'normal' catagory. Sorry :xp: Glad you liked it :D

:lol: I wouldn't do that, now, JK. If you break my computer, I won't be able to post any new chapters :lol: Right, well, hug it is. :xp:
 MdKnightR
03-04-2006, 11:11 AM
#268
Not yet. Unfortunately, my life has been so busy lately that I haven't painted anything in months. I barely find the time to sit down and read the fan fiction anymore. If I get some time, I will try to get that idea on canvas. I have plenty of blank ones in my studio.
 RC-1162
03-05-2006, 12:30 PM
#269
awesome work ForceFight!!! my first exam got over today and it was my last hindi exam EVER!! YAAAY!! and yesterday my baby sis turned 3 years old! great work once again, dudess.
 JediKnight707
03-05-2006, 6:55 PM
#270
^Happy birthday to your sister RC :)
 ForceFightWMe12
03-05-2006, 8:55 PM
#271
^^
What he said :lol:

Thanks RC, glad your exams went well :D :D
 RC-1162
03-06-2006, 12:18 PM
#272
well, actually, the first exam went well :D the rest are yet to be done well on :lol:
 ForceFightWMe12
03-06-2006, 3:14 PM
#273
:lol: Right, I totally knew that :lol:
Well, glad the first went well and I hope the rest go just as smoothly. :xp:
 RC-1162
03-07-2006, 6:42 AM
#274
they will, get a chap ready as a freedom gift for me :D :lol:
 Seamhainn
03-08-2006, 9:50 AM
#275
Any chance to get the story so far in one piece? I just jumed on the waggon...

Take care
 †Saint_Killa†
03-11-2006, 9:36 AM
#276
Greatest fic evah!!!! :D

keep it up!!! I cant wait for the next one.
 Renegade Puma
03-21-2006, 4:34 AM
#277
Alright Forcefight, it's been 19 days since your last update! When is the next one coming???? For the love of all that's pure and holy, why do you make us wait for years?
 milo
03-21-2006, 7:11 PM
#278
Hey, this is a great story. Tell me, have you put this on fanfiction.net? Just wondering. I'm sure there are people there that would love your fic. Anyways, keep up the good work, update soon.
 ForceFightWMe12
03-21-2006, 9:03 PM
#279
:lol: Sorry Renegade! I am working on it, I swear. I don't neccissarily mean to leave you guys hanging for so long...my mind just kinda takes a long time to figure out the chapter. It's almost like I have to be in a certain mood to write a chapter correctly...otherwise, if I try to force it out, it comes out terrible. If it makes you guys feel any better, this isn't the only story that takes me forever to update :xp:

Thanks, Saint and Milo, I'm glad you guys like it :D As for posting it on FF.net...no, I haven't. I don't really like Fanfiction.net...it's too...strict, maybe? I dunno...just doesn't feel right to me...
 Hallucination
03-21-2006, 11:31 PM
#280
^If you're having trouble writing, sometimes re-reading it and
>_>
<_<
fixing spelling errors helps inspire some people.

I'm so tactful...
 Renegade Puma
03-22-2006, 5:45 AM
#281
* Renegade puts duct tape on Hallucination's mouth. *

You aren't allowed to speak to the queen in such a manner ever again! Doing so will result in hot coffee being spilled on your face, being tied up in a room full of fire ants, or possible head lossage.

Have a nice day. :)
 RC-1162
03-22-2006, 7:19 AM
#282
or even... well, i wont say that.
but im with RB, get the chapter up ASAP please, FFWM12, and if youre free, thoughts on my fic too?
 †Saint_Killa†
03-25-2006, 9:00 AM
#283
When is the next chapter. :( Has FFWM12 given up???? Hehehe :lol:

Ah well take your time. I presume this chapter is very long. :naughty:
 ForceFightWMe12
04-03-2006, 9:05 PM
#284
Eh, it's kinda-sorta-not really long. 2,000 words. Not the longest I've written, but...

Anyway, here it is.

Sorry, couldn't work a hug in there, though :xp:


- - - - -


---Chapter Sixteen---


“Our employer wants things done quietly and efficiently.”
Carth barely heard the words from where he stood in the shadows. Having activated his stealth field, the Admiral hung back and surveyed the situation.
Mandalorians and miscellaneous bounty hunters ringed the room, most covered head-to-toe in body armor, weapons out and glinting. Bastila was captured, and Revan had, for the moment, laid down his weapons in response to the apparent leader’s threats. But there were so many of them…Revan wouldn’t dare do anything that put Bastila in danger, he knew. And there was no way that a lone Republic officer could defeat the small army on display here. Think Carth, think! There just had to be a way.

~*~*~

As the Exile, Atton, and Mira slipped out of the cantina, they failed to notice the stealthed figure watching them. His eyes glinted as they passed, not failing to take in Mira’s shapely form. Even so, as they proceeded, he spoke into the comm. that lay in his hand.
“His companions are on the move.” the man said, “They’re headed north east. I’ll tail ‘em into the West Courtyard, but you sure as hell had better be waiting. This job must be totally finished. I hate loose ends.”

~*~*~

“So then you’re the great Revan.” the head Mandalorian murmured, the barrel of his blaster pressing under the Knight’s chin. “I’d think that the most well-known warrior in the galaxy, the one who defeated even us, would be a bit more intimidating than this.”
“It would, of course, be more helpful if you didn’t hide behind hostages.” Revan said, his voice edged and his eyes flashing.
“Bastard!” the Mandalorian said, and a moment later, the butt of the blaster crashed into Revan’s jaw. The Knight’s head snapped to the side momentarily, but quickly came back to the T-visor. Revan spat out the small bit of blood that had gathered in his mouth as if it were no more than spit, his eyes glaring daggers at the man.
“I hope that wasn’t supposed to intimidate me.” he said. He could sense the man frown under his helm.
Seconds after the Knight’s statement, a shot rang out.
“Hey, watch those…” the leader turned around in time to see the mercenary who was holding Bastila crumple to the ground, a blaster wound in his head. “Blasters.”
Revan didn’t waste a moment. Now that Bastila was no longer in the hands of a merc, the two could get of this situation. Alive, hopefully.
He used the Force to knock the guy holding their sabers to the ground, simultaneously pulling the silver tubes from his jacket and catching them easily, tossing the longer one to Bastila. In seconds, the mercenaries’ blasters loaded as the snap-hiss of the two double-bladed sabers activated.
“Now then,” Revan said, moving so that his back was pressed up against Bastila’s, he jeered the mercenaries, “Perhaps its time to show you the reason why we’re the most renowned Jedi in the galaxy.”

~*~*~

“Sir, we have a bit of a problem.”
“Problem?” the man hissed into the comm. as he discreetly tailed the Exile and his companions. “What problem?”
“The Jedi got out of our trap. We’re holding them for the moment, but our guys are getting cold feet.”
“Damn it.” he hissed.
“What was that, sir?”
After a moment of biting his lip, the man said, “Keep fighting them, though if they kill many more I want you to break rank and let them reach the surface. We’ll be waiting for them. Am I understood?”
“Crystal, sir.”
“Good.” with little more than that, he cut the communication, and switched frequencies. When the man on the other end answered, he said, “I want our men at hanger 31A immediately. We’re falling back on Plan B.”
Once the affirmation was given, he turned off the comm. and slipped it back to his belt, watching the Exile enter the hangar.
I’ll have you yet.

~*~*~

After minutes of fighting, Carth was finally able to slip from his sniper position and join Revan and Bastila. Blasting his way through the mercs, he reached them and pressed his right shoulder against Revan’s and his left against Bastila’s. As he continued to empty rounds, he murmured what information he had to them.
“From what I can see, the hallway back is clear straight up to the sub. If we can reach it before them, we’ll be home free.”
“Unless they have their own submersibles.” Bastila pointed out as her twin blades whirled.
“Point taken.” the pilot answered, one of his blasters kicking back as another mercenary fell.
“Still, it’s the only chance we have.” Revan growled as yet another man joined his comrades on the ground. “On my count, break and run. Ready…One…Two…”
Carth took a deep breath to steady himself.
“Three!”

~*~*~

“Is Revan back yet?” Elron asked as he entered the Hawk’s main hold, where Briana was still diligently reading.
“No,” she said as the datapad winked out, and she stood. Her face was a mixture of confusion and worry, “Should he have?”
“He said he’d meet us here at this time.” he replied, moving to a console as Atton and Mira entered.
“They’re not back yet?” the bounty huntress asked.
“Apparently not.” the Exile murmured back.
The console he was working at emitted a series of beeps as he toggled with the keys. “Revan?” he said, directing his voice at the receiver embedded in the metal, “Revan, this is the Exile. Please respond.”
After a moment of fuzz, he slammed his fist down. “Damn it. They’re still out of range.”
“What do you mean still out of range?” Briana asked, “How long have you been unable to contact them?”
“A long while now.” Elron said, toggling the frequency and the distance. He tried again, with the same result. “I don’t get it! The Hawk can send transmitions between planets, but we still can’t get them!”
“I don’t think that it’s so much they’re out of range,” Atton murmured, “As the signal can’t reach them. Wherever they are, there’s something that’s jamming their comms.
“Bweep deet WHAAAAAIO!!!”
“Now what is the bucket of bolts on about?” the Scoundrel growled, turning to see T3 careening into the room.
“He says we got company.” Elron said darkly, and went to the cockpit. Glancing quickly out the viewscreen, he swore under his breath. “I was afraid of this.”
“What is it?” Mira asked, following him in.
“Mercenaries. And a hell of a lot of ‘em.”

~*~*~

“Are you sure none of them are following us?” Revan asked Carth, nervously glancing at the waters enveloping the sub. “No cloaked vehicles? No ‘dead-in-the-water’ subs?”
“There’s nothing, Rev.” Carth reassured him. “I’ve been scanning the waters constantly, and nothing’s come up. Trust me, I have an intuition on this sort of thing.”
“I hope you’re right, Carth.” Bastila murmured, “For all our sakes.”
Sure enough, their submersible came by no distractions as it made its hasty assent to the surface. They docked quickly, and ignored the questions directed at them by the port officials, and practically ran back to the docked Hawk.
“Elron? Handmaiden? Anyone? It’s Revan. We’re back on the surface and we’ll be at the ship in a matter of minutes.”
“Revan? Force, I thought we lost you.” the voice of the Exile filtered through the comm. “Though while it’s great to hear your voice again, you might want to make those minutes into seconds. We got trouble here. Those mercenaries that were after you had some friends up here on the surface. They decided to come and see if we could play.”
“What?? Where the hell are the Selkath security?”
“No idea, but they’re not here.”
“Damn it. Alright, we’ll be there as soon as we can. Keep the blaster turrets on the ship warm and take out as many as you can. We’ll need a clear pathway to the loading ramp too, if you can manage it.”
“Way ahead of you, sir. Elron out.”
“You heard the man,” Revan said, pulling his saber from his belt and replacing the comm. “Let’s get a move on. We don’t want to miss all the fun.”

~*~*~

“Here they come!” Briana shouted up to Elron, who was currently mowing down mercs from the main turret at the top of the ship. “The cavalry has arrived, make sure they’ve got room to work!”
“Easy for you to say!” Elron shouted back, jokingly. Though the constant jolting of the gun was beginning to give him a headache. “Get the loading ramp down! I’m not really doing much with the turret anymore. We’ll cut a path for them from the ramp!”
He jumped down from the turret, landing crouched like a cat. “T3, keep those secondary turrets running for me!”
There was a beep of response, and the Exile and Handmaiden jogged to the loading ramp, where Atton, Mira, and the others were already blasting away at the mercs.
“Glad you decided to join us.” Atton said, his twin blasters kicking back as he delivered a devastating charged shot. “Took you long enough.”
“Couldn’t leave you to do a job like this,” Elron said, using the Force to push a particularly heavy container on top of a man, “Who knows if it would get done or not?”
“Enough chit-chat, guys.” Mira said, launching off a rocket, “In case you Jedi haven’t noticed, we got a group of five guys coming up on the right. Another five on the left too. Think they’re trying to flank us.”
“Leave the left to me.” Briana said, her saber igniting as she ran to take on said mercenaries.
“Then it looks like I get the right.” Elron murmured, activating his own weapon. He crashed into the first man, his saber slicing clean through his elbow before piercing his chest. The Exile spun round, Force-pushing a merc hard against the hull of the Hawk, and decapitating another. A fourth fell beneath a blast of the ship’s turret, and the fifth to Elron’s flurry.
He turned his attention back to the main group of mercenaries, and watched as several snipers trained their sights on Carth Onasi as he fired off a continuous stream of shots. “Carth!” he called, but his voice didn’t carry over the blaster fire. He glanced around, and saw Briana sprinting towards Revan and his party. She leaped over their heads, and landed in front of Carth, as if to block the shots of the snipers with her own body. At first, Elron didn’t worry. Her Echanii dueling shield was active, and it would withstand the sniper shots. But as he watched, his heart nearly stopped. The pulsating blue field that announced her Echanii shield flickered and died. Its battery had been outlived.
“Briana!! Your shield!!” he cried, and almost as if they were waiting for the sound of his voice, the mercenaries released the shots. His breath caught in his chest as his apprentice deflected most of the shots…but there were two more shots than she could handle, and he watched her crumple to the ground.
He started to run over to them, but saw Carth pick her up, and begin to drag her along as he, Bastila, and Revan dashed for the open ramp. Instead, he ran into the ship, and stood at the top of the ramp and waited for them to get there.
“C’mon, everyone inside!” he said, “Atton, get the engines fired up and ready! We’re leaving as soon as they set foot on the deck!”
A minute after saying this, Elron helping Carth to get Briana on the ship, and shutting the loading ramp as blaster bolts continued to fly at them. “Punch it Atton!!”
The Hawk gave a lurch forward, and they were gone.

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 JediKnight707
04-03-2006, 9:13 PM
#285
Sorry, couldn't work a hug in there, though :xp:

-_- No hugs for me!?!?!?!?!?!?! *tear* It's so sad!! Now, I'm gonna read the chapter...
 ForceFightWMe12
04-03-2006, 9:55 PM
#286
:lol: Nice, JK.
 Jae Onasi
04-03-2006, 10:04 PM
#287
Maybe not the longest you've written, but all the exciting action more than made up for any perceived 'lack of length'. :-) Nice job.
 The Doctor
04-04-2006, 12:21 AM
#288
You rock, Kate. Great chapter!
 JediKnight707
04-04-2006, 12:51 AM
#289
^Kate is her name? Huh! I just finished the chapter (sorry, homework took over before I could read it :xp: ) Now, I noticed a mistake!! Ha! I have you beaten!! This is your mistake...Am I understood?”
“Crystal, sir.”


It should be: "Am I understood?"
"Yes, sir."
or
"Am I clear?"
"Crystal, sir."

;)

Great chapter though!
 Hallucination
04-04-2006, 1:11 AM
#290
-_- No hugs for me!?!?!?!?!?!?! *tear* It's so sad!! Now, I'm gonna read the chapter...
Under the 'H'.

Good chapter Forcefight, but if you don't update soon my current fic will finish before yours. And I'm not even going to post it until summer break!
 Diego Varen
04-04-2006, 2:18 AM
#291
Took you long enough. No I'm joking. A good Chapter as always.
 Renegade Puma
04-04-2006, 8:44 AM
#292
A spectacular chapter FF. Can I borrow your brain for a little bit so I can finish my fic? Lol, j/k. Seriously though, you amaze me more and more with each new chapter. Brianna had better not be dead! If she is then I am going to boycott this story. ;)
 RC-1162
04-04-2006, 1:49 PM
#293
i dont care what happens as long as you give us the chapters :D
excellent work yet again, ForceFight, and now that youre free (for the time bieng) could you check out my fic, like you promised
 ForceFightWMe12
04-04-2006, 6:17 PM
#294
Jae: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :D I had to pick my brain for this one...I think I spent far too much time daydreaming in bio...now I'm behind...

Doc: Evil Doctor! Now everyone will know my name! :xp:

JK: No, actually Kate is the name of my dog. Honest. I swear. Maybe not. Oh, details details...who needs 'em? :xp:

Hal: Patience is a virtue, my young Padawan ;)

Pottsie: Hey, you can't force these things...at least I can't. If you do, you'll get cancer of the right...something or other. :xp: I'm glad you liked it :D

Renegade: Oooh, but my brain is my buddy! Don't take it away from me! :xp: Well...you might want to start boycotting the story...j/k. Did you really think I would give away part of my plot so easily? Man oh man...:lol:

RC: Oh those darn promises...no, I'm just kidding :D I'll review ASAP...right after I check the SuperObscura :xp:
 RC-1162
04-05-2006, 2:09 PM
#295
thanks, man (well, in this case: gal :D)
i appreciate the thoughts,
Now get back to work on the next chapter! :D
 ForceFightWMe12
04-07-2006, 9:03 PM
#296
Actually, I think I'll take a break. I should get the next chapter out in a month or two...:xp:
 Hallucination
04-07-2006, 10:41 PM
#297
 The Doctor
04-08-2006, 12:01 AM
#298
You. Crazy. Woman.
How can you do that to us?:xp:
I'm just kidding. Take your time - if you rush it, it will suck. A la TSL.
 Jae Onasi
04-08-2006, 12:34 AM
#299
Ah, she's learning the fine art of teasing all you fan-boys, and doing an excellent job of it, I might add. ;P
 Hallucination
04-08-2006, 2:18 PM
#300
^Thankfully I have learned the fine art of going through posts and actively looking for spelling errors. I think I'll put it to use sometime soon...
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