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[Fanfic] The Plight of Darkness

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 Snafu7
09-16-2005, 5:43 PM
#51
awesome job FFWM12, great chapter.
 ForceFightWMe12
09-17-2005, 3:42 PM
#52
Yeah, welcome and no offense, but i think youve been hit on the head. hard.
LOL

Thanks everyone, glad you like it.

Yeah, I've checked out fanfiction.net. It looks good, but its just too...strict? I don't know...it just doesn't feel right.

Well, I'm not sure when I'll have the next chapter up...hopefully soon...
 MdKnightR
09-18-2005, 8:37 PM
#53
Very good chapter! Again, BRAVO! The only thing I might have changed would have been the close of the chapter. You could have built up a little more tension by having Revan be a little more reserved about Bastilla's breakdown. Perhaps cool in his comfort so as not to drive her away, but holding back just enough to let Bastilla know (even in her emotional outburst) that something was on his mind that he wasn't willing to share with her yet. But that is just me. Keep it up!
 ForceFightWMe12
09-19-2005, 12:17 AM
#54
Actually...that's a really good idea. I was at a wall trying to figure out how to close this chapter...but that could work...just to figure if I can work that in...
 Fuu
09-19-2005, 1:44 AM
#55
Nice Job man, Looking foweard to the next one.
Its nice to know theres someone else that likes mush...hehee
Keep it up.
 MdKnightR
09-19-2005, 4:24 AM
#56
Actually...that's a really good idea. I was at a wall trying to figure out how to close this chapter...but that could work...just to figure if I can work that in...

Well, as I am sure that not everyone who will read your story has had the opportunity, I wouldn't hold it against you to go back and edit that part of the chapter.
 Jedi Atomic
09-19-2005, 6:57 PM
#57
Wow your a good writer i just turned in a story the other day and its going to get like a "C" average.........lol and yet im 14 years old.
 ForceFightWMe12
09-19-2005, 8:24 PM
#58
Well, as I am sure that not everyone who will read your story has had the opportunity, I wouldn't hold it against you to go back and edit that part of the chapter.

Well, I think its been a little too long now...but I think I can still...


Wow your a good writer i just turned in a story the other day and its going to get like a "C" average.........lol and yet im 14 years old.


Lol, thanks. I've had a bit of practice....

http://www.fanfiction.shurtugal.com/viewuser.php?uid=183&viewstories)

:D
 RC-1162
09-21-2005, 8:25 AM
#59
so, you finished the chapter yet? not that im hurrying you of course.
 ForceFightWMe12
09-26-2005, 8:43 PM
#60
Actually, now that you mention it...

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---Chapter Nine---

“He didn’t tell us everything.” Briana said as she began to shift her things from her pack into a footlocker. Elron leaned against the door post, watching her.
“What do you mean?” he asked.
“There were several other planets before Revan began his journey here. However, he decided to leave those out in his narration.”
Elron watched as Bastila and Revan left the hallway to go who knows where. “You’re right…I hadn’t noticed that till now.”
“There is something he wants to keep secret…”

Later that night, Bastila crept down the hallway, careful to make no noise as she entered her room. Shutting the door behind her, she lay back on her bed, thinking of all that had happened…in that one day…her entire life had been rebuilt…

The next day, Bastila awoke with a smile on her face and promptly dressed before heading down to the main conference room, thinking that would be where any food would probably be served. As she passed the others rooms, she saw that they were all empty, save for Atton’s.

As she entered the great hall, she saw Revan and Carth sitting at the center table. Breakfast had been set out and Revan and Carth were enjoying their morning meal, laughing at past exploits.

“Ahahaha…ahaha…oh man, and – hehaha! Re – remember the time she l-lost her lightsaber?” Carth laughed, “ ‘It – it must have fallen from my belt and rolled under my seat!’ Hehahaha!”
“Y- yeah!” Revan answered, taken by a new wave of laughter, “Th-that had to be the most embarrassing thing to h-happen to a Jedi! Especially after the Vulkars got her!”
“I assure you,” Bastila said, taking a seat next to them, “Those Vulkars were thinner in number and they were hurting quite badly before they captured me!”
“Y-yeah, th-the key words there are captured you. Th-they still got the best of you!” Carth said, trying to recover after his fit of laughing.
“Well, if memory serves, Revan was nearly killed by the Vulkars down in that race pit. If I hadn’t stepped into that fight--”
“If you hadn’t stepped in that fight,” Revan said, brushing a tear from his eye, “then I would have fared just the same. You’d have saved quite a bit of energy!” he smiled.
“Oh, if you say so. Honestly, staying out here all alone must have worn out your memory!”
“My memory! My memory?” Revan said with a smile, “Remind me who lost their lightsaber again?”
“You can be quiet infuriating sometimes, you know that Revan?” Bastila said, but a smile tugged at the edge of her lips.
“Hey, I try.”

Later that day, after spending some time meditating, Bastila went to seek out Revan. She hadn’t seen him since breakfast…
As she combed the dark hallways, she heard a mighty crash, coming from the direction of the library.
Curious, and slightly worried, Bastila headed there. What she found when she arrived wasn’t what she had expected to see.
Revan was in a fine rage. He stormed around the room, kicking things at random and knocking holocrons and datapads from shelves, even knocking over a few chairs.
When there was a lull in his fit, she spoke to him.
“Revan…?”
He turned to look at her, his expression one of anger and frustration. He said nothing.
“Are…are you alright?”
“You ask me if I’m alright??” he asked, his tone harsh, “Does it look like I’m alright?”
“Well…no…but…” Bastila just couldn’t seem to find any words to say. She had never seen her lover in such a state. “What is wrong?”
He walked away, leaning against a table top, “Everything.”
Cautiously, she followed him, putting her hands on his shoulders. “Please, tell me.”
He shrugged off her touch, walking away again. This time, he stood once again in front of the large window. “I…I do not think I can. Not now, at least. Please, go.”
“But Revan--”
“GO!”
She shrank back, as if he had landed her a physical blow. Never had he raised his voice at her. Never. Whatever was wrong…it was serious. However reluctant she way to do so, she left the library.

For the next few days, Revan was rarely seen. When Bastila tried to confront him, he would say nothing, and always turned her away. She began to get worried.

“It’s like…it’s like he’s changed…somehow…” she said as she stood next to the Exile, watching a few of the others training. “He’s…he’s never been like this before…”
“There is…something he does not wish to tell you. At least not yet.”
“I don’t know what to do…” she said, dropping her head.
“Wait. He will come to you when he’s ready.”

Another two days passed. Then a third. And a fourth. Revan still said nothing.

The evening of the fourth day, Bastila was fed up. She worried about Revan constantly, and decided that that night, she would confront Revan and wouldn’t leave until she got an answer.

“Revan!” she said as she came into the library, finding him once again amongst the old records. He didn’t even turn to face her. “Revan, I need to know what’s wrong. And I need to know now!” she said harshly.
He was quiet for a moment, studying the datapad he had in his hands. Just as Bastila opened her mouth to speak again, he said, “You wish to know?” he closed the datapad, storing it back on its shelf, “You truly wish to know?”
“Revan, if there is absolutely anything I wished to know now, it is what is making you like this?” she pleaded.
“Fine.” he was not as angry as before…but there was still a cold edge to his words. “Then read.” he tossed a datapad to her.
Catching it, she looked from it back to him.
“Read.” he urged.
And so she did. A few minutes later, she looked up. “Revan…”
“Now you know.” he said, turning away from her.
“But…it cannot be true. How can you be sure?”
“It all fits! My birth date, my parent’s names, their home planets, everything! It all fits in place!” he said, slamming a fist against the window.
“After the fall of the Empire, Lord Eiriask-”
“My father.”
“And his wife, Mistress Selinas-”
“My mother.”
“Returned to the remote system of-”
“You don't need to read anymore, it’s all there! My homeworld, my parent’s anniversary date, EVERTHING!” he yelled, taking the datapad from her hands and flinging it against a wall. “I’ve checked every scrap of data from that era, and it all says the same thing. My father was the Emperor of the Ancient Sith before their hidden empire fell.”
Looking defeated, he collapsed in a chair. “Like father like son.” he mumbled.

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Snap, didn't see that coming now did ya? jk jk

This chapter was...well...a bit choppy, if you ask me, but I hope you guys enjoyed it...
 Fuu
09-26-2005, 11:29 PM
#61
woot..... thas nice...... i need to go work on mine.....
keep it up.
F
 RC-1162
09-27-2005, 8:28 AM
#62
well actually, i loved it, its a cool twist and no; i dint see that coming. heck, i was shocked just to see that revan shouted at bastila. :D
 RC-1162
09-27-2005, 9:18 AM
#63
i know this is a dumb request but could you (ForceFightWMe12) check out my story and give me some comments? i keep begging for them but i dont get any. since youre such a good writer, maybe you can give me some suggestions on how to improve on it.
The Hunt for the Sith: URL in sig.
 ForceFightWMe12
09-27-2005, 7:56 PM
#64
Thanks, I'm glad you guys like it. See, I told you I could work things around...well, not really, but...Yeah, I could hardly see Revan shouting at Bastila, but it adds some...interest. And actually, I recently found out that she and Revan (if you're a guy) do kiss in the game. Well...you don't actually get to see it, it does one of those funky black-out things...it was probably a make-out session...damn, can't believe they didn't show it!! Sorry. Back on topic.
Sure, I'll check out your story, Yun Yuzzhan, and thanks for the encouragment, Fuu!
 John Skywalker
09-27-2005, 8:01 PM
#65
yer forcefightWme can you do that for me to your a brilliant writer and im not getting that many reviews its called KOTOR:THE RETURN OF THE SITH and will you be able to give me some tips?
 ForceFightWMe12
09-27-2005, 8:30 PM
#66
Of course! I'm surprised you guys think so highly of me...:D I'll try to help as best I can...
 Snafu7
09-27-2005, 10:33 PM
#67
Just read the new chapter, Great job FFWM12, awesome chapter
 Hallucination
09-28-2005, 12:34 AM
#68
Why is my french teacher so mean? This is the best fic around. In fact I think Lucas should be strolling in here in a while to get you to write out the next star wars novels. Keep it up!
 MdKnightR
09-28-2005, 2:21 AM
#69
Very good twist! That is more like it...keeps the reader on edge!
 RC-1162
09-28-2005, 8:52 AM
#70
^^^^^
you said it!

Of course! I'm surprised you guys think so highly of me... :D I'll try to help as best I can...

its because:
ForceFightWMe12 : The Lord Of Lucasforums Fanfictions

:D :D :D
seriously.
 ForceFightWMe12
09-28-2005, 5:04 PM
#71
:eek: :eek: :eek:

That's right *Vadar breath* All bow down to Lord ForceFight!!! Muwahahahahahaha!!!!

:vadar:

jkjk. Wow guys, I'm flattered!

:D :D :D :D
 RC-1162
09-29-2005, 6:07 AM
#72
Yes, My Lord,
:worship: :worship: :worship:

May you revel in the powers of a successful career in writing.

PS: Thats Vader breath. not vadar.
 ForceFightWMe12
09-30-2005, 12:27 AM
#73
Right, I knew that. Typo. Oops. Heheh. :D

Anyway...

I'm surprised at myself. I actually have the next chapter written within three days. Wow. Well, I haven't gone over it or anything...but I think I'll wait a day or two, let you guys wait for a while yet...
 Fuu
09-30-2005, 12:31 AM
#74
Nooooo waiting sucks...cmon! Toothaches make me impatient.....
Keep it up,
Fuu
 ForceFightWMe12
09-30-2005, 12:44 AM
#75
Well yeah, but I wan't to give myself some time before posting it. I wrote the entire thing up tonight, so I want to go over it and make sure I don't want to add anything or have something to edit or something.

Don't worry, I wouldn't make you wait for no reason...or at least, wouldn't make you wait too long...:D
 RC-1162
09-30-2005, 8:25 AM
#76
hey, no fair. Lords of Writing dont do that to faithful readers and fans.
 ForceFightWMe12
10-01-2005, 12:17 PM
#77
Okay, okay, chill out. Here it is. I blame you!!! :D jkjk Wait...blame you for what?....umm....nvm.


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---Chapter Ten---


Bastila picked up the datapad from the ground and walked back over to Revan.
“Revan…” she said, at a loss for words. She pulled a chair up next to him, draping her arm over his shoulders. “I…I don’t know what to say…”
“Then say nothing at all.” he replied emotionlessly.
She shrank back slightly. He was really taking this hard.
“Please…I just want to help.”
His anger flaring again, Revan grabbed Bastila’s wrist in a vice-grip and waved the barely-working datapad in her face.
“Do you think that you can help me??” he asked, his grip strengthening with his anger, “In spite of all this, do you believe that somehow you can help me?”
“Revan--”
“Do you??” his voice continuing to rise, his face turning slightly red.
“Revan, you’re hurting me.” Bastila said, shrinking back. Fear shone in her watering eyes.
A stunned, fearful expression formed on Revan’s face. Slowly, he released her wrist, drawing back. He stood, turning away from her.
He walked over to the window once again, placing both palms flat against the glass, almost begging for it to give way beneath him and fall to the ground, taking him with it. A storm had blown in and lightning forked the sky as the rain flattened the grass and wind whipped the trees about. Those four words had sent Revan over the edge.
Bastila feared for him. He was deathly white and his face was set in a mixed expression of fear, disbelief, and self-loathing.
“Revan…” she spoke his name once again, coming over to him and touching his shoulder lightly.
“You…you should leave.”
“No, I won’t leave you. I want to help--”
“Please,” he interrupted, “leave me to my sorrow.”
“Why don’t you see that I would do anything for you?” Bastila asked in a whisper. Revan didn’t respond.
Sighing in resignation, Bastila reached up and gave him a light kiss on the cheek before turning and leaving.

Later that night, as rain pounded against the windows, lightning lit the night sky, and thunder shook the compound, Revan lay thrashing in his bed.

“You’re stronger than I am, and there’s no point telling me otherwise. You will be a great Jedi, I think. I hope.”
He and Bastila stood in a dormitory of the Ebon Hawk.
“In some ways, you make me feel weak, like I am caught up in the wake of our destiny. But at the same time, you make me feel stronger, more alive.” he heard Bastila’s voice explain. He knew this time…all those years ago…
“And I feel more alive when I’m with you.” he heard himself respond.
“But…I realize now that these feelings are part of the bond we share. The Council had surely known this. They knew that my loyalty to the doctrines of our Order would be tested on this mission.
“By facing and overcoming my feelings for you, I have learned a valuable lesson about control and the dangers of emotion. This is an important step to understanding the Force.
“I’m sorry if this is not what you wanted to hear. But I felt it was important that you knew our…infatuation…was nothing more than a result of our powerful bond.”
“You’re rationalizing, Bastila.” Revan heard his own voice echo out again, “You’re just scared to face the truth!”
“You’re the one who can’t face the truth! Malak must be stopped. How can I do that if I let myself be blinded by my feelings for you?”
“I’m going to stop Malak, Bastila, but I want to do it with you at my side.”
“You…You really mean that, don’t you? But how can I be certain you’re not making a mistake? I…I must resist. I have to be strong. For both of us.” Bastila said. But her voice was full of uncertainty…almost…doubtful.
“You know I’m right, Bastila.”
“But I don’t…I mean, I can’t….Malak would…” Bastila was faltering.
“I love you, Bastila,” Revan heard his voice echo out yet again, giving that final push. He stepped closer to her, close enough to touch, “And I know you love me.”
“Okay,” Bastila said passionately, “You’ve made your point. Now shut up and kiss me you fool.”
She fell into his arms, and their lips met in a passionate kiss that lasted several minutes. Bastila grabbed the cloth of his shirt, clinging to him desperately, and he held the side of her head, holding her lips against his.
When they finally broke apart, they were out of breath. Bastila’s hands slipped from his chest, and she backed away slowly, shaking slightly.
“We…we shouldn’t have done that…It was wrong. The Jedi aren’t supposed to fall in love!”
“It didn’t feel wrong to me.” he said defiantly.
“It…It was a moment of weakness…when I kissed you…we shouldn’t have…I’m sorry, no!
“I know we both wanted it, but we shouldn’t have given in to our desire! We’re Jedi! We can’t act like this! Not now, not while we still have to deal with Malak. I’m sorry…I don’t blame you…it was a mistake. I have to get out of here before someone sees us together!”
The scene before him faded…

Revan continued to toss and turn. Why did these memories resurface now?

“You will go on to defeat Malak, and go from the Dark Lord himself to the savior of the galaxy.”
Another scene bloomed before his eyes, this time on the Star Forge.
“But before you do that…” Bastila began. She was clutching her side. Revan shivered as he remember that he was the one who had hurt her. “there is something I must know…
“Will there be a place for me in your future? Do you…” she took a breath, apparently steadying herself before dropping the bomb, “Do you love me?”
Despite himself, he felt a joyous, excited, warm feeling envelope in his chest. A feeling that he had been without for far too long.
“I do love you, Bastila.”
“And I love you, with all my heart.”
“You aren’t afraid to love anymore?”
“After this? There is nothing that would make me feel safer than being loved by you.”

Revan woke. He found his brow covered in cold sweat. For a moment, he just lay there, staring at the stone wall…then the regret and guilt hit him like a hammer blow. He slowly sat up.
Good luck, my love, and may the Force be with you.
Bastila had always been there for him, just as he had always been there for her. They relied on each other…and right now, he was letting Bastila down. He was distancing himself from her, pushing her away. He was doing her a great injustice, and she did not deserve it.
He stood and grabbed his shirt, then proceeded to throw it around his shoulders, not bothering to close up the front.
As he left, he glanced at the clock. Three in the morning. Well, it was better than nothing. At least everyone else was asleep.
On silent feet, Revan slipped into the hallway, heading for Bastila’s dormitory. When he found the right door, he knocked. He waited for a moment…but there was no sound, so he entered a code and opened the door, creeping inside and closing the door behind him.
The room was dark, as was everything else at this time of night. He looked over to the bed, and he smiled as he saw Bastila’s form laying there. He knelt at her bedside.
She was so peaceful and beautiful when she slept…he couldn’t take his eyes from her face. As he watched, she shifted slightly, and a loose strand of hair fell across her face. Unable to help himself, he brushed it away. He started as she shifted again, mumbling “Revan…”
A moment later, her eyes fluttered open.
“Revan!” she said, surprise written across her face. She sat up, startled.
“Shhh…” he pressed a finger against his lips. “It is late, the others are still sleeping.” he said quietly. Revan stood, walking away for a moment. Then, with his back to her, he said, “Look…Bastila…I’m sorry. I lost control of myself back there. I…I was weak and gave in to my rage. You didn’t deserve that.” he turned back to her. “I’m sorry.”
“Revan…” she said slowly. Standing, Bastila crossed the room to where he stood. For a moment, they just stood there, looking into each others eyes. Then, Bastila collapsed into Revan’s arms, tears streaming from her eyes. “I was so afraid…I was afraid I had lost you…” she said between sobs.
Revan wrapped his arms around her tightly, holding her close, as much for his comfort as for hers.
Her hands rested on his bare chest, her tears falling onto his tanned, muscled skin.
He held her close, stroking and twirling her hair. “It’s alright…it won’t happen again…I promise…” he whispered. He breathed in the intoxicating scent of her hair and flesh, reveling in her touch, and enjoying the warm feeling that spread through his entire body. He kissed her forehead, then lay his head on hers. Neither of them knew how long they stood there, and frankly, neither cared.

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 RC-1162
10-01-2005, 1:10 PM
#78
great addition! though i never got to the part where revan and bastila kiss on the ebon hawk. gotta play it again. keep it up.
 ForceFightWMe12
10-01-2005, 1:19 PM
#79
Really? Well, in case you hadn't figured it out already, that's at the part where you have (pretty much) the last convo with Bastila before she goes DS. And if you follow exactly what Revan said when he said it, then you should get it. Perhaps I should've put that part of the chapter in a spoiler...oops. Well then it would look funky...I dunno....
 RC-1162
10-01-2005, 1:25 PM
#80
do they really kiss? or is it another one of those blackout things?
 Hallucination
10-01-2005, 1:41 PM
#81
Its a black out. But seriously Forcefight, do they onl kiss or aren't they supposed to go farther :naughty:. Great story!
 ForceFightWMe12
10-01-2005, 2:04 PM
#82
LOL!!! Well, from what I could see, it was only a short time, so I think that it stayed a kiss...maybe...but hey, my story's PG-13 at worst, so...heheh. Yeah, its a stupid black out. I despise Bioware for that. Just let 'em kiss, damn it.
 MdKnightR
10-01-2005, 2:45 PM
#83
Another great chapter! Suggestion...now that the relationship has gone through a few stages (reunion, strife, and resolution), you should focus more on the main plot of the story. The romance shouldn't overshadow the quest.
 Snafu7
10-01-2005, 2:50 PM
#84
Great Chapter ForceFightWMe

Another great chapter! Suggestion...now that the relationship has gone through a few stages (reunion, strife, and resolution), you should focus more on the main plot of the story. The romance shouldn't overshadow the quest.

Agree 100%
 ForceFightWMe12
10-01-2005, 2:50 PM
#85
I know, I know, I'm getting to it, keep your shirt on...lol :D

I was actually just thinking that myself. Now that things have been resolved, its time we move on...
 MdKnightR
10-01-2005, 3:24 PM
#86
I have been thinking about printing out your chapters and taking them to a friend of mine who is an English teacher just to see what she has to say about your writing skills. Personally, I believe she will be blown away when I tell her that you aren't even in high school yet. Do you mind if I do this?
 ForceFightWMe12
10-01-2005, 3:30 PM
#87
Sure, go ahead. I'm actually surprised that you would want to do this. I guess its safe to say I'm honored :D.
 RC-1162
10-02-2005, 3:00 AM
#88
actually, my english teacher thinks very, very, very highly of my writing skills. ive told her that ive written two fanfics on the net, but im sure if she thinks mine is great, then she'll think that you must be from one of the planets you portray in your story :D
Bioware must not have been able to extend their lips or something. the graphics in the game are not entirely the best. if you play a female with a ponytail, youll see that in the star map dreams, when she tosses around before the dreams, the ponytail comes jiggling in and out of the pillow.
 ForceFightWMe12
10-02-2005, 10:23 AM
#89
Lol, well yeah but the graphics are some of the best of their kind I've seen. At least they like blink and their mouths move relativly with their words and they move their arms and shift feet and stuff. I really don't care about the graphics, just show the little kissy kissy already :-*

Actually my Lit teacher knows that I write fanfics online too...she just doesn't know about this fanfic...eheheh...
 Hallucination
10-03-2005, 12:40 AM
#90
You guys get all the good teachers, mine make me diagram sentences and identify verbs! Great work, post the next chapter soon, and tell us when your getting published! And thanks to your hard work I've been inspired to get back to my little fic on the weekends, mind if I use a few events from your fic to influence mine?
 MdKnightR
10-03-2005, 1:31 AM
#91
I've been inspired to get back to my little fic on the weekends, mind if I use a few events from your fic to influence mine?

You know, I have been influenced as well, but I am no writer. I think I may start a new painting based on the scene of Bastila with Revan in the library. Have him looking out the window with his back to the viewer so that all you see is his silhouette. Maybe have Bastilla in the extreme foreground so that all you see of her is the edge of her thigh and a hand holding a datapad. What do you think?
 RC-1162
10-03-2005, 8:09 AM
#92
that sounds cool, but i think it would be better if both of them were silhouetted and it portrayed baatila trying to calm an angry revan down. well thats my opinion. do what you think is best.

Actually my Lit teacher knows that I write fanfics online too...she just doesn't know about this fanfic...eheheh...

why, does she object to kissy?
 ForceFightWMe12
10-03-2005, 11:33 AM
#93
Wow, I had no idea that I had such an effect on people...well, my writting anyway. Well, sure, Hallucination, you can borrow some of the events...just please, don't copy. Now that might sound kinda contradictory, but I think you get what I mean. And getting published? Sorry, but I think that that may be going a little too far too soon....
Both of those ideas sound cool. Well, do what you wish, its fine with me. I would just be curious if you would be able to get it on the computer so that I could see it :D
Well...my Lit teacher doesn't know about this one because...well...she's more of a reader rather than a gamer. So she wouldn't understand anything even if she did read it. She isn't exactly nuts about Star Wars either...heheh...but I've got other fanfiction based on books like Eragon that she knows about...I think she actually might have read one, I dunno...

(Oh and Hallucination, I feel your pain. We had to diagram sentences one time and I think I failed the test...hehe, oops...)

Well, thanks everyone, and I'm working on the next chapter....
 MdKnightR
10-03-2005, 3:09 PM
#94
Well, if I do paint that picture, I can always take a shot with a digital camera and post it. I have a large piece of Masonite that has been sitting empty for awhile, so that may be what I'll paint it on.
 RC-1162
10-03-2005, 4:35 PM
#95
Wouldnt it be better on canvas? maybe u can start a new museum of star wars paintings :D

And getting published? Sorry, but I think that that may be going a little too far too soon....

actually, im sure of 1 thing, if u get this story published, youll make the guinness book for youngest writer to earn title of Best Writer in The Country(or World)
 ForceFightWMe12
10-03-2005, 8:16 PM
#96
Actually, getting this story published would be a bit of an impossibility since they actually are making KotOR III, so...

And MdKnight, that would be great!
 MdKnightR
10-04-2005, 4:20 AM
#97
Wouldnt it be better on canvas?

Nah. Canvas is good for some things, but I prefer to work on a rigid surface. It allows me to get better detail.
 Renegade Angel
10-04-2005, 10:20 PM
#98
You win....

A GIANT COOKIE! WOOHOO!

This story is awsome, keep it comin'!
 ForceFightWMe12
10-05-2005, 12:36 AM
#99
Whou-hou!! Go me, go me, I get a cookie, I get a cookie! Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I should have the next chapter up soon...

As for the whole canvas thing, I haven't a clue. I think I might be better off with a pen and paper than a paintbrush and canvas or whatever. Or a keyboard and computer for that matter. I'm not really an artsy person...
 RC-1162
10-05-2005, 8:08 AM
#100
hey, what about me? dont i get at least 1/4 of a cookie :crybaby: youre a mean mean man

:D j/k

well, im kinda semi artsy and i might think of drwing a cover page for this story if it was ever published :D
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