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 Klia
09-17-2005, 10:11 AM
#701
Heheh... wow. He must've been the [butt] of every joke!

HAHA. NYAAAh.


Seriously I was laughing my ass off when I read this. So cheesy and yet so true.

Thanks Zetz Darke, I read a few of your fics and left a review on your poem. Very nice, keeps TNBC spirit.

I'll write, and I'll wait for the colored version of Sasha.
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 10:16 AM
#702
Your ASS, you say?

Okay. I'm stopping.

Can't wait for the pic!
 Agent_G.C.Zyon
09-17-2005, 11:21 AM
#703
I updated my fic! Hope you guys get to read it!


my brain fried itself again, which one was your fic? can i have a link? [if its not on the thorney towers site]
 KingCheez
09-17-2005, 11:26 AM
#704
 Agent_G.C.Zyon
09-17-2005, 11:57 AM
#705
::has read the story on link:: o f***ing gawd.... i think i lost IQ piont READING it i have to go somewhere - anywhere - else...
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 12:05 PM
#706
::has read the story on link:: o f***ing gawd.... i think i lost IQ piont READING it i have to go somewhere - anywhere - else...
What? You didn't like it? Its fantastic!
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 12:06 PM
#707
YOU LIED TO ME!!! T.T WHYYYYyyyy?!

Sigh...at least I still have my coffee...
I love you, too! Just don't tell Psychoporn. I don't want her to hit me again. D:
 shinzuku
09-17-2005, 1:50 PM
#708
I updated my fic! Hope you guys get to read it!


question- Is the fic on fanart-central because if it is I can't find it.


never mind i found it
 KingCheez
09-17-2005, 1:58 PM
#709
n00b tumbler has been added to my story
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 2:20 PM
#710
And what incredible hilarity it is.

54+ experience points for KingCheez. You have been upgraded to Spammy Warrior level 32.
 Zetz Darke
09-17-2005, 2:31 PM
#711
I love you, too! Just don't tell Psychoporn. I don't want her to hit me again. D:

Yay.

Sashas being incooperative...so it'll be a little while longer. He's making my head ache...and the final pic may suck a little...yea...
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 2:33 PM
#712
Pe-shaw. Its not going to suck. Unless I say it does. Which it wont. Or something.
 Klia
09-17-2005, 4:06 PM
#713
I wouldn't hit you. Just lightly tap you on the head...hard.



About this Boyd fic I am about to share. I believe that he was already paranoid before he got fired as it is "fired again". Obviously he has a bad track. But I think he really got into his job and that was his life. However when his boss fired him he burnt down the building mostly out of revenge. I think he convinced himself that he had been doing it for the good of mankind, as he wouldn't be put into an asylum if it were just an act of crime.

In the asylum he becomes even more delusional and until Oleander gives him back a job and an objective. Then he has something to hang onto and in his sane side 'redeem' himself.

All right here goes nothing.

It was hard work being a guard. Especially on the late shift where one had to be more careful leaning back in their chair since it would be harder to avoid the splinters. And when a splinter entered your skin… well it’s better not to describe what could happen.

Boyd knew this and worked around it as best as he could.

Whistling a generic tune, he waved nonchalantly at the camera beaming a slightly goofy smile.

This time he couldn’t help being this contented. He had the advantage on his side. Usually the cameras worked against him and he would have to skirt such things as banks and malls where Their eyes were searching for him through the black boxes.

These cameras gave him sight of the whole store. The devices that They used were now his.

With a slight sigh he leaned back, allowing the chair to clack against the glaring ground. If only his boss would understand. Would understand why it was necessary to target that man who always stopped in the women’s section. He had been talking to the clothes. Boyd had found him last week when he had been hiding in the lingerie section.

And then there was the young girl who screamed when she didn’t get her way. She was a recruiter or spy, he was sure. This problem had been dealt with a few days ago when she had almost exposed his camera room. Fortunately, he had seen through her little scheme and had informed the rest of the store over the intercom.

It was a strange gift he had; the ability to see through people’s costumes. Those happy, happy costumes.

Like this and many other things he tried to share with his boss, they were dismissed. Obviously the man was strange in the head, maybe a bit delusional.

Still he really did love this job despite the hardships he had to endure. After all it was ‘all in a day’s work’. Perhaps without it he wouldn’t be so perceptive of what was really happening. And best of all he could convince the few sane ones that he was right about the world. Unlike his other jobs. Those jobs dealt with Them and that had been unproductive and restricting with their camera’s, spies, and supposed “normalness.”

Boyd would have hung his hat on the peg nailed into the wall. It was common courtesy to do so when one’s shift was over but that would mean he would be unprotected on his way home. So like every night he went out in full attire.

There was a time when he had done such common courtesies but he hadn’t known the truth. Now it was much better.
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 4:08 PM
#714
Holy crap. That was brilliant. How long did it take you?

+12 Nobel Reese's Prizes!
 Zetz Darke
09-17-2005, 6:06 PM
#715
Yea, that was great, Klia. Excellent work!!!
 Smon
09-17-2005, 7:26 PM
#716
Most Excellent Fic Klia!
 Klia
09-17-2005, 8:24 PM
#717
Holy crap. That was brilliant. How long did it take you?

+12 Nobel Reese's Prizes!

10 minutes to write 5 to type.

Thank you all. You all are so supportive it really make me smile.

[qoute]Yea, that was great, Klia. Excellent work!!![/quote]

Most Excellent Fic Klia!

Mwahaha! I would sig these if I wasn't so amused by Oleander.

Oleander> Klia's vanity.

Watch me slowly loose interest in this fic and leave it to rot like most of my other things.

I've already dumped the continuation of Psychonauts and the Fred fic I was working on. However Boyd is fun to write about (this isn't me gloating this is me reflecting on how I have a short term memory muse)

I need to change my icon once again.
 Smon
09-17-2005, 8:28 PM
#718
Well thats... wait... I sense something.... wrong.... *guns down a madman about to make a Homestar/PsychoNauts fic* That'll teach ya to analyze Strong Bad's insecurities!
 chipmunkrfuzzy
09-17-2005, 8:35 PM
#719
my brain fried itself again, which one was your fic? can i have a link? [if its not on the thorney towers site]

Here it is though I'm seriously considering scraping the whole prologue all together...

http://www.fanart-central.net/stories.php?sid=20327)

I'm also planning to write a sort of one shot sasha fic while taking a break from my actual fanfic. It sorta deals on his feelings about his research between another feeling.... what do myou guys think
 KingCheez
09-17-2005, 9:06 PM
#720
AWESOME, OPERATION: ASYLUM IS UP!
 Klia
09-17-2005, 9:25 PM
#721
Well thats... wait... I sense something.... wrong.... *guns down a madman about to make a Homestar/PsychoNauts fic* That'll teach ya to analyze Strong Bad's insecurities!

Now that would be something I have never seen before.

AWESOME, OPERATION: ASYLUM IS UP!

Hmm?
 KingCheez
09-17-2005, 9:30 PM
#722
Operation: Asylum is in my crazy l33t circus topic...and here's the prologue to a story mostly about Dogen!

Dogen was all alone on the street; naturally, he was supposed to be somewhere. But he had grown up now, and

for once he wanted to be left alone. He wore not his old outfit from Whispering Rock, but instead a new one.

A black-and-white striped cloak, a long scarf, tails trailing from it both white and black, a red glove and a

black one, black baggy pants, and two cold white shoes.

The Psychonauts wanted to employ him, but he was almost happy living on the street eating garbage and dog

food. All his friends had left him. As he sat and shivered, covering himself with a box, he saw a familiar

figure-big red goggles, a green warm-weather sweater, a brown jacket, a cool helmet and a flat face.

He looked up at him, and the figure looked down at him, and smirked. "Dogen, buddy! Where have you been?

Every Psychonaut, and all the other kids back from Whispering Rock have been searching for you these whole

last five years!"

Dogen frowned, and looked away. Just as Raz's voice had changed, so had Dogen's- to a much deeper, much

angrier and raspy voice. "No. Nobody was looking for me. Ever since ten years ago I ran away from you, the

Psychonauts, my family."

Raz looked down to Dogen and smirked. "But the Psychonauts need you." He grabbed Dogen's hand, and lifted

him up. "You might wanna follow me, for a nice surprise." Dogen followed him reluctantly, just as he had

through the mines - but it seemed Raz always seemed to lead him to joy, to safety. There stood all his friends,

all grown up. All of them but Bobby Zilch. Even Benny had shown up, due to several threats from Mikhail and

Maloof, who were now mercenaries for any cause needing protection. J.T. smirked at him, wearing a police

badge and a uniform, while Phoebe and Quentin stood next to their band's van. Vernon looked barely any

different, and was asking if anyone wanted his signed books. Elton wore the outfit of a marine bioligist, next

to Milka Phage, who wore a detective's clothing. The gang was all there.

"We've all succeeded," came a bright voice from the ever-young Elka Doom, now a fashion model. "How about

you?" Dogen turned away, and sighed. He felt an arm on his shoulder, that of Lili, and turned around. He

shoved her away from him. "I'm a homeless jerk!" he shouted, sobbing. "I don't have a family, I don't have a

job-I have nothing! Nothing!" He ran, and ran. Raz stopped him, with a telekinetic wall. "No, Dogen, come

back. We have a request."

Dogen trudged towards Raz, and growled. "What?"

"Well," replied Raz, "the Psychonauts have a big problem - and you're the only one with the mental ability to

handle it."

Dogen looked down, as if just to say "no."

"It's a mission, and Lili and I will come with. An insane Psycho-Rebel is loose upon the innocents, and we need

your help."

Dogen looked up. "Real Psychonauts work.

He smirked.

"Count me in."
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 10:01 PM
#723
I'm not sure if the description of Dogen's clothes was supposed to make me snort, but it did.
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 10:03 PM
#724
10 minutes to write 5 to type.

Thank you all. You all are so supportive it really make me smile.

[qoute]Yea, that was great, Klia. Excellent work!!!



Mwahaha! I would sig these if I wasn't so amused by Oleander.

Oleander> Klia's vanity.

Watch me slowly loose interest in this fic and leave it to rot like most of my other things.

I've already dumped the continuation of Psychonauts and the Fred fic I was working on. However Boyd is fun to write about (this isn't me gloating this is me reflecting on how I have a short term memory muse)

I need to change my icon once again.

Ignore them, Psychoporn. They are jealous of my siggitude...
And I see I've started some awesome thing > thing trend here.
And thank you, Smon. That was pretty darn close, and I would have exploded.
 Klia
09-17-2005, 10:12 PM
#725
Mwahaha! I would sig these if I wasn't so amused by Oleander.

Oleander> Klia's vanity.

Watch me slowly loose interest in this fic and leave it to rot like most of my other things.

I've already dumped the continuation of Psychonauts and the Fred fic I was working on. However Boyd is fun to write about (this isn't me gloating this is me reflecting on how I have a short term memory muse)

I need to change my icon once again.

Ignore them, Psychoporn. They are jealous of my siggitude...
And I see I've started some awesome thing > thing trend here.
And thank you, Smon. That was pretty darn close, and I would have exploded.

This > thing is too addictive.

The fanfiction is interesting. I mean Psychonauts grown up? Cool! However you did skimp a bit over how they grew up. If you improve upon that it would work a lot better.

Great job anyway!
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 10:13 PM
#726
Gothic Dogen > Half eaten Dogen.

(Oh crap. I realised that Dogen is raging against the machine in this one.)
 KingCheez
09-17-2005, 10:19 PM
#727
Gothic Dogen > Half eaten Dogen.

(Oh crap. I realised that Dogen is raging against the machine in this one.)

Actually he's just kind of hoboing against the machine
 Purple Squid
09-17-2005, 10:22 PM
#728
Oh. Hobos are cool. I mean, my dad hobod the other day...

Dad-*chugs wine* HEY COPPERS!
Cops-WTF?
Dad- *waves*
Cops- ...*wave back*
Dad- MOONSHINE! *hits gas pedal hard*
Cops- THOSE/THAT DUKE BOY(S)!!!
 Smon
09-17-2005, 11:50 PM
#729
This > thing is too addictive.

The fanfiction is interesting. I mean Psychonauts grown up? Cool! However you did skimp a bit over how they grew up. If you improve upon that it would work a lot better.

Great job anyway!

http://www.squidbunnies.com/projects/psychonauts/raz.jpg)

Awesome pic of an older Raz, on the subject of grown up psychonauts I just had to share this pic, from the creators of Most Excellent Comic Psychonauts.
 Agent-Sarah
09-18-2005, 1:38 AM
#730
Here it is though I'm seriously considering scraping the whole prologue all together...

http://www.fanart-central.net/stories.php?sid=20327)

I'm also planning to write a sort of one shot sasha fic while taking a break from my actual fanfic. It sorta deals on his feelings about his research between another feeling.... what do myou guys think
I like it.
 Klia
09-18-2005, 8:18 AM
#731
http://www.squidbunnies.com/projects/psychonauts/raz.jpg)

Awesome pic of an older Raz, on the subject of grown up psychonauts I just had to share this pic, from the creators of Most Excellent Comic Psychonauts.

Ahh! I only read the comic and was too lazy to click on that link. I don't know why...

I'm also planning to write a sort of one shot sasha fic while taking a break from my actual fanfic. It sorta deals on his feelings about his research between another feeling.... what do myou guys think

I think that's great. Keep on writing i like to read!
 Zetz Darke
09-18-2005, 8:21 AM
#732
http://www.squidbunnies.com/projects/psychonauts/raz.jpg)

Awesome pic of an older Raz, on the subject of grown up psychonauts I just had to share this pic, from the creators of Most Excellent Comic Psychonauts.

I love that design of Raz. It's really neat.
 Klia
09-18-2005, 8:25 AM
#733
What I really love about it best is that it keeps Raz the same. Instead of making him look like a super model they made him look like his younger self just a bit taller.
 Smon
09-18-2005, 8:31 AM
#734
Plus they put him in the PsychoNauts uniform without making him look all... jumpsuit-y.
 Zetz Darke
09-18-2005, 8:32 AM
#735
Haha, yea. As I have said many times before...i wish they were still writing that comic. :(
 Klia
09-18-2005, 8:33 AM
#736
Plus they put him in the PsychoNauts uniform without making him look all... jumpsuit-y.

Aww but it's not green!
 Smon
09-18-2005, 8:36 AM
#737
Haha, yea. As I have said many times before...i wish they were still writing that comic. :(

If I can get the money I wanna make a claymation based on their incomplete story For Arts Sake! I imagine it would look quite badass, seeing as reviewers commonly refer to the game's artstyle as "Nightmare Before Christmas-y" so clay seems the right way to go.

....

Donate to my PayPal, gsmon13@hotmail.com and it may be done sooner then you think.

Please, I won't spend it on DF swag. I promise. *crosses lungs*
 Zetz Darke
09-18-2005, 8:48 AM
#738
O.O

Wow...Umm...Fanfiction.net added the category guys...if your still interested in it.
 Purple Squid
09-18-2005, 8:48 AM
#739
Argh. Its like TNBC, but like, 100 times cooler.

...Jack was pretty sweet, though. French!Oogie Boogie was great sounding.
 Purple Squid
09-18-2005, 8:49 AM
#740
O.O

Wow...Umm...Fanfiction.net added the category guys...if your still interested in it.
Ha! Fat chance. I'll go look anyways... any fics in it yet?
 Klia
09-18-2005, 8:49 AM
#741
If I can get the money I wanna make a claymation based on their incomplete story For Arts Sake! I imagine it would look quite badass, seeing as reviewers commonly refer to the game's artstyle as "Nightmare Before Christmas-y" so clay seems the right way to go.

....

Donate to my PayPal, gsmon13@hotmail.com and it may be done sooner then you think.

Please, I won't spend it on DF swag. I promise. *crosses lungs*

I can trust your word. However TNBC style I find is completly different as it would be black and white, items would be swirly and skinny.

It sure as hell has similarities. Do I think it would work in Claymation? Yes. I just need to be a nitpicky bitch when disscussing movies, tvs, and video games.

I'll go check out the e-mail and see how much I can spend.
 Zetz Darke
09-18-2005, 8:52 AM
#742
Ha! Fat chance. I'll go look anyways... any fics in it yet?

Turmoils is in there. And mine will be soon.
 Klia
09-18-2005, 8:53 AM
#743
Ha! Fat chance. I'll go look anyways... any fics in it yet?

OMG! HOLY ****!

I'm going to upload my Boyd fic now. My very very short Boyd fic.
 Smon
09-18-2005, 8:53 AM
#744
Ty, anyway I think it would, however astral projection would be a little tough since I'd have to do it without armatures, however I may auction the clay models on eBay. (but I'm keeping the Sasha one!)
 Klia
09-18-2005, 9:08 AM
#745
I feel rude. Sorry for being nitpicky Smon. All the same I really think that the clay would work and it would be interesting. Sort of like the Futurama doll comic that was very amusing.

I uploaded Boyd. It doesn't make much of a difference since some of you have read it.

Ty, anyway I think it would, however astral projection would be a little tough since I'd have to do it without armatures, however I may auction the clay models on eBay. (but I'm keeping the Sasha one!)

I would buy one! I have 10 bucks. Maybe?

To get past the astral projections you could make them out of felt.
 Smon
09-18-2005, 9:14 AM
#746
Right right... ah well, But yeah after I get everything set up and filmed (maybe before filming make a new one using the funds I made selling the old one) I'll put the figures (except Sasha) up on eBay for afew bucks above how much it cost me to make it. (gotta make some money) Complete with a full working armature and interchangable hands and expressions.
 Zetz Darke
09-18-2005, 9:16 AM
#747
OMG! HOLY ****!

I'm going to upload my Boyd fic now. My very very short Boyd fic.

Haha, I've already uploaded mine. As soon as urs shows up I'll give you a review.
 Purple Squid
09-18-2005, 9:19 AM
#748
If I can get the money I wanna make a claymation based on their incomplete story For Arts Sake! I imagine it would look quite badass, seeing as reviewers commonly refer to the game's artstyle as "Nightmare Before Christmas-y" so clay seems the right way to go.

....

Donate to my PayPal, gsmon13@hotmail.com and it may be done sooner then you think.

Please, I won't spend it on DF swag. I promise. *crosses lungs*
I do not know about this 'money' of which you speak.

Would be cool to have it, though... the claymation. Not the money.
 Purple Squid
09-18-2005, 9:19 AM
#749
Right right... ah well, But yeah after I get everything set up and filmed (maybe before filming make a new one using the funds I made selling the old one) I'll put the figures (except Sasha) up on eBay for afew bucks above how much it cost me to make it. (gotta make some money) Complete with a full working armature and interchangable hands and expressions.
WOOOOAH! I want Milla. Save me Milla!
 Smon
09-18-2005, 9:23 AM
#750
Alright, alright. *writes down Milla-Purple Squid* Oh by the way do you want Normal Milla or Goth Poetry Milla? (an art change within Andrea Heighton's mind)
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