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JasraLantill

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Posted in: [No Title Yet]
  JasraLantill
08-11-2006, 4:27 PM
#5
Ok, since you're looking for feedback, I'll give you some. :) Overall, it's pretty good for an introductory chapter to...whatever you're eventually going to entitle it. You use a lot of description, your transitions are smooth, and it flows nicely....  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIN]Master's Night Out
 JasraLantill
08-10-2006, 9:29 PM
#1
Master Minor stifled a yawn as he watched his Padawan, Rogget, deflect the bolts from the training droid with his training saber. Rogget wasn’t bad for a young Padawan in his first saber training session. He hadn’t yet missed deflecting a single...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-10-2006, 3:29 PM
#51
"Full Flavoured Fizzy Force Fuzz, or Diet Fizzy Force Fuzz?" Slovva asked Cae, as he levitated down the corridor with her riding on his back as if he were a Bantha. "Because that Diet Fuzz gives me a headache. And would you mind terrib...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 9:07 PM
#46
Slovva's eyes widened in shocked horror. "Pie? You mean, they are already serving dessert?" He picked up the pace, using Force speed to whiz through the corridors on a beeline for the lunchroom counter. Unfortunately, because his Force was...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 6:24 PM
#44
Slovva nodded. "Yes. My favourite power. Force Slime." He took up the wriggling slimey ball of Force, then shoved it in his mouth. "Mmm-ah-mmm," he mumbled as his tongue wrestled with the slime oozing ball of Force. Then with a m...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 5:01 PM
#42
Slovva came to a sudden sliding stop in the corridor just outside the lunchroom. (Well? He was ungulating quick quickly for once...) His voice reverberated through the entire Jedi Temple (and quite possibly to even the suburbs of Coruscant City out...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 3:43 PM
#40
"Humongous," Slovva called over his...erm, shoulder (does a Hutt have shoulders?). "The word is humongous. Gross is just too small to describe a Hutt like me!" He continued calling for his lost Force. "He-re, Forcey...come on...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 2:10 PM
#38
Slovva took in a deep breath. "Ah...." he sighed reminiscently. "Yelt dung. Brings back fond memories of home...." He grinned widely (well, considering that his mouth was very wide he couldn't help but grin that way.) "Thanks...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 1:38 PM
#35
"Ha ha ha ha," Slovva laughed, the deep throated laugh like only a Hutt can manage, as the thick globs of Hutt slobber oozed off of Egrog's head and drizzled to the floor from the ends of his hair. "You look like a drowned Ewok!"...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 12:15 PM
#31
"No," Slovva the Jedi Hutt replied to the floating upside down girl as he stopped for a breather, because it was a long way to the lunchroom and he was tired. (Without being able to use the Force, since he had lost his, it was hard to keep...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-08-2006, 2:58 PM
#28
"You think I look funny upside down?" Slovva let out a low, hearty chuckle and he continued hrumphing down the corridor like a seal. "Then you should see me when I'm skipping rope in the gym." His brow raised thoughtfully. "S...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-08-2006, 8:17 AM
#26
"I'm not deranged!" Slovva protested, as he slithered and hrumphed his way to the lunchroom. "I'm just...judgmentally challenged." A sudden but loud, low rumble emanated from his tummy (which was half of his body, so it was pretty...  [Read More]
Posted in: Temple Troubles
  JasraLantill
08-08-2006, 7:51 AM
#24
"Taco? Meatball? Did I hear someone mention food?" Slovva the Hutt, the only Hutt Jedi in the Temple, and the only Jedi who had been a Padawan for more years than anyone could remember in living memory, slithered into view (mainly because s...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie Fic] Rule Number One
  JasraLantill
08-07-2006, 5:43 PM
#7
Love the idea of Rule Number One! And you did a great job depicting a frustrated Bastila. Being the perfectionist that she is, I can see how she would stay searching for her lightsaber inside the pod, instead of just getting the heck out of there whi...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Shortie Fic] Ease of Darkness
  JasraLantill
08-08-2006, 8:35 AM
#10
Finally got around to reading this. Great storytelling! You really capture Juhani's frustration well. And I loved the 'cub' reference. Cute!...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC]Nic and Jana: A Mercenary's Tale
  JasraLantill
08-08-2006, 2:26 PM
#24
This is truly a wonderful action-packed fic--solid storyline, great action scenes, plenty of humour and believable dialogue. Well done to you and WildJedi for making your original characters (especially the stars of the show, Nic and Jana) really com...  [Read More]
Posted in: Mercenary Crew: Age of the Empire: Discussion and Recruitment thread
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 12:19 PM
#241
So, are we waiting for Stingerhs again?...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  JasraLantill
08-09-2006, 4:31 AM
#182
what? you made a deal with each other? :p but yeah, RP, we're all anxious to see the next chapter. LOL! No, no deal was made, although now that I re-read my post I can see how you thought that, RC. Sorry, was just trying to prompt RP to post again a...  [Read More]
Posted in: [Fic] The crystal of life.
  JasraLantill
08-08-2006, 6:11 PM
#180
Ok, RP, I took a long break from my fic but finally posted. Are you ready to post the next chapter to yours? :)...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  JasraLantill
08-15-2006, 6:37 AM
#120
((Glad to hear you're writing again, RP! Next chapter should be up within an hour or so. Just doing some final edits. I'm not very good at writing 'battle/action' scenes, so it's taking a while. Maybe you can give me some pointers? -------edit------...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  JasraLantill
08-14-2006, 4:00 PM
#117
Rade was lying in his bunk in the cargo hold, hands folded behind his head, staring at the ceiling, when the door opened and Bastila came in. “Carth said we’ll coming out of hyperspace soon,” she said as she approached him. “Should be landin...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  JasraLantill
08-13-2006, 9:35 PM
#115
A large, colourful hologram of exploding fireworks suddenly spurted from the centre console, followed by loud and cheery, but flamboyantly cheesy, music and a computer generated blue-hued Twi’Lek announcer dressed in a sparkly sequin suit who spoke...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  JasraLantill
08-13-2006, 8:48 PM
#114
“But how?” Bastila asked. “I mean, he might have tracked where we went, but he couldn’t possibly know about the Gem having been moved from Degos V.” “Oh, he knows.” Kye pulled out a datapad from her inside jacket pocket. “I wasn’t...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  JasraLantill
08-13-2006, 8:38 PM
#113
“That day was a dark day, Ithra,” Kye said after a moment, breaking the heavy silence that had suddenly descended on the group. “Many died, and the blame is entirely mine. But it’s in the past. No one can change it.” “No, but you can hel...  [Read More]
Posted in: [FIC] Hidden Shades of Grey
  JasraLantill
08-11-2006, 3:14 PM
#111
Ithra let out a doleful sigh, as she remembered the day her sister Kye took the Gem from Jantessa. In the early morning hours on the fifth day after the arrival of the Jedi Revan, while Ithra and the rest of the Keeper Novices were gathering in the...  [Read More]
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