JediMaster12

Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part III: Last Stand of the Republic

01-11-2007, 5:43 PM
#8

Greea turned towards her young apprentice. She gave a smile and replied, "Nothing. Master Kaltas will be returning soon."... [Read More]

Posted in: Star Wars: The Sith Resurrection Part III: Last Stand of the Republic

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 2:07 PM
#6

"Senator Rasa, thank you for helping my brother," Alkйa spoke after the senator had given orders to send a ship to help Master Komad. Not used to giving kindness since nearly four years ago, she was rusty in terms of gratitude. That wasn't... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIN] Jolee's Gizka

JediMaster12

01-10-2007, 6:32 PM
#2

Jolee’s Gizka Jolee was grumpy. It had been a long a tiring day running around the desert and the sleepy town of Anchorhead looking for the bloody Star Maps. He was glad to just have a nice long shower and retire to his favorite, and personal terri... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIN] Jolee's Gizka

JediMaster12

01-10-2007, 6:30 PM
#1

A one shot dealing with a semi aged old Jedi and his first pet-gizka! All comments can be posted here (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?p=2245766#post2245766)... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIN] Asking for Forgiveness

JediMaster12

01-10-2007, 3:50 PM
#2

Asking for Forgiveness I know you feel the pain inside And in your heart your thoughts divide You seek to know a darkened truth Where lies an existent root Of hurtful lies and painful words That once flew away with graceful birds I met you and you... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIN] Asking for Forgiveness

JediMaster12

01-10-2007, 3:48 PM
#1

A poem written after the Leviathan by Revan asking Carth to forgive. All comments can be posted here (http://lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=174512)... [Read More]

Posted in: Mysterious Box ( Spoilers )

JediMaster12

01-12-2007, 1:01 PM
#15

I smell a challenge for ambitious modders. ED's suggestion is a good one. It would give more of a finish to the mysterious box.... [Read More]

Posted in: Mysterious Box ( Spoilers )

JediMaster12

01-10-2007, 2:45 PM
#8

I've never been trapped and have been tempted to try it once but I forget to. Just goes to show you how well the gameplay is imprinted in my brain. I can't even plat DS because it's not in my nature. :xp:... [Read More]

Posted in: Ways To Get Your Fic Noticed?

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 1:54 PM
#46

Good point there. To me a good review from mach tells me something about my style. Granted he has had few complaints about my ramblings, I find it invaluable as a writer to me because I know what I need to work on and be a better writer. To get bette... [Read More]

Posted in: [NSW Lyrics]The Twelve gifts of Christmas... after Christmas

JediMaster12

01-12-2007, 1:32 PM
#5

I missed this since I became a ghost in Dec. This is funny and reminds me a bit of Walt Whitman. Nice to see that you have a practical turn about what happens to Christmas gifts. That is why I always ask for socks. Nice job. If you want to continue w... [Read More]

Posted in: [NSW Poetry] Blessings of the Written Word

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 2:42 PM
#52

Beat ya to it Akuma. Here is another one of my poems that I had forgotten. It was inspired by a trip I took on a boat. Night Sea Dreams As I lay upon my bed Upon the pillow I rest my Head I see the clouds part above My Guide comes as the Dove... [Read More]

Posted in: [Shortie Fic] A Box of Lies

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 4:14 PM
#11

No I won't kick you. It is understandable. I turned into a ghost for a month when I went to the mountains last summer for a field school. RC, I didn't realize that Atton was very much like Han. I don't know. Maybe I just like scoundrels that are real... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 5:27 PM
#177

igyman: Think of it this way, he is agitated. His prize catch just got away, he is out in space and he was always annoyed by Keegan's presence anyway. Also you should know that sometimes Avalonians use humor to make light of their problems. You see t... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 2:40 PM
#174

Well yeah Pottsie. It's part of the story. Tatlo will make another appearance because of a bet between him and a certain... scoundrel named Atton Atton gets to see little Morgan As to Darius' surname, I never gave him one because to be honest he is... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 1:40 PM
#172

He is mentioned a few times in previous chapters and I am debating on whether or not to have him in. In this fic I was trying to bring to light characters I touched on in HotG but didn't go into detail. I don't know yet because now I am writing the S... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-10-2007, 6:14 PM
#170

Here is another chapter o ye huddled masses. This is one of those things that leaves a ton of questions and leaves some answered. I do have my disclaimer that parts of the dialogue and scene setting are from Memoirs of a Geisha, a scene that is meani... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 9:08 PM
#169

That was sarcasm in my first lines Pottsie. It is true that I can be a perfectionist at times but only if it is something extremely important to me. I will say this, I am glad that you have enjoyed my fics and have said so. I have heard my family say... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 3:15 PM
#167

Yes I am extreme perfectionist that simply blows a head gasket if it is not exactly right at the right time. I am obessed with perfection. Everything must be perfect of the world will end. Joking aside it's OK Pottsie. I am a bit like Jae and the fi... [Read More]

Posted in: [FIC]Heart of Deception

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 1:32 PM
#165

To answer your question Pottsie, no I did not take this from HotG and stop pestering me about putting it in the archives. I am trying to edit it!!!! I noticed grammar error and continuity issues that I am trying to resolve. The dream sequence is a pr... [Read More]

Posted in: Name Problems- Need Help with a Name? Ask Here

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 8:01 PM
#52

My suggestion is to think like a miltary man. Look at the personality traits of this character. Is he cocky? Is he a maverick? One that I came up with is Tiger but that's simple.... [Read More]

Posted in: Tips to a Good Fanfic!

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 3:25 PM
#54

Thanks for emphasizing my big point Anakin. I love detail in stories. I have beta read and read people fics for the better part of the year and I have come across some people who are confusing as to what a person sees or they are vague and it loses m... [Read More]

Posted in: The Expert Forum

JediMaster12

01-15-2007, 7:43 PM
#128

Interesting comparisons mach. I actually utilized that when I created the Avalonians by using the Orient. It is a good tip to use.... [Read More]

Posted in: Views on Jedi

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 5:40 PM
#220

Again it is point of view. They fought for something that they thought was worth fighting for. It is human nature to believe in something. Maybe on a subconcious level Lucas was trying to portray human nature where we get so worked up in what we beli... [Read More]

Posted in: Views on Jedi

JediMaster12

01-11-2007, 5:09 PM
#218

SilentScope: Love is different from infatuation in that love is deep rooted. I can't tell you because I never have been in love but I can equate infatuation to being a crush. I have been in an out of them, what girl can't. To answer your second sect... [Read More]

Posted in: Views on Jedi

JediMaster12

01-09-2007, 3:47 PM
#213

It goes to emphasize the point that nothing is perfect. There are bound to be flaws in any system. You can't satisfy everybody. It's physically impossible. Love and passion aren't the same thing just like infatuation and love aren't the same thing.... [Read More]

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